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Rhea ka live chat with this iconic awards ho gaya kya?

https://twitter.com/iconic_awards/status/1251907163548577792

https://twitter.com/DewaSnS3/status/1237666121135738880

Originally posted by: Kendrix

Pali🤗

wow..toh mei gujrati bhi seek sakthi hoon at this pace⭐️

thank u so much for enlightening me on the complex terminologies IF uses😊

aapne actually mere posts track kar dhiya,mujhe encourage karne ke liyethat s so sweet of u yaaara❤️lovvvvsss u😳

b/n i have tried my hand on a vignette above 😃

do read & post ur valuable comments Teacher ji(dat s how Uru calls u rite😉)

humeh bhi patha chale humaare forum ki Mishti kho humaare write up pasand aaye ke nahi😛

ps -- loved ur latest version of Rinse Repeat Lather poem...way 2 cute it s😛

Meera

Hindi aur Gujarati dono seekhegi? Wah, badi eSmart ho tum toh

Haha, dekho, kar diya track! I u love too

Uru does call me that and ohhhh you have read about Forum ki Mishti too... Wah, stalking main you get full marks from me

I will surely read your Vignette and give my teacher-ly remarks ...but since you have asked, can I please suggest something? If you put line breaks for each dialogue instead of two big paragraphs and present the dialogues in their own lines (with may be italics and regular fonts for dialogue and monologue), it will make it much easier to read and make the whole thing much more presentable... the continuous long paragraphs, that too with HinGlish dialogues make it difficult for the readers to process the text... strong presentation will lure the readers to your story Just a suggestion dear, you don't have to do it

Aaah, thank you! Mera toh bas aise hi chalta rehta hai. I get tempted to rhyme words... it's a good mental exercise

Originally posted by: yrhpk_aus

Good Morning. Happy Sunday to you lovely mishbirians!🤗

@Pali: arre yaar you just send me to mishbir heaven every morning when I look at the beginning of a new AT❤️ Uff all those pictures just warm my heart and brighten my day🤗

p.s no matter how much you rant, I'm sorry yaar, my love for warm jumper knitwear will never be destroyed😆👍🏼

Nandu meri pyari behna, Sunle mera kya hai kehna

Rant mera kuch aur hi tha, misunderstand tum karona

Sweaters saare acche lagte hai, sirf ek se hi hai mera darna

Hoga bada mehnga lekin, woh designer se meri tauba karna

Shahezada hamara lage usme pheeka, kya tha yeh kabhi sambhav hona?

Rant mera bas wohi ek sweater se, ulzan meri yaara samjhona

Itne acche sweaters chhod ke, uff wahi kyun hai hardam pahenna

Dekha usme itni baar, baar baar lagatar, ab zidd bhi yeh chhodona

Shah lage Tichh sweaters main, dikhati hun zara thaherna

Ek se badhkar ek hai pyaare, phir yeh kyun hame pade zelna?

Mishti Abir kya karenge resort main IT?, jab peecha chode yeh Corona

Lockdown main kiye hamne, lakho - sweater nahin - sapne bunana

Kuch black or white oomph ho jaaye, humko hai hayee aahein bharna

Sweater nahin shirt dedo, ek ek button Mishti ko dheere se hai kholna

Nahin manzoor na ho gawara, waste ho hamara itne papad belna

Let the Sweater not be in IT, hamari maha chop ho jaayegi warna

😆😆

Ye, dekho, lagta hai na Tichh... 😉

...aur ab yeh bhi dekh lo😒

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

omg pali i missed your sweater analysis where is it yaar say the page number i love your dressing analysis even though i love sweater look of abir your analysis makes it so funny 🤣

Ye Lo Diyu, tere liye main dhoondh ke le aayi 😆😆

Sweater Part 1:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153203894

Sweater Part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153208917

Part 3 you already replied to in your post...

