Rhea-Shaheer|MishBir|AT: 88| - Page 75

Originally posted by: Ashi3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e9JPrOVdmbA

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Ashi, this cracked me up! OMG! 🤣

Especially loved the middle part! It was perfect 😆😆

Originally posted by: Ashi3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BU_pI9cFeYA

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This was cute!

They should actually picturize this song on MishBir, in their original voices 😎

so here it is my lovely bennaas❤️

before u proceed let me warn u of the dire consequences of tredding further😆🤣

i m no pro in such tasks...but i have tried my hand here n penning a quick vignette..hopin it vil meet ur expectations😳

bear vid me for ny grammatical mistakes for my Hindi s not too gud

lookin forward to all sort of comments acche ya bhure🤗

again dis s just a vignette - an extract of what i vud like to see for our MISHBIR!!

dis piece s written as a convo with each character's mind voices addressing us in brackets...hope u like it yaaron⭐️

So it s yet another beautiful morn where our sleepyhead Mishti wakes up first(or so she thinks😉😆)& she tries waking up her own sleeping(???)Ajeeb Rajvansh😊

mera mann nahi hai Mishti..(turning to other side,he mumbles)thodi dher aur sone dho na..mujhe mere meetisi sapne kho poora toh karne dho yaar..(annoyed am I but a naughty grin makes its way up my lips as I come up with a foolproof plan to make my Ajeeb Rajvansh raise from bed..giggling I empty the jug of water upon Abir& he jerks up alarmed..)yeh kya kar dhiya tumneh Mishti???..kya hua Ajeeb Rajvansh..mein toh sirf tera madad karna chaahathi thi.. (he looks on sternly..controlling my chuckle I answer)mein tere meetisi sapne kho aur haseen bana ne ki khoshish kar rahi thi..baarish baras kar..kyun?(and I sprinkle somemore water on his face & instantly he pulls me towards him).. teri baarish se meri dreamworld princess kho sardhi ho jaathi toh!..dreamworld princess!?..haan..(making me sit on the cot he raises but still holding me by my arms continues he)..meri dreamworld princess..(while I look on confused,he turns & starts walking)..voh kya hai na Mishti..iss asli dhuniya mei toh (glancing me,starts stepping towards me)tujhse zyada sundhar, susheel aur(pinching my right cheek) sweet ladki mujhe dhiktha hi nahi..(I stare at him confused to the core now) toh meine socha..(he again starts walking away) kyun na usse mere sapno ki dhuniya mei hi bunn le(I throw a sideway glance at Mishti who has now got up from the cot but still rooted at the spot and registering my success from her changing facial contours,I wink & chuckle silently) ..accha!?..tu saaf saaf yeh kyun nahi keh dhetha.. ki mann bharr ghaya hai tumeh mujhse..(sayin she starts walkin away from our cot while I chuckling even more but hiding it from her, try to closely follow her to hear her muttering - saare mardh na..ek jaise hothe.. shaddhi se pehele itne saare vaadein..aur jab pathi ka path mil jaatha hai,thab dhikathe apna asli rang..bewafa kahi ke..)..kya?bewafa!..tum mujhe bewafa keh rahi ho!..(she makes cute annoyed faces & turns away..I drag her back to me & makes her sit on the cot).. tumeh mujhpe barosa nahi hai Mishti!!..(I chide myself seein the innocent facies he makes..but seein a naughty glint n his eyes..I start getting away from his hold)..yaar..mere baath toh sunn..nahi sunna hai mujhe..(she gets up walking away in anger..seeing the situation getting out of control,I spring at her landing in front of her)..hirey mere pyaari patni ji..mera yakeen keejiye..(she sniffles not giving in) tk..agar aap ko aapka pathi bewafa lagi rahe hai..toh aap usska ilaaj kyun nahi doondh lethi.. ilaaj?..kaisi ilaaj?..aapne abhi abhi toh kaha.. pathi ka path hi usse bewafai karne ki fursat dhetha hai..(Mishti gives confused looks)..toh aap usse uss path kho cheen lijiye naa.. (narrowing her eyes)..tum yeh kehna chaathe ho ki mein tumeh chod dhoon..(closing my eyes in frustration,I shout)array nahi yaar!..mere kehene ka matlab voh nahi tha..(Mishti rolls her eyes in frustration)toh kya matlab tha..saaf saaf baatho mujhe..(inhaling a bit)tu pehele byt jao.. aao(I try holding her arms which she whisks away..but I hold her again)meri angry chorni..mera kehene ka matlab tha..aap mera ye pathi ka path kho koi naya path mei badhal dhijiye na..(Mishti looks on keenly,I close in slowly & in a gentle tone)papa bana dhijiye mujhe..(his request renders me speechless & I stare at his choco-brown orbs for heaven knows how long.........

