Very nice!
Sweet and Lovely end!
Loved whole story dear! its very nice!
Yash and Arjun ki friendship is the best part of the story. Har ek ki life me ek aisa dost hona chahiye jo acche waqut me khushiya baante aur boore waqut me ghum baante! Arjun and Yash kuch aise hi hai so loved their friendship.
Other thing is Sakshi's beauty and innocence. She is such a kind heart person! loving and caring. uss ne sahi waqut pe Arjun ko apna sach bata diya and dheere dheere sab theek ho gaya
Sakshi and Yash's bond is also very well described
and finally my cutiepie, my ARAKSHI! As usual they are lovely and cute! Arakshi ke pyaar pe toh dil aa hi jaata hai! they always make me fall in love with them again and again!
thank you very much for such a beautiful story.
keep writing dear!
thanks for PM
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