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(guys this is from the track where prachi and ranbir are at prachi's house discussing how to stop ranbir and maya engagement. ranbir and prachi love each other. ranbir has realized while prachi is still unsure. guys i will only focus on pranbir not abhigya.)

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Ranbir, prachi, sahana, sarita aunty and pragya are discussing

ranbir:- (making faces) yaar kuch toh socho. mujhe nahi karni hai engagement maya se. ye koi umar hoti hai yaar engagement ki.

prachi who was hell irritated with his tantrums finally spoke,, even sahana does not have this much tantrums:-  ek toh ye moh moh banana band karo aur ek toh mujhe yaar mat bolo mujhe bahut irritation hoti hai. soch toh rahe hai na hum sab.

sahana:- idea

pranbir:- bolo

sahana:- ranbir tum shaadi se bhaag jao. na rahega dulha na hogi shaadi. (she was smilling like idiot with her great idea)

pragya:- nahi ye kaam nahi karega. aur galti se ranbir pakra jayega toh karva dege shaadi.

sahana:- toh ranbir tum brahmachari ban jao aur himalaya chale jao.

ranbir:- vah vah vah, kabhi shaadi se bhag jao, kabhi brahmachari ban jao, are mai insaan hoon ya koi film ka actor, kya kya mere sapne the ki mai rockstar banoga footballer banoga aur tum mujhe brahmachari bana rahe hoon matlab brahmachari (making faces)

prachi:- (irritiated) ye kya, bache ki tara ro rahe hoon, are itna toh bache bhi nahi rote candy ke liye jitna tum ro rahe ho.

ranbir:- tumne mujhe bacha bola. tumne mujhe ranbir kholi ko bacha bolo

prachi:- haa bolo kya karloge bubua

ranbir:- mai tumhe chikchiki boloaga

prachi:- (pouts) mujhe chikchiki mat bulao,,

ranbir:- bulaoga kya kar logi. chikchiki chikchiki chikchiki chikchiki CHIKCHIKI

sahana:- (shouts) CHUPPPPPP,   kya pati patni ki tadha jagad rahe ho (both try to say something) kuch mat bolo abhi ye socho ki engagement kaise todhni hai.

sarita:- idea

all four listen

ranbir:- are boliye na

sarita:- ranbir tum shaadi kari lo

pranbir:- nahiiiiiiiiiii,, (prachi felt like losing herself at the taught of ranbir getting married)

ranbir:- kya hai ye shaadi karlo,, yeh koi udmar hai ki shaadi karlo,, mujhe koi shaadi nahi karni,, kya hai yeh,, kabhi shaadi se bhaag jao,, kabhi brahmachari ban jao aur abb shaadi karlo,,

prachi:- (almost shouting,, she was hell irritated with this idea) haa sarita aunty ranbir shaadi nahi kar sakta,, (how can she let her ranbir get married,, wait wait,,,,,hold on a sec,, her ranbir,, when he become hers)

all look at her suspiciously

prachi:- (covering up) mera matlab ranbir maya se shaadi nahi kar sakta.

ranbir:- haa

sarita:- are meri puri baat toh suno,, mai ye kai rahi hoon ki ranbir shaadi karle (they try to say something) par maya se nahi,,

all:- matlab

sarita:- matlab ye ki ranbir ki shaadi kisi aisi ladki se karva de toh maya ke papa ye rishta kudh todh dege. aur phir baad mein ranbir usse divorce de dega,,

all agreed except prachi,,

prachi:- (immediately) nahiiii, ye accha idea nahi hai

ranbir:- kyu, accha toh hai isme karabi bhi kya, mai uss maya se bhi bach jao ga aur phir divorce bhi ho jayega

prachi:- (inscure) nahiii, kaha na accha idea nahi hai

ranbir:- par kyu

prachi:- (frustated) aree nahhi hai na toh bas nahi hai.

pragya:- (understanding her insecurity) par kyu prachi

prachi:- (nervously finding words) kyuki,....... humme kyaaa, pata ki voh ranbir ko divorce de

sarita:- are voh hai na piche vaale ghar mein dimple, voh bilkul hamara saath degi,,

after a lot of discussion, prachi agreed with no choice left,, ranbir leaves from there and was about to enter his car when prachi calls him,,

ranbir:- haa bolo prachi,

prachi:- ranbir ummmm (finding words) ja tum voh na i mean voh ladki di.... dimple jo hai by chance shaadi tumari hogi toh usse pakka chor doge na i mean tum usse divorce doge ge na.