Part 4 is, mere Sweater rant se ruthi hui Nandu ko patao post... jo iss post ke bilkul apar hai 😆

Originally posted by: Ashi3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BU_pI9cFeYA

😆

Originally posted by: SheThought

Originally posted by: SheThought

Rhea ka live chat with this iconic awards ho gaya kya?

https://twitter.com/iconic_awards/status/1251907163548577792

Originally posted by: Kendrix

so here it is my lovely bennaas❤️

before u proceed let me warn u of the dire consequences of tredding further😆🤣

i m no pro in such tasks...but i have tried my hand here n penning a quick vignette..hopin it vil meet ur expectations😳

bear vid me for ny grammatical mistakes for my Hindi s not too gud

lookin forward to all sort of comments acche ya bhure🤗

again dis s just a vignette - an extract of what i vud like to see for our MISHBIR!!

dis piece s written as a convo with each character's mind voices addressing us in brackets...hope u like it yaaron⭐️

So it s yet another beautiful morn where our sleepyhead Mishti wakes up first(or so she thinks😉😆)& she tries waking up her own sleeping(???)Ajeeb Rajvansh😊

mera mann nahi hai Mishti..(turning to other side,he mumbles)thodi dher aur sone dho na..mujhe mere meetisi sapne kho poora toh karne dho yaar..(annoyed am I but a naughty grin makes its way up my lips as I come up with a foolproof plan to make my Ajeeb Rajvansh raise from bed..giggling I empty the jug of water upon Abir& he jerks up alarmed..)yeh kya kar dhiya tumneh Mishti???..kya hua Ajeeb Rajvansh..mein toh sirf tera madad karna chaahathi thi.. (he looks on sternly..controlling my chuckle I answer)mein tere meetisi sapne kho aur haseen bana ne ki khoshish kar rahi thi..baarish baras kar..kyun?(and I sprinkle somemore water on his face & instantly he pulls me towards him).. teri baarish se meri dreamworld princess kho sardhi ho jaathi toh!..dreamworld princess!?..haan..(making me sit on the cot he raises but still holding me by my arms continues he)..meri dreamworld princess..(while I look on confused,he turns & starts walking)..voh kya hai na Mishti..iss asli dhuniya mei toh (glancing me,starts stepping towards me)tujhse zyada sundhar, susheel aur(pinching my right cheek) sweet ladki mujhe dhiktha hi nahi..(I stare at him confused to the core now) toh meine socha..(he again starts walking away) kyun na usse mere sapno ki dhuniya mei hi bunn le(I throw a sideway glance at Mishti who has now got up from the cot but still rooted at the spot and registering my success from her changing facial contours,I wink & chuckle silently) ..accha!?..tu saaf saaf yeh kyun nahi keh dhetha.. ki mann bharr ghaya hai tumeh mujhse..(sayin she starts walkin away from our cot while I chuckling even more but hiding it from her, try to closely follow her to hear her muttering - saare mardh na..ek jaise hothe.. shaddhi se pehele itne saare vaadein..aur jab pathi ka path mil jaatha hai,thab dhikathe apna asli rang..bewafa kahi ke..)..kya?bewafa!..tum mujhe bewafa keh rahi ho!..(she makes cute annoyed faces & turns away..I drag her back to me & makes her sit on the cot).. tumeh mujhpe barosa nahi hai Mishti!!..(I chide myself seein the innocent facies he makes..but seein a naughty glint n his eyes..I start getting away from his hold)..yaar..mere baath toh sunn..nahi sunna hai mujhe..(she gets up walking away in anger..seeing the situation getting out of control,I spring at her landing in front of her)..hirey mere pyaari patni ji..mera yakeen keejiye..(she sniffles not giving in) tk..agar aap ko aapka pathi bewafa lagi rahe hai..toh aap usska ilaaj kyun nahi doondh lethi.. ilaaj?..kaisi ilaaj?..aapne abhi abhi toh kaha.. pathi ka path hi usse bewafai karne ki fursat dhetha hai..(Mishti gives confused looks)..toh aap usse uss path kho cheen lijiye naa.. (narrowing her eyes)..tum yeh kehna chaathe ho ki mein tumeh chod dhoon..(closing my eyes in frustration,I shout)array nahi yaar!..mere kehene ka matlab voh nahi tha..(Mishti rolls her eyes in frustration)toh kya matlab tha..saaf saaf baatho mujhe..(inhaling a bit)tu pehele byt jao.. aao(I try holding her arms which she whisks away..but I hold her again)meri angry chorni..mera kehene ka matlab tha..aap mera ye pathi ka path kho koi naya path mei badhal dhijiye na..(Mishti looks on keenly,I close in slowly & in a gentle tone)papa bana dhijiye mujhe..(his request renders me speechless & I stare at his choco-brown orbs for heaven knows how long.........

