FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 33

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Posted: 5 years ago

Finally caught up with all the chapterssmiley42

Haye... itna mehnat you did.. a jhappi for yoy πŸ€—

Man! I love your writing stylesmiley43 and the transition between scenes gives you just the perfect image in your headsmiley42

Aww. That's so sweet of youπŸ€— I honestly don't know if I have a writing style coz jo mann mein ata hai I write.. but your words truly means the world for me.. such a wonderful story teller you yourself are..

And whaaaa?! Prerna saw but didn't meet themsmiley19 Get that ex-wife out of that equationsmiley29 already giving me bad vibes that womansmiley44

Hahaa.. aisa koi hai, who isn't getting bad vibes from Menaka πŸ˜†.. poor she..

#RBProtectionSquad

#KukkiProtectionSquad

#PreRishProtectionSquad

...cannot believe I am writing this but,

#PrernaProtectionSquad smiley44

Hahahaa.. PrernaProtcectionSquad. I never thought that could happen in my life time But like Mr. Mehra said "aisa ho sakta hai"πŸ˜ƒ Prerna must feel so proud😳

Is Pre gonna sacrifice this time?smiley39

May be.. who knows.. waise bhi she has been sacrifice ki devi all her lifeπŸ˜†

Now you have stopped at such a point that I don't know what to expect in future chapterssmiley19how unfair is thatsmiley19

πŸ€—I am trying to update it soon.. thank you Riya, for reading and all your love and support. Wish I had the right words to thank.. so Bajaj style "THANK YOU"πŸ€—

Loads of lovesmiley31

Riyasmiley27smiley31

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Update Update Update Update

Iska thoda hua hai. But fir main OS pe shift kar liya.. ab ye shuru hoga .


PS.. do I get a pat on my back from Guruji for finally being able to finishing something in 1 update..😳.. update nahi bas effort ke liye πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Iska thoda hua hai. But fir main OS pe shift kar liya.. ab ye shuru hoga .


PS.. do I get a pat on my back from Guruji for finally being able to finishing something in 1 update..😳.. update nahi bas effort ke liye πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sunshine update 😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ManaliKSGIAN

Sunshine update 😊😊😊😊😊😊

Hey Manali. Thank you for following up on this one..the work is in progress for next update.. need some time to finish because ye chhodke I finished the other OS I posted yesterday. Planning to resume work on this tonight πŸ€—

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine


I honestly try to update soon, but I am slow thinker I think like I am not a writer, never thought I would. But readers like you have always encouraged me so much to continue.. so thank you so much for all your love and support. Btw, I finally tried writing an OS, let me know what you feel, if you happen to read it.

Phir jaldi karde na update!!! Ok!!! Main konsa jaldi soch hai ti!!! I generally have a single scene baki ka sara likhne ke time pe hi so h ti hu!!!!

Arre i read the Os i did really like abhi Bhi do bar or read karogi tab thoda aur clear hoga!!! Abhi toh i m so confused!!!!!


Exaxtly, Prerna need to show that she wants to be with them out of her own choice. And now she is the only one who can do anything about it, coz noone else can do it for her now.

That's so true!!! Prerna is the only Person who can make a choice we can't force her to do so!!! But we all know how her choices are.


I haven't seen on ITV but jitna bhi dekha hai, I have to agree with you in regards to Prerna's character. She is weak, confused, no growth. Ab agar usey change bhi krrnge to easily na to trust hoga aur na hi yakeen that she has changed.

Well i really don't know how to describe her character!!! She is weak i don't really thing so it just her mind is off the track which needs brought on the right place!!! Confused!! She is so freaking confused at one point she agrees to make a deal with Rishabh and say she will be loyal to him. Than the other time you find talking to her ex alone, running after him when he gets himself in accident which he planned himself. She stands in front of Rishabh and says i can't do this to anurag, i still love him, i can't stay without him, i m sorry Mr.bajaj but i need to stay near him doctors told me that he is responding to my voice and blah blah blah. My foot the first i saw this scene i was like agar reality me hota na toh humara pati hume kab ke do tappad marde ta!!!. CVs themselves don't want her to grow. Change ki toh main koi ummed hi nhi Rakhti hu uske character se!!! Bas!!!!


Wo to update mein hi pata chalega 😳

Don't worry I have left a few open threads but I am closing each one of those as story progresses. So I assure, bhoolne jaisa kuch scene nahi hai

Phir uske liye you need to write the update fast and close it super soon!!! Aur ye anurag ka drama jaldi katam karo!!! Or Menka ka bhi!!! I Don't like her even a bit!!! Adi ko rakhi but uske scenes ko kam karo he have started yo irritate me but i m ok with him being shown once in the update!!!!



