MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 65

Originally posted by: Krithzz

I could imagine Mini's expressions when she was caught🤣 Cute ,naughty and Innocent I liked how Neil understood her feelings and supported her. Bobby is such a creep here.

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chorni pakdi gayi🤣

first i wanted to write about fight but then thought kab tak jhagda karnege dono toh is bar pyar se samjha do🤣

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Obsessed ,Iove thier fights🤣 if given option ..MiNeil Sr or fight I will select fight🤣 intensity, bechaini ,rawness and promixity tension is just 🔥🔥🔥

ye toh hai miniel ki fight matlab aag hi aag☺️🤣

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Good Student Mini Oberoi I am proud of you,

Aww longdrive in dad's car

Bobby chiii

Bobby tu toh gaya You have no idea Neil tera kya haal karega....

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mini neil ki sangat me reh ke seekh rahi hai dheere dheere😆

Bobby bahut pitega🤣

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Bobby 🤢I want both MiNeil to take his class now 🤣 Anjali please give this . Mini's plan was good 🤣 I imagined this . Trying to escape 🤣 those typical MiNeil mannerisms, scene Mini have become very wild now 🤣 poor Neil 🤣but he is enjoying it also and proud 🤣

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bobby ko villain bana diya. another of my badla from cvs🤣

mini kitten wild hoti ja rahi hai aur chor bhi🤣 puri koshish ki bhagne ki but neil babu bhi smart hai...pakad hi liya aakhir🤣

Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil

Nicely written...

Ek moment aisa lga as if , neil ne door break kia ho.

Waiting for update.

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socha tha neil ki entry ka but then laga ki kuch jyada hi over the top ho jayega😆

Originally posted by: Mistress.of.pen

Awesome update...

Loved it...

Eagerly waiting to see Neil's reaction and concern...

Update soon

thanks dear

glad you liked it

Originally posted by: fkhr30

You are getting better with each update. Waiting for the next piece

thanks a lot for appreciation😳

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Is baar mineil ke liye kuch alag 😆

Mineil ka shole sence 😂😂

Neil : mini are oooo mini bags nai leke jaanaaa

Mini : sarkaar bags kyo

Neil : Kya socha tha tune khali haath jaaogiiiiii vo. bhi ek hafte ki trip per. kya tumhe chijo ki. jarurat nahi padegi?

Mini : (khamoshi )

Neil : yaha aao miniii mere pass aao

Mini : jii sarkaar( slowly slowly aate hue a ankhe niche karke)

Neil : tumsa pyaara tumsa koi maasum nai Hai. kya Chij ho tum khud tumhe maalum nai Hai😳😳

Mini : sarkaar tum mujhse naaraj nai ho😔

Neil : Nai bilkul nai

Tum jaa sakti hoo clg trip pe

Mini : Rony ke bina

Neil : Kya laga tumhe me maan jaaunga aasani se

Mini : please sarkaar please

Neil : Thik h

Mini : Shukriyaa sarkaar

Neil : per ajj fir tum party me mat jaana .

Mini : koi party nai h vo to sirf Bahana tha

Neil : tum to din prati din shararti hoti jaa rahi ho saja milegi iski jarur milegi

Mini : me tayaar hoon saja ke liye ☺️

🤣🤣

mazaa hi aa gaya padh ke yaar

teen bar padha maine🤣

my fav part was when neil breaks into a song tumsa koi pyara koi masum nahi hai...oh God!🤣🤣

kaha tha abhi tak ye talent? hume kyu durr rakha isse😆

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Bobby ke liye

Bahut karliya do or do paanch

Bahut karli baate teen paanch

Ab har Chij dikhegi do do

Or hadiya tutengi jaise kaanch

waah

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Originally posted by: Prithikumar

Updateeeee plzzzzzz puppy eyes😭

updating in half n hour