(iss vaqt Mishti ki mann mei kya chal rahi hai.. usska andhaaza mujhe bilkul bhi nahi hai..par mei dhaave ki saath keh saktha hoon..usski aankon mein jho ehsaas hai..voh gusse ka nahi..bilkul nahi.. leaning further closer I almost whisper)..aapneh bathaaya nahi Mrs.Rajvansh..(Mishti continues staring questioning as to ‘what’)..ki aapko mera yeh idea kaise lagi..hmmm..voh..(I try peeping closer while she after a min’s thot,pushes me & yells)yeh idea bhi tum apne faidha ke liye hi nikalatha naa..?(saying she gets up,flaring her nostrils literally again leaving me clueless of the reason for her anger)..kya??..(I ask while she goes on)zyada banne ki khoshish mat karo Ajeeb Rajvansh..iss idea se mera samasya aur bhad jaayega..par tumhaara.. katham!!..(Abir nods negatively,trying to get her point.. understanding him already,she resumes) aur nahi toh kya..jab mein maa ban jaaungi thab mein aisi nahi rahoongi naa.."aisi nahi rahoongi" matlab?..matlab meri phed aage aa jayega..aur mein,motti ban jaaongi..(says she vid an adorable pout while I observe her expressions enthusiastically).....(inhaling,she turns to me continuing)...thab tumeh mujhse sundhar ladkiyaan iss duniye mein bhi dhikai dhega..teri voh dreamworld princess jaise..hai naa?..(I chuckle at her reasonings)..tumeh dhekna hai Mishti..meri dreamworld princess kho?.....mujhe kisiko nahi dhekni..par mein dhikana chaahatha hoon tujhe..aao mere saath..nahi.. array aao na..(I take her a bit forward)mein tumeh apni dreamworld princess ki baare mei bhathatha hoon..(turning her around to the standing mirror in our room)uski aankein bilkul inn aankon ki jaise(pointing to her eyes in the mirror, leaving her confused)..saamne waalon ki hosh udaane waale..datt kar har museebat ka saamna karne waale..aur uski naak(pointing to her nose this time)iss naak ki thara..chotasa..cutesa (Mishti’s face gets tender slowly)aur uski kaan na inn kannon jaise hi hone chaahiye..(pointing to my ears) patha hai,thoda bada hai..par issi mei toh bhalai hai na!..(Mishti looks questioningly)kal agar usse filmon ki heroines ki tarah dho theen earrings pehene ki mann kiya..thab pbm nahi hogi naa (Mishti gives a warm smile & I quickly add)aur yeh(pointing to her smile on the mirror)bilkul aisayi hogi uski muskhurrahat..ek dhum cute..sabka dil churane waali ..yeh saare khoobiyaan sirf aur sirf ek nanni si jaan mei hi ho sakthi hai Mishti..jho(touching her stomach) teri koke mei pale padegi..(she lowers her eyes & smiles wider & I hug her from behind startling her a bit,she looks at me in mirror & I @ her)..jiski aane se tum aur mein pathi-patni se mumma-pappa ban jaayenge ..aur voh humaari jaan ban jayegi..(she keeps smiling, imaging our dream coming true or so I thot & to grab her attention,I quickly add)..& for ur kind information(Mishti looks up questioningly at me still thro’ the mirror).. agar tum motti bhi ho jaaye na, thab bhi mein tumeh aise hi pyaar kartha rahoonga.. (she gives a ‘Oh!really’ look & understanding it,I quickly justify my point) aur nahi toh kya..thab bhi mere liye sabse zyaada khoobsurat tum hi dhikoge naa..(giving a sweet smile she keeps her hands over mine which r already resting peacefully over her waist & we stand lost in each others’ eyes..)

ps --- thanks to multiple adorable posts on insta & twtr abt MISHBIR as parents,my crazy dhimaag came up vid something like dat i guess😛

thank u for reading🤗eagerly waiting for ur comments😊

mishti's ramblings are awesome...

ajeeb pati ke ajeeb harkate but loved his way of explaining things to his wife

Originally posted by: SheThought

https://twitter.com/DewaSnS3/status/1237666121135738880