I agree sabka life thoda alter hoga becaude of this.. but jaan hai to jahan hai.. and You are so right stories are such saviour..

I agree!!!!! Chalo bye!!! My phone is almost dead

Done!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Rishabh wants to keep his schedule clear around lunchtime for Kukki❀️. Tanvi is taking her career very seriously and I like it very much. He is worried thinking whether Menaka met Kukki in the school but is relieved knowing that Kukki didn't meet anyone new, what did Menaka do that he is not allowing Kukki to meet her biological mother.

Smart Kukki, knows the way to her home from school, his office, and his floor, I am impressed, Bajaj's daughter for a reason😎. She got a perfect welcomeπŸ‘Œ. GOD, Bajaj made sure she is appointed in his office with a proper appointment letter and a contract and they both signed it. Hayee, how cute😳. I agree he is the best father to the best daughter😎. Adi also doesn't know what is the reason for Menaka not being with Bajaj. Why he never asked her the reason.

Prerna got to know what RB did for Kukki and she would come everyday to office. And she got to know Menaka still loves RB. Prerna thinking how can Menaka leave such a beautiful family and then she remembers she also did the same with Bajaj and Kukki in her blind love that she didn't even know their whereabouts. Prerna's suggestion to give a chance to Menaka to meet RB.

Prerna is excited to meet the child. Adi is terrified about the meet. High voltage drama. Prerna is in shock knowing what relation Menaka shares with Bajaj. Menaka is responsible for Kukki's health issues😲. I never expected her to be an irresponsible mother seeing her love and craving for them. But looks like past is something else, her irrational acts led to this. And who is this Aryan now, a new rival or an old rival of Rishabh. Prerna got to witness everything, she saw Rishabh and Kukki too.

Looks like Prerna decided to not meet them now. But let's see how Rishabh/Kukki will meet her now. I liked the little sneak peek into Rishabh-Menaka's moment from the past in the end.

Lovely update Meenakshi❀️. Please continue soon.

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Phir jaldi karde na update!!! Ok!!! Main konsa jaldi soch hai ti!!! I generally have a single scene baki ka sara likhne ke time pe hi so h ti hu!!!!

Same here. While writing too many things come to mind that leads to changes and correction of scene sequences.. here I have 4 main character with supporting ones so bhaut baar changes aate hain while typing it out.


Arre i read the Os i did really like abhi Bhi do bar or read karogi tab thoda aur clear hoga!!! Abhi toh i m so confused!!!!!

Confused .. ohh. No worries I will comment about it on the OS thread.πŸ€—


That's so true!!! Prerna is the only Person who can make a choice we can't force her to do so!!! But we all know how her choices aresmiley44.

Haha.. in the show to sabko pata hai uske choices kya hai Isliye yaha change karne mein achi khasi mehnat lagti hai πŸ˜’ i wish wo show mein alag hotiπŸ€”


Well i really don't know how to describe her character!!! She is weak i don't really thing so it just her mind is off the track which needs brought on the right place!!! Confused!! She is so freaking confused at one point she agrees to make a deal with Rishabh and say she will be loyal to him. Than the other time you find talking to her ex alone, running after him when he gets himself in accident which he planned himself. She stands in front of Rishabh and says i can't do this to anurag, i still love him, i can't stay without him, i m sorry Mr.bajaj but i need to stay near him doctors told me that he is responding to my voice and blah blah blah. My foot the first i saw this scene i was like agar reality me hota na toh humara pati hume kab ke do tappad marde ta!!!smiley29. CVs themselves don't want her to grow. Change ki toh main koi ummed hi nhi Rakhti hu uske character se!!! Bas!!!!

I don't even want to remember that time. CVs have ruined her so much. Even if CVs had showm her standing firmly against Bajaj and fight for her love, to bhi I would have digested but all she did was play tennis match in BB. Aur ye story usi ka extension hai from RB's pov isliye prerna redeem hi nahi ho rahi hai 🀣


Phir uske liye you need to write the update fast and close it super soon!!! Aur ye anurag ka drama jaldi katam karo!!! Or Menka ka bhi!!! I Don't like her even a bit!!! Adi ko rakhi but uske scenes ko kam karo he have started yo irritate me but i m ok with him being shown once in the update!!!!

