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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Mineilians here we go.... ❤️


It was 6 am when Minni woke up and saw the clock... For her surprise Neil was still sleeping on her lap and she was there in his room.... She remembered the last night....how sad he was and the pain he has gone through these many years.... Just by a flase allegation....she couldn't stop the fresh tears coming from her eyes... All she did was making him sleep comfortably and just vanished out of his room and was crying uncontrollably thinking of his pain.....Rani's voice made her conscious..... She composed her self and went upstairs to see Rani and arya to argue on the breakfast.....


R. Kudiye.... Tujhe na kuch bhi banake do tune to nakhre dikhane HI hai....

A. Rani didi aisa breakfast koi khata hai kya...

R. Ha Ha aaj kal Neil Bhaiyya ka banaya hua khake na tu meinu aise bol rahi hai.....


Arya was making faces to eat the breakfast....


M. Kya Ho raha hai... Aap dono kyun jhagad rage hai...

R. Dekho na Didi ae kudi meinu roz tang karti hai.... Ek minute aap neeche se kaise aa rahe Ho... Hume laga ki aap so rahi hai...


Minni was thinking of an excuse...


M. Haa wo kuch nahi thoda walk Katie aayi hun.... Arya yeh sab kya hai.. Khao jaldi....

A. No veer balika mujhe nahi khana... Poha... Yuck....

M. Arya....

A. Mujhe na methi ke parathe khane hai...

M. Abhi kaise banenge... Neil utha nahi hai air Rani di ko kaam hai... Aaj ke Lite khalo...


Arya was about to say something but then a voice made her happy... It was Neil her genie...


N. Good morning...

A. Neil.... (she went and hugged him) Good morning...

M. Good morning... Tum itni jaldi uth gYe...


Neil understood what she meant... She knows that he cried all night and he needs rest but he is there....


N. Haa wo head ache ho raha to o thought to have a tea.... Rani chai banado...

R. Haa Bhaiyya abhi lati hun...


Arya came to Minni and asked...


A. Ise kya hua itna sad kyun lag raha hai...


Minni knows what happened but she can't say to arya... But she planned something to cheer him up...


M. Neil Oberoi...chai peene ke baad methi ke parathe bana dena...

N. Haa... Kya...

M. Kyun bhool Gaye kya that it's ur tenant duty to prepare breakfast....

N. No... But Rani ne banaya hai na...

A. Haa boring as poha... But we want parathe...

N. But choti madam phir poha waste ho jayegaa na...

M. Nahi hoga... Hum dono Kha lenge bit we want paratha... Mein fresh hoke aati hun... Tab tak ban Jana chahiye...

N. Yeh acha hai mujhe head ache hai chai peeke rest Karo bolne ke Baja mujhse kaam kara rahe Ho...

M. Sar me dard hai Neil oberoi koi labor pain nahi ki kuch na kar sako... Come on chai peeke get to work....


Saying that Minni left to freshen up and even Atta went to her room to get her bag... Neil was now frustrated... Seeing Neil like this minni was smiling.... She wanted to distract him from his pain at least for sometime tats why she asked him cook bcoz cooking is therapy for him... releases his stress...


N. Chalo Neil oberoi madams ka hukum sar aakhon per...

R. Bhaiyya bura mat maana inka... We dono aapka dhyan bhatkane ke liye kar rahi hai...

N. Jaanta hun rani... In dono ke natak meim... I am lucky ki mean in dono se Mila jo mere baare itna sochti hai... Warna itne saal to akele HI jhela hai... In dono apne saath dekhta hun na to lagta hai aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe apni zindagi mean.... Inke orders follow karne padenge na..


He started his work while smiling at their antics to. Make him smile.... Minni also heard what Rani and Neil with a smile....


Ho gaya pulav... Hope u all like it.... Iska continuation bhi hai dimag me but Will write later....


This was beautiful trio 😳 like Zalima say.. chand family .

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya204

I just hope they have a good story after guest leaves as so far makers have planned everything from before even that whole scene of nb asking mini about her dreams Neil enters once this guest matter is resolved I don't want makers to rush into anything instead they should focus more on MiNeil with mini focusing on her photography career Neil making it big in food industry their journey how they fight against the society about their relation and everything as real story has started now with Neil's past revelation and mini learning of it. Makers are already giving hints about society frowning upon their relation plus there is so much description about Neil's house for mini it has Neil's fragrance for Neil it has his parents memory and he wanted that house to be alive again.


I badly want this to happen.Cvs have planned everything well and from months .They have been giving hints upon hints in symbolic scenes way. I want trio shift to Delhi and face the society . Only chapter Ashok's is left which will also end along with guest chapter .

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Posted: 5 years ago

Mini Lori other day Neil might have remembered his mom .Now that house will have music of Mini in all ways 😉

Edited by N_sharmaa - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya204

I just hope they have a good story after guest leaves as so far makers have planned everything from before even that whole scene of nb asking mini about her dreams Neil enters once this guest matter is resolved I don't want makers to rush into anything instead they should focus more on MiNeil with mini focusing on her photography career Neil making it big in food industry their journey how they fight against the society about their relation and everything as real story has started now with Neil's past revelation and mini learning of it. Makers are already giving hints about society frowning upon their relation plus there is so much description about Neil's house for mini it has Neil's fragrance for Neil it has his parents memory and he wanted that house to be alive again.


The have a long way to go even after guest makes her exit...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

I want this to happen. Realistic .Mini in character and PB style

I even I want the same to happen in case of babita she did not have a house or an idea of her real talent but in case of Neil he has a house which he was not ready to give and now mini will not let him give, he knows his talent I really want a Delhi track(makers are giving enough hints by describing the house so much and mini also got attached to the house because it had Neil in it) I so want it to happen.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa


This was beautiful trio 😳 like Zalima say.. chand family .


thanks sharma... 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

guys don't hit me for this but be prepared for the worst that haddi to turn Neil daughter.... Kyunki agar aisa hua to at least we will be prepared and will not have heart break at least....


Divorce to hoke HI rahega anyways....

Edited by porankisrilata - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Mini Lori other day Neil might have remembered his mom .Now that house will have music of Mini in all ways 😉

Yes that describing the house saying where his mom's voice would be there very soon that house will be filled with love and laughter of MiNeYa, Neil described the house as his life which was empty after his parents demise.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

guys don't hit me for this but be prepared for the worst that haddi to turn Neil daughter.... Kyunki agar aisa hua to at least we will be prepared and will not have heart break at least....

I am prepared for it as long as they make both the guests leave without getting a single penny I am up for it.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

guys don't hit me for this but be prepared for the worst that haddi to turn Neil daughter.... Kyunki agar aisa hua to at least we will be prepared and will not have heart break at least....


Divorce to hoke HI rahega anyways....

Woh to hoke rahega after all they have come to the haveli🤣

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