FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 73

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

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Originally posted by: MishtyShona

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Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Thank you so much for reading and your lovely message Awesome. Glad to know you found it interesting.. thank you 🤗

You read the whole thing in one go .. I hope it was worth your time.

Kukki and Rishabh have been my favourite characters of the show.. so I always love to explore these two.. :)

@bold.. OMG.. you have no idea how happy this makes me. I always struggle writing Prerna because she was absolutely messed up in the show. And I personaly disliked her, so I badly struggle with her. So hearing this from you is such a huge encouragement. I hope am able to keep it up with future update too..

I am working on the next one. Will update as soon as its done.

Thank you again 🤗

Take care!

I like this prerna who wants to be independent and care about her self respect. Moreover I like the fact that she is guilty about leaving kuki abruptly for her so called lover.

please cont soonish 😊

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Hey meena,

Hello hello Jyoti.. how are you 🤗

Nice to see you after a break.

It goood to be back and interact with you. Hope all is good by your side 🤗

As usual the update was brilliant...

Thank you so much Jyoti.. :)

Prerana was so happy to go to Mumbai and her family noticed it...

Yeah, I made her happy. Pata nahi kab kuch karke she becomes sad again. That's why she has some happt moments..

Veena was more than happy to send her, Suman & Mahesh genuinely supported her. But Shivani spoiled Veena's good vibes with her amazing imagination & story line. Actually she beated you in your own story.

@bold - yeah. Shivani went 10 steps ahead of my thinking. I like it how you said 'she (me) beat me'. It's like Shivani is someone real now 😃. Thanks for your kind words 🤗

( I really want you to show that anurag is safe and wantedly did not turn up and shivani is the first one to find him)

Anurag, is definitely alive somewhere, his frequent mentions by Shivani is keeping him relevant to the story in his absence. In fact, I wrote a loonnngggg Anurag-Prerna confrontation post his comeback way back in March. But I wasn't very happy with that situation so I had chuckef that idea. So right now I have 2-3 scenarios in mind for him. But I will only decide when I reach a state where I feel would be a more impactful return of Anurag. But Shivani finding him sounds interesting. - THANK YOU Let me see if it fits in with other characters. Agar na kar paau to apologise in advance. - NO PROBLEM exactly only if it fits in story

Prerana was so patience she listened fully and then responded & answered them really a good change.

Glad to hear that you liked a patient Prerna. I have made an attempt to show some kind of evolution in the character irrespective of PreRish, I hope you as a reader see some changes in her. Yes or no, please do share as it helps me frame the future updates and try better.. - really want to see a strong prerana with no imaginations/ assumptions/sacrifices and should surely hold her self respect.

MHope she maintains the same patience in Mumbai also.. with Menaka around. listening to her name is enough for her mood to go for a toss..

I have already writted a scene of these two that you'll get to read it in next update (not complete yet). I hope that part addresses this part of your post.. - already eager to read

Kukkie missing her mom. Mr. Bajaj and Prerana are not friends?? Why ?? how does it pop up in her little head.

Kukki size mein chhotu hai but she has been an observant child as she couldn't communicate earlier with everyone. She is sensitive too, she learns from her surroundings and tries making connections. Kabhi kabhi problematic cheeze bhi so soch leti hai like her school wala incident - yes very good in observing some times good/bad.

Ms. Bajaj is so professional. Mr. Mehra can see the miniature Mr. Bajaj in her. Nice moments..

She is. True Bajaj at work 😎

New venture!!! that to News Channel awaiting for the surprises...

I have introduced this for some equations, wish me luck that I can keep it ineresting... but your comment did give me some confidence to ahead with this idea.. thank you.🤗

Aditya and Prerana became good friends..

Yess they are frnds now.. you'll see more in next update..

Ms Acharya always supporting..

Always.. wo aaye hi stoty mein isliye hain..😊 I am glad she did her job well till now in pushing Prerna towards her goals.

Rani Rishab's MOM & Masi also don't know why & what ran between Rani & Basu's ... will wait to unfold this part.

No she doesn't know. She only knows kuch gadbad hai but kya wo bas Rishabh ko pata hai.. no one else is aware of it..

Prerana all set to Leave Mumbai a big battle ahead for her with Menaka, Mr. Bajaj (a tuff nut to crack) and prerana herself (confusing character).lots of stories & emotions will come out from each person i am all set to read.