I am trying, to be as fast as I can but yahi haal hai. Ab kya karun. Anurag to abhi hai hi nahu uska kaise kuch karu. Jo ab tak shuru hi nahi hoga wo khatam kaise karun Mansi πŸ€—

Menaka had her purpose in the story and so does Adi. I wish I could tell you that they will leave soon. Especially Adi, he is here to stay..screen space ho jayega gradually. Filhaal zyada hai because of Prerna.. usey main Adi kr bina kaise dikhau as he is the connecting link here.. so thoda jhel lo 😊


I agree!!!!! Chalo bye!!! My phone is almost dead

Bye and take care..

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RamyaπŸ€—After sooo long.. how are you?? Hope you and everyone around you is safe and sound.


Rishabh wants to keep his schedule clear around lunchtime for Kukkismiley27.

Yess.. papa makes time for his little one.. seeinv her in medical room and conversation with councellor were alarming enough for him.

Tanvi is taking her career very seriously and I like it very much.

Apni bhali ladki is focused now.. πŸ˜ƒ no more running after Bajaj..kaam pe laga diy usne πŸ˜†

He is worried thinking whether Menaka met Kukki in the school but is relieved knowing that Kukki didn't meet anyone new, what did Menaka do that he is not allowing Kukki to meet her biological mother.

My lips are sealed for now πŸ˜ƒ.. ye jo sare loopholes hai wo sab ek hi jagah connect hote hain..the day ek bhi baat samne aati to sab kuch samne ayega.. ek sath..

Smart Kukki, knows the way to her home from school, his office, and his floor, I am impressed, Bajaj's daughter for a reasonsmiley16. She got a perfect welcomeπŸ‘Œ.

Exactly.. she is the best daughter any parent could wish for. She is smart, sensitive, fun, understanding.. sabbbb

GOD, Bajaj made sure she is appointed in his office with a proper appointment letter and a contract and they both signed itsmiley42. Hayee, how cutesmiley9. I agree he is the best father to the best daughtersmiley16.

Koi shaq hi nahi hai.. papa-daughter are the best😎

Adi also doesn't know what is the reason for Menaka not being with Bajaj. Why he never asked her the reason.

He knows they are in bad terms but he didn't what led to this coz he himself was completely out of touch. They all did try to contact but he did not respond like mentined in earlier chapters. Also Menaka has herself not been open about everything. Its just that when he heard Aryan's name he connected a few dots. That's why he was so mad at Menaka.

Prerna got to know what RB did for Kukki and she would come everyday to office. And she got to know Menaka still loves RB. Prerna thinking how can Menaka leave such a beautiful family and then she remembers she also did the same with Bajaj and Kukki in her blind love that she didn't even know their whereabouts. Prerna's suggestion to give a chance to Menaka to meet RBsmiley44.

Prerna could see herself in Menaka and her actions. She herself can't go back to her people to apologise isliye she thought Menaka ke pass to chance hai to usi ki help kar lo. But usey kyaa pata tha aage kya hone wala hai πŸ˜†

Prerna is excited to meet the child. Adi is terrified about the meet. High voltage drama.

Drama ke lliye kuch bhi 😎

Prerna is in shock knowing what relation Menaka shares with Bajaj. Menaka is responsible for Kukki's health issuessmiley3. I never expected her to be an irresponsible mother seeing her love and craving for them. But looks like past is something else, her irrational acts led to this.

Menaka has a side that's hidden to us all at this stage. Whether it's good, dark or grey wo pata chalega aage.

And who is this Aryan now, a new rival or an old rival of Rishabh.

Someone connected to all the 4 founding members of AMRA.

Prerna got to witness everything, she saw Rishabh and Kukki too.

Ohh yes.. itna taras le liya maine uske upar.. shakl to dikha di.. πŸ˜ƒ

Looks like Prerna decided to not meet them now. But let's see how Rishabh/Kukki will meet her now.

Yeah for now, she left without letting anyone know about her presence. Lets see what she does next when she back in her hotel and has some time to think.

I liked the little sneak peek into Rishabh-Menaka's moment from the past in the end.

Yeah a little sneak peak into his life wife.. how he was as a husband and what he shared with his wife.. duniya ko thoda idea dene ke liye what he and his life was back then.. I am glad you liked it

Lovely update Meenakshismiley27. Please continue soon.

I am working on the next one and I am so stuck to be honest. Typing on phone is crazy ..πŸ€”


Anyway, thank you so very much for my looonggg wala review.. i always appreciate itπŸ€—


Please take care and be safe..

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