My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 18

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa


No . Appreciating our dean with love 🤣🤗

Dean🤣🤣

☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 6 years ago

I am so sorry. I know it's very late... Kal pakka kar doongi... I don't have a draft ready and these days I am abut busy and u know mood bhi thik nahi tha... Kal paka update karungi.... 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

update toh karo next

we wanna know how papaji reacted about neil and if mini forgave him easily or not


Itni jaldi maaf nahi karegi.... That's for sure... 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

Good one lata... Aakhir papaji aa gaye.

Curiousity bd rahi hai, she will forgive or not.

Plz update fast......

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil

Good one lata... Aakhir papaji aa gaye.

Curiousity bd rahi hai, she will forgive or not.

Plz update fast......


Thanks vishal


Will update today....


Ur dp is love....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 12


The dinner was a silent affair for everyone except Arya. Arya was just blabbering about everything while

eating, soon they finished the dinner. And minni was about to leave .

A. Minni beta…tumse baat karni hai..

Minni was again about to burst but stopped when she saw neil indicating arya.

M. ah..bohut raat ho gayi lets talk tomorrow.


Everybody went to their respective rooms. Neil tried speaking to minni to pacify her and explain why he did this by minni being minni just banged the door on his face.


N. yeh ladki na gussa to matlab humesha iske naak pe rehta hai..pata nahi aur kitne papad belne padenge madam ko manane ke liye..


Next morning Ashok got ready eary so that he will talk to minni and will leave the haveli. He and Neil were sitting in the drawing room and having his tea prepared by Rani…minni came downstairs and saw both of them again went to her angry mode…


M. aap gaye nahi abhi tak….i told u right neil that I want him out of my house in the morning…

N. Wo minni….

A. Tumne bola tha na ki morning baat karenge, that’s why I waiting. Mein chala jaunga bas ek baar baat karlo.

M. kya baat karnni hai aapko….aur kal raat ko maine wo sab isiliye bola bcoz waha arya thi..and I don’t want any scene in front of her…so please uske aane se pehle chale jayie…

A. But beta ek baar sun lo…

M. Please I request you…ab kuch nahi sunna mujhe…jab meine poocha tha tab aapke paas kuch nahi tha

batane ke liye…then why now…when I have moved on…

A. Sach me beta....have you really moved on…

M. Yes …koi shak hai aapko…agar hia to mita dijiye bcoz now u don’t exist for me mr. Khurana.

N. Minni bas yaar…enough…he is your father…atleast itna respect de sakti ho…

M. Seriously Neil! You know right what he did to my babes and me…

N. I know minni…I know …

M. Phir…how can u say that I have to respect him…

N. Minni wo yaha rishta jodne to nahi aaye hai…he is here to tell u something …just listen to it and finish it off yaar….dont do this to yourself…u need a closure to this….samjho….

M. Enough….i have moved on from him Neil oberoi…I know you are feeling bad for him bcoz…….let it be….mudda yeh hai ki mujhe ini baat sunni hi nahi hai….aur yeh baat final hai…

N. you cant announce and escape minni…

M. Excuse me I am not escaping and…


Minni was interrupted by Arya….


Ar. Veerbalika Neil…tum dono phir jhagad rahe ho..kya karu me tum dono ka…

M. Arey chutanki ,hum dono jhagad nahi rahe ….wo hum bas baat kar rahe hai…

Ar. Veer balika mujhe ullu mat banao tum dono….

N. Arey choti madam hum na bas yeh baat kar rahe the ki kya aapko shaam ko restaurant leke jaye ya

nahi…

Ar. Sachi Neil….?

N. Haa aur nah to kya…aapko aana hai ki nahi..

Ar. Wow…mujhe aana hai

N. then school jao aap…aane ke baad I will take u

Ar. Okay….bye…bhulna mat mujhe leke jana shaam ko…

N.okay choti madam…

Ar. Pinky promise

N. Yes pinky promise…chalo go now…

Ar. Bye neil, bye Veer Balika bye uncle…..


Once Arya left Minni again said sternly


M. Tumhe jo karna hai karo but I am not interested to listen to him. Mien restaurant ja rahi hoon…agar

tumharii social service ho jaye to aa jana chef Neil oberoi….

Saying that minni just left the house her neil just said to ashok that Naembi will be back in an hour so

ytill then he cann stay here and the he can go there….and went behind minni to again make her

understand.

N. Yaar tum aur tumhara gussa….ruko to ….suno meri baat minni…..



Precap

Ashok thins Mini and Neil are married

Neil makes minni understand why she should talk to Ashok.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wow achha tha...infact bahut achha tha

Mini ka gussa and neil ka manana

Ashok sochega hi ki mineil ki shadi ho gayi bilkul couple jaisa behave jo karte hain dono😆😆

Waiting for next part

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Wow achha tha...infact bahut achha tha

Mini ka gussa and neil ka manana

Ashok sochega hi ki mineil ki shadi ho gayi bilkul couple jaisa behave jo karte hain dono😆😆

Waiting for next part

Update soon


Thanks anjali... 🤗


Yeah will try to update Tommorrow.... 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

Interesting. Ashok think they are married😆 update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Interesting. Ashok think they are married😆 update soon


Thanks kritz... 🤗


Will try updating at night...

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