Drabble- No Mother

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Posted: 5 years ago
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No parent should bury their kids, they said, and they were wrong, no mother should have to watch thier child be tortured, no mother should forget her child, no mother should be a distant, lost memory for her child.

Nandini had lost her everything, but what broke her the most was the lost gaze Maya gave her as she spoke of Rudra. She pleaded to whatever Gods were listening to her to keep her baby safe as blood drained her wrist, hoping that the blood drew the lines of Maya's escape from this hell as the heaven called her.

No mother should die to help her child escape.

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Becuase Viswasruti gave me this idea and Nandu deserved my farewell😭 Happy (quarantined) weekend🤗


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautifully written... 👏 👏 👏

It's really amazing as well as heart touching... You made me emotional with this one.

You gave a really nice farewell to Nandini...

Loved it... ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Brilliant👏

Nandini Maa....em so sad for Maya😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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😭😭

You made me cry

This is so heartbreaking💔

Nandani didn't deserve this nor did Maya

Very beautifully written dear, very well expressed

You really are gifted

The show has become very depressing these days

Edited by Devakshilover - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Superb shibz..👏

This is the best farewell we could give Nandini..

So heart touching

We will miss her for sure.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So so beautifully written! Perfectly describes the situation.😭😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Beautifully written... 👏 👏 👏

It's really amazing as well as heart touching... You made me emotional with this one.

You gave a really nice farewell to Nandini...

Loved it... ❤️

Thanks so much🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vageeshwarics

Brilliant👏

Nandini Maa....em so sad for Maya😭

Thanks🤗 Yes, Maya's lost a lot, but no loss compares to watching your mom suicide 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devakshilover

😭😭

You made me cry

This is so heartbreaking💔

Nandani didn't deserve this nor did Maya

Very beautifully written dear, very well expressed

You really are gifted

The show has become very depressing these days

I am so sorry for making you cry😆

@bold, thanks buddy🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Superb shibz..👏

This is the best farewell we could give Nandini..

So heart touching

We will miss her for sure.

@second line, hope we have more scenes of Maya missing Nandu, or Rudra breaking down when he realizes how much lose MJ-Maya's war has brought in everyone, no thanks to MJ's micro sized ego😡

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