Ohhh my God.. this is so sweet. You encouraged me so much with your words.. I can promise lots of stories with sub stories .. a lot of suspense.. and twists in future updates.. thank you again.. 🤗

Continue soon...

I am on it. Like I said I have already written a scene on it.

Take care...

You too my friend.. take extra care now.. 🤗

Update please 🤔

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😡 that is still at -20 while personally you have hurt me a lot 😡 here we die worrying for you and you ho ki 😡

Honestly I didn't mean to hurt you.. but I do understand if you felt so.. and I am sorry for that again.. 🙏🏼.. ab do you want to stay angry with me forever?? 😒

Par my question is still unanswered. Why did you disown me in the first place 😒

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

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Thank you thank you thank you so much for continuing this story. I cannot tell you how happy I am to see this update.

I am happy too, that I could make you happy . And thank you for making me do it 🤗

With this update, the picture is more clear. The previous chapter did seem off since there were too many unknown variables that left gaps in the story.

I agree 20A and B must have been a bit off or confusing because as a writer I knew what I was planning to do with next update but you as a reader did not. So I am sure you found gaps. To be honest I think I know what you meant because when I read it after a long gap, I realised certain things took a sudden turn.

Now the plot looks better. Veena's conversation with her children was very necessary and shed light on her thought process.

Glad to know that it makes more sense and I hope I could address most of the issues if not all. Request to address all your concerns in future too, if you find any concern because I am now writing several scenes at one go and they don't belong to a single update. Some of those are from 10 updates from now. So if you feel I lost track somewhere, pleasw let me know. It will be really really helpful.

Uffff, I love Shivani because she will never change. She is like a dose of comedy for me. she is very much needed to goad Prerna to take RB's side and defend him.

Hahaha.. Shivani is entertaining you wo bhi comic way mein.. I like it 😆

I enjoyed the second face off between sisters.

First wala was for Prerna to get a kick so she could push herself in some direction. Whereas second wala was about why Veena agreed, on what grounds did she agree to support her daughter. Shivani's reaction on Prerna moving to Mumbai and where did her other siblings stood. What they thought about Basus and Anurag, prospects of his return etc all unanswered questions were addressed here.

She keeps Anurag alive for Prerna, thereby grounding her, not letting her spread her wings and truly fly. The best part about Shivani is that she is also the voice of hypocritical Sharma's, the Basus and in a way the society as well who are like love cannot happen twice and all that .

You never fail to make me think about my own words in a different context, do you? I mean I may have thought of any angle but Shivani being the voice of the society to maine dur dur tak nahi socha tha. 😊

Once Shivani realizes Prerna has feelings for RB or is falling for RB, she will become junior Mohini Basu and will have some choicest things to say about RB and Pre and I would love to see Prerna shut her up for good.

Ohhh I have scene for that in my mind already 😃.. And I planned to bring this up when Prerna and RB had at least reached to a comfortable level of being friends. But tadaaa.. our Shivani strikes and does some damage for Prerna who did so much to reach there. I am written a gist of it so that I can elaborate it at that time.

Thank you giving a snippet into RB's past, especially his mother. I had been waiting for some information on his past. This mystery is intriguing and I am waiting for Prerna to reach Mumbai and unravel it.

Yeyy.. Unknowingly I ended up giving you something you wanted to read about. What if i say you know a lot more than you think about this angle. 😁 Will open it up in future updates.. I am in process of building a platform to take the story in that direction.😃

Loved RB-Kukki conversation, especially about Prerna being Anu and ADI's friend but not RB's. That child is perceptive and her observation is heartbreaking.

She is.. and you will get to see a lot more of her deep love and her tendency to draw connections with the situations around in regards to her father in future updates.

I am waiting for Prerna to be RB's friend. Though it should come easily to her. She needs to earn that place since she carelessly threw away RB's friendship the first time.

That's the next logical step in their equation :) I hope it's readable, more importatly digestable. If you as a reader feel it to be rushed ot otherwise, please do let me know because sometimes I do get too much while writing.. 😊

Waiting for the next update. Bring it on. Looking forward to RB-Men interactions that will affect Prerna and make her questions her own feelings and relationships. Waiting eagerly for Jealous Prerna.

Work in progress hai.. lets see if it meets your expectations..

Update soon.

Sat/sunday for sure..

Thank you sooo much for this lovely review.. I always look forward to read your views.. and you know that 🤗🤗

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Originally posted by: MishtyShona

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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

nahi chahiye.

Le lo . Le lo. Kaha milta hai itna pyaar