ranbir:- (in mind) ohhh toh madam jealous ho rahi hai, accha hai accha hai, yaani ye bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai, toh chalo todha aag mein ghee daal dete hai (to prachi) ab pata nahi prachi, maine uski photo dekhi hai aur voh bahut hot hai, kitni sundar,,

prachi:- (jealous tone) bas bas bilkul hot nahi hai voh aur sundar, sundar toh bilkul bhi nahi hai, kitne pimples hai uske chehra par.

ranbir:- (smiles wide) chal joothi, dekha nahi kitni sundar hai voh,

prachi:- (jealous) sundar,,, (laughs) hahahahh voh aur sundar, voh piche dekho voh aunty iss dimple se zyada sundar hai.

ranbir:- nahi sundar toh hai voh par ek baat zaror hai voh aunty bhi bahut sundar hai,

prachi:- (jealous) nahiiii, voh aunty itti bhi sundar nahi hai. accha yeh choro aur mere sawar ka sedhe sedhe jawab do ja tum usse divorce doge na maya se chutkara paane ke baad.

ranbir:- pata nahi prachi, sayad inn mein mujhe usse pyaar

prachi:- (immediately) koi pyaar vyaar nahi hoga usse

ranbir:- kyu

he moves closer to her, both have an eyelock (kaise hua female version in background),,, her heartbeat starts to race,, she remembers their moments. he moves more closer,, their faces are inches apart,, they can feel each other breaths,, she didn't know what come over her that she hugged him tightly,, the feeling of him getting married to someone else was eating her inside,, in their friendship,, their was hate,, fun,,working together but today she feeling that this friendship has a special meaning to her,, she don't know why she don't want him to marry maya nor dimple. as he reciprocated the hug,, she felt protected, happiness in his embrace,, it was like his embrace can give her strenght

prachi:- (in low scared voice) ranbir plzzz usse apni biwi mat manna,, plzzzz

ranbir:- lekin kyu prachi tumhe kyu fark par raha hai ki mai usse apni biwi maano ya na maano,,

he was right,, why it bothered her so much,, he was just a friend right then why can't he marry someone. she didn't know the answer so she just ran inside,, whole night,, whole night she was thinking why she didn't want him to marry someone else,, there was one thing which her mother told her but how is it possible,, love,,, but how can she love ranbir,, he was a playboy right,, she always wanted a well-mannered, reponsible husband but ranbir was opposite,, there was so much confusion and she had to sleep so ranbir can get married at the temple,, marriage,, his marriage,, this taught was bringing tears in her eyes,, she don't know why but one thing for sure she can't see him married in front of her own eyes,, it was like snatching her soul from her body,, so she cried,, her tears were all visible, her eyes were red but she went with a heavy heart to take dimple with her. was her mother right,, did she really fall in love with ranbir

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Pranbir His Marriage 2#


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(abhi doesn't know about rhea's love) 

prachi went with a heavy heart to take dimple,, her heart was bleeding,, it was continously saying to stop this,, she wanted her to stop,, to not let this marriage happen,, how can see her love getting married to someone else,, love,, YES LOVE,, she realised her love for her ranbir,, she was confused whether ranbir will ever love her,, he always move on from one girl to another girl and she wasn't even his type,, she didn't wanted any false hope,, her heart was saying to stop this marriage but her mind was scared,, scared of heartbrake,, she reached the temple with dimple where she saw her ranbir laughing with his chief,, she always admired his bond with sir then he looked at her,, for a second she lost in his handsome face,, she could not control her cheek from turning red when he winked at her,, but the next moment her heart break into million pieces when ranbir hugged dimple


ranbir:-  (breaking the hug)πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„ thank you so much dimple meri help karne ke liye,, 

dimple:- πŸ˜„πŸ˜„thank you ki kya baat vaise agli baar sambal ke rehna,, aise hot se ladke saamne ho toh ladkia toh pagal hogi na (she winks at himπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ while prachi burns in jealousy😑😑😑)