(iss vaqt Mishti ki mann mei kya chal rahi hai.. usska andhaaza mujhe bilkul bhi nahi hai..par mei dhaave ki saath keh saktha hoon..usski aankon mein jho ehsaas hai..voh gusse ka nahi..bilkul nahi.. leaning further closer I almost whisper)..aapneh bathaaya nahi Mrs.Rajvansh..(Mishti continues staring questioning as to ‘what’)..ki aapko mera yeh idea kaise lagi..hmmm..voh..(I try peeping closer while she after a min’s thot,pushes me & yells)yeh idea bhi tum apne faidha ke liye hi nikalatha naa..?(saying she gets up,flaring her nostrils literally again leaving me clueless of the reason for her anger)..kya??..(I ask while she goes on)zyada banne ki khoshish mat karo Ajeeb Rajvansh..iss idea se mera samasya aur bhad jaayega..par tumhaara.. katham!!..(Abir nods negatively,trying to get her point.. understanding him already,she resumes) aur nahi toh kya..jab mein maa ban jaaungi thab mein aisi nahi rahoongi naa.."aisi nahi rahoongi" matlab?..matlab meri phed aage aa jayega..aur mein,motti ban jaaongi..(says she vid an adorable pout while I observe her expressions enthusiastically).....(inhaling,she turns to me continuing)...thab tumeh mujhse sundhar ladkiyaan iss duniye mein bhi dhikai dhega..teri voh dreamworld princess jaise..hai naa?..(I chuckle at her reasonings)..tumeh dhekna hai Mishti..meri dreamworld princess kho?.....mujhe kisiko nahi dhekni..par mein dhikana chaahatha hoon tujhe..aao mere saath..nahi.. array aao na..(I take her a bit forward)mein tumeh apni dreamworld princess ki baare mei bhathatha hoon..(turning her around to the standing mirror in our room)uski aankein bilkul inn aankon ki jaise(pointing to her eyes in the mirror, leaving her confused)..saamne waalon ki hosh udaane waale..datt kar har museebat ka saamna karne waale..aur uski naak(pointing to her nose this time)iss naak ki thara..chotasa..cutesa (Mishti’s face gets tender slowly)aur uski kaan na inn kannon jaise hi hone chaahiye..(pointing to my ears) patha hai,thoda bada hai..par issi mei toh bhalai hai na!..(Mishti looks questioningly)kal agar usse filmon ki heroines ki tarah dho theen earrings pehene ki mann kiya..thab pbm nahi hogi naa (Mishti gives a warm smile & I quickly add)aur yeh(pointing to her smile on the mirror)bilkul aisayi hogi uski muskhurrahat..ek dhum cute..sabka dil churane waali ..yeh saare khoobiyaan sirf aur sirf ek nanni si jaan mei hi ho sakthi hai Mishti..jho(touching her stomach) teri koke mei pale padegi..(she lowers her eyes & smiles wider & I hug her from behind startling her a bit,she looks at me in mirror & I @ her)..jiski aane se tum aur mein pathi-patni se mumma-pappa ban jaayenge ..aur voh humaari jaan ban jayegi..(she keeps smiling, imaging our dream coming true or so I thot & to grab her attention,I quickly add)..& for ur kind information(Mishti looks up questioningly at me still thro’ the mirror).. agar tum motti bhi ho jaaye na, thab bhi mein tumeh aise hi pyaar kartha rahoonga.. (she gives a ‘Oh!really’ look & understanding it,I quickly justify my point) aur nahi toh kya..thab bhi mere liye sabse zyaada khoobsurat tum hi dhikoge naa..(giving a sweet smile she keeps her hands over mine which r already resting peacefully over her waist & we stand lost in each others’ eyes..)

ps --- thanks to multiple adorable posts on insta & twtr abt MISHBIR as parents,my crazy dhimaag came up vid something like dat i guess😛

thank u for reading🤗eagerly waiting for ur comments😊

Originally posted by: SheThought

Hi Meera!!

Yes, you are right... what I told Uru in Gujju was You & me and Me & You - we make a solid team 😆

Waise, i just wanted to know that you are only 4 posts (edited to say 3 😆) away from reaching Groupbie.... make it fast so you can unlimited posts 😃

Also, by hyperlinks, it means you can't have insta/twitter/website links in your post when you are a newbie. So when you quote others post, if it has those links, IF blocks you as a newbie. But you won't have that issue once you are promoted!

Pali🤗

wow..toh mei gujrati bhi seek sakthi hoon at this pace⭐️

thank u so much for enlightening me on the complex terminologies IF uses😊

aapne actually mere posts track kar dhiya,mujhe encourage karne ke liyethat s so sweet of u yaaara❤️lovvvvsss u😳

b/n i have tried my hand on a vignette above 😃

do read & post ur valuable comments Teacher ji(dat s how Uru calls u rite😉)

humeh bhi patha chale humaare forum ki Mishti kho humaare write up pasand aaye ke nahi😛

ps -- loved ur latest version of Rinse Repeat Lather poem...way 2 cute it s😛

Originally posted by: Just_Smile

u want more???

No it's more than enough

BTW did you all heard the news rs father passed away, is it true?

Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

No it's more than enough

BTW did you all heard the news rs father passed away, is it true?

Just read after I saw your post...

Yeah, as per news online it is true and last rites also performed.

Must be so difficult for RS and family... hope lockdown didn't make it more difficult.

Uff, Mishti Itna dara dhamka rahi hai Abir ko yahan... bechara 😆😆

https://twitter.com/YRHPK_OfficalFC/status/1252273981161213952

Ritvik and Shah banter... 😆😆

So cute!

Their friendship phase was so organic...

https://twitter.com/Irma18424049/status/1252267074619092993