||Love, Forever|| - |ArIya + SaIsha + BhaVeer| - Ch3/Pg13- Page 5

Originally posted by: K_123

Very nicely written it feel I am present that office. Update soon

I am super happy that I could make you feel like that. It's one of the best compliments for a writer that your reader can actually feel and see how the story scenes are turning up.

Originally posted by: 7APK

I love your stories ❤❤❤❤

And this has my favorite Ariya and you even added my Bhavna and Karan😍😍😍😍 its like cherry on the cake🎂

Awesome Start

Can't wait for more😍😘😍😘

Aaww!! Thank you so much!

ArIya, Bhavna & karan - they are my favorites too! I love them.

Thank you so much for commenting, I am glad that you are liking this set-up. I will update the next chapter soon.

Originally posted by: minamma

Reading a good ariya story after ages

Kind of intriguing

Keep it up

Would love to read more

It looks promising

Thanks for the compliment! I am glad that you are liking the story for I was kinda unsure if people would like reading this first chapter as it is all about introducing the characters but I am glad that I got such a wonderful response.

Thank you so much for commenting.

And once again I am having this messed up pages problem!

Page 5 & 6 are showing up with the same content!

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

YOU MENTIONED KHOTEY SIKKEY! CAN I LOVE YOU MORE THAN THIS?❤️🥳

You added a new doc and already loving Shonali. Maybe she knows what's up with sik. Also the Karmy part is cool. Do you have any defence contact or you read a lot of cop books😛

Oh!😆

I might bring someone or a particular situation in future that will make you fall in love with me just a bit more❤️

I thought the team should have a doctor to patch them up while breaking the bad guys😆

And Shonali knows way too many things that others don't and I ain't just talking about me, but also this character Shonali Roy Ganguly. She's gonna surprise you in future at certain points in the story😉

Oh, the K-army idea came up just when I was writing this chapter, sudden and out of nowhere! I don't read defense books for romance and fantasy are my favorite genres but I like to watch crime shows. Especially those ID channel ones. All those real crime stories were very intriguing!😳

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

I watched the movie to watch the song akhiyan miawanga and it wasn't there I was like 🥺🤢 watch it action is cool. Also we all know The dude was the original Sikandar of this forum ☺️😆

Really? Oh, yeah I can see Vidyut as Sikander but I prefer him as Karanveer Singh Dogra☺️

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Update soon

I am working on the update. Just completed working on the summary, the chapter will be read in a day or two.

What's ID channel? Investigation something discovery channel?

And who's this Robin karan Hooda, since that day it's nagging me as if I have heard about him somewhere.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

What's ID channel? Investigation something discovery channel?

And who's this Robin karan Hooda, since that day it's nagging me as if I have heard about him somewhere.

You followed ID ? I followed all those high end forensic cases 😈.

Karan, as in Arjun season 2 when all ETF team died I guess. He was somewhat regarded as Robin Hooda I think. 😆 we never followed show after you know who🤣

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

I watched the movie to watch the song akhiyan miawanga and it wasn't there I was like 🥺🤢 watch it action is cool. Also we all know The dude was the original Sikandar of this forum ☺️😆

Well after your err, Iqbal khan was sikky for me 🤓! Akhiyan Miawanga? Is it any good?🤪

I watched it and liked it though the last part was a bit dramatic😳, I liked the overall theme 😳