ranbir:- (flirty) vaise tum bhi kuch kam hotπŸ”₯πŸ”₯ nahi ho to be Mrs kholi,,

prachi:- (interrupting) temporary Mrs kholi (to herself) permanant toh mai banne bhi nahi dogi aur hot,, lomri mere ranbir pe doore daal rahi hai,,😑😑😑😑😑

dimple:- (flirty) temporary hi sahi ho toh sahi iski

abhi comes there,,

abhi:- abhi jaldi jao taiyaar ho jao tum dono

ranbir:- ji chief,, chalo dimple (holding her hand)

prachi:- ranbir tum jao na,, sahana taiyaar kara degi isse,, (glaring at her😑😑😑)

they both left,,

prachi:- (in mind) temporay hi sahi ho toh iski my foot,, ranbir isse jaror divorce dega,, lekin kahi usse dimple se pyaar toh nahi (with hurt😭😭,, a tear drop flows from her eye but she quickly wipe it)

abhi:- (smiling) pyaar karti ho na ranbir se

prachi:- (shocked) nahiii,..... si..sir aap aisa kyu keh rahe hai,, aisa kuch nahi hai (she looks here and there) vaise bhi hume chalna chahiye (starts to leave)

abhi holds her hand and stops her,,

abhi:- prachi idhar dekho (cups her face) beti maanta hoon mai tumhe apni,, apne papa se chupao gi,,

she coudn't control herself and hugged him tightly and started sobbing😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

prachi:- (crying) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­sir kuch nahi samaj aa raha hai,, pata nahi kab aur kaise ho gaya par haa mai ranbir se pyaar karti hoon,, par mujhe darr lagg raha hai kahi voh mujhse

abhi:- hey hey,, stop crying sweetheart,, (cups her face) kyu dar rahi ho itna,, usse baat karo apne dil ki baat batao,,

prachi:- nahi sir aapne dekha hai na,, har din uske pass koi nayi ladki hoti hai,, aur usse toh meri jaisi ladkia pasand bhi nahi,, voh mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi karega,,

abhi:- πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒtum ranbir ko kuch mahino se jaanti ho lekin maine usse apni godd mein khilaya hai,, uski ungli pakar ke chalna shikaya hai,, aur mai jaanta ho ki uski life mein tum bahut important ho,, voh jaisa tumare saath rehta hai aur kisi ke saath nahi rehta toh abhi ye rona band karo (wipes her tears) aur jao uske paas,, ye jo pyaar hai na,, ye kabhi type nahi dekhta,, dil dekhta hai,, aur ranbir ek bahut accha ladka hai,, uski aakhon mein tumare liye pyaar hai,,

prachi:- nahi sir,, voh mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi karega,,

abhi:- πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒkarta hai,, jab mai ranbir ki umar ka tha toh mai bhi aisa hi tha,, par shaadi ke baad mujhe meri fuggi se pyaar ho gya tha,, voh bhi bilkul tumari tar thi,, mujhe kabhi pata nahi chala ki kab mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya,, phir hona kya tha uske siwai koi dikhta nahi tha,, toh ab jao uske paas,,


prachi went to ranbir

she saw him in sherwani looking hot and handsomeπŸ”₯πŸ”₯,, she was staring him



ranbir noticed her staring him:- staring is bad prachi

prachi was embarressed😳😳:- (nervously) nahi mai tumhe nahi stare kar rahi thi (looking here and there)

ranbir:- (smirked) πŸ˜πŸ˜ yaani tum kisi ko toh stare kar rahi thi aur yaha pe toh sirf mai hoon (comes closer while she moves back until her back hits the wall) kya chal raha hai prachi

prachi:- (nervously) πŸ˜“πŸ˜“ku... ku.....kuch   na....n....a.....nahi

ranbir:- sahi mein kuch nahi toh itna nervous kyu ho,,

prachi:- (fidgeting her duppata) nahi mai kaha nervous ho rahi ho,,

suddenly a knock comes on the door,,

aryan:- ranbir jaldi aa dimple ready ho gayi hai,,

ranbir:- aa raha hoon,,

he starts to leave while prachi holds his hand,, he looks at her,,

prachi:- ranbir tum sach mein ye shaadi karne vaale ho (controling herself from tearing apart😭😭😭😭)

ranbir:- kyu kya hua prachi,, humne yahi toh decide kia tha,,

prachi:- (tears flows from eyes) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ra...ranbir sayad    k..koi  aur   ra....r...raasta bhi ho sakta hai,, shaadi hi kyu

ranbir's heart broke seeing her tears,, he cups her and says

ranbir:- prachi kyu,, kyu koi aur raasta,, (in mind) plzz bol do prachi ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho,, plzz bol do

prachi:- kyuki

ranbir:- kyuki kya prachi,,

prachi:- kyuki agar usne tumhe divorce nahi dia toh,,

ranbir:- nahi dia tumhe usse kya,, tumhe kyu fark par raha hai,,

she couldn't answer so starts to leave to leave but he pulls her back and pins her to wall,,

prachi:- (tearfully) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ranbir

ranbir:- (tearfully) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­bas prachi aur kitta chupaogi (she looks in his eyes)

prachi:- (tears flows from her eyes) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­kuch nahi,, kuch nahi chupa rahi ho mai,,

ranbir:- toh ye aasu kyu hai prachi,, meri shaadi se itna dard kyu ho raha hai tumhe,, kyu itna fark par raha hai tumhe,,

prachi:- (turns) mujhe koi farak nahi padh raha (more in a broken voice😭😭😭)

ranbir:- sachi,, nahi fark padta (she nods) agar mai usse shaadi karlo toh (she nodes in no) agar mai usse divorce na do (she looks at him with hurt) aur agar mai usse apni biwi maan lo,, (she stayed still) fine mai jaa raha hoon,,

he turns ands starts to leave,, prachi couldn't hold herself and backhugs him,,

prachi:- (broken voice) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ranbir plzz πŸ™πŸ™ mat jao,, sahi kaha tumne,, (she turns him and cups his face) nahi dekh sakti tumari shaadi,, naa maya na dimple,, beacause I LOVE YOU RANBIR,, bahut pyaar karti hoon tumse,, plzz mat jao mujhe chor ke (she hugs him and starts crying) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ mat karo ye shaadi,, plzz mat karo ye shaadi,,

ranbir hugs her back,,

ranbir:- (smiles with tears) bas cup ho jao prachi,, mat ro,, (he breaks the hug and join their foreheads) mai bhi prachi,, tumare bina nahi ji sakta (she looks in his eyes) mai bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon,,😍😍😍😍

prachi:- lekin tum kaise,, tum ho har din koi ladki se,, aur mai toh tumare type ki bhi nahi

ranbir:- prachi meri aakhon mein dekho,, tumhi ne mujhse kaha tha ki logo ki sachai unki aakhon mein dikhti hai,, meri aakhon mein tumare liye pyaar hai,, sacha wala pyaar,, I REALLY LOVE YOU PRACHI,,😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

they hug each other,, he kisses her forehead,, she smiles,,😍😍😍😍😍

prachi:- ranbir tum mujhe kabhi chor ke toh nahi jao ge,,

ranbir:- kabhi nahi prachi mai tumhe kabhi chor ke nahi jaoga,, i promise,, chalo ab shaadi karlo,,

prachi:- tum sach mein usse shaadi karne vaale ho,, (she was to cry😒)

ranbir:- (pulls her through waist) meri jealous chichiki,, dimple toh meri help kar rahi thi tumhe confess karane ke liye,,

she starts hitting his chest,,

prachi:- bahut bure ho tum,, tum jaante ho mai kitna darr gayi thi,, bahut bure ho,, tum bahut bure ho,, 

she keeps on hitting him while he hugs her tight,, after sometime,, she gives up and hugs back,, he breaks the hug,, and gives her the bridal suit,,

prachi:- ranbir ye,,

ranbir:- bina dulhan ke shaadi kaise hogi,,

prachi:- par maa,,

ranbir:- maine aunty se baat karli hai,, ab jaldi taiyar ho jao,,

he lefts while she gets ready,, she was very happy πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„



later, both get married,, and went home,, maya's father brokes the marriage with ranbir,, everyone accepts their marriage except alia and rhea but who cares,,,,,,,

Edited by Aman120 - 4 years ago
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Nicely written

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Although I like the version of Prachi who has not yet realized her feelings and Ranbir who is majnu after her more.

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