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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: zalima

Anjali agent par likhi ek 

Mr and mrs Smith jaisa kuch 

Plz ..


I like that film .It's one of my favourite.Mineil are good in jasoosi 😆 specially Mini .So this will fit in.

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Posted: 4 years ago

This one is masterpiece writing .👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

This one is masterpiece writing .👍🏼

thanks🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Anjali if possible try to write on live  realtionship track of MiNeil please

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Anjali if possible try to write on live  realtionship track of MiNeil please

Is par drabble nahi ispar to ek ss banta hai😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Is par drabble nahi ispar to ek ss banta hai😆


If you have time and can please🤗 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Acha mujhe ek drabble likhne ka Mann kiya on the current situation... Please bear with me as its my first one on mineil ... Here we go... 


It's been two days then are back from Delhi and Minni haven't even looked at Neil... Whenever he is playing with Atta she just used to go from there and confined herself to her room... Neil did trued reaching her talking to her but it was all. Vain as Minni was not even interested to see him at all..... Neil thought mini behavior is bcoz of his past revelation and Minni was not talking to him as she thought that Her feelings were one sided.... 


Neil had enough of her silence and just barged in her room....


N. Minni I want to talk. To you. 


Minni can't ignore as he was in n her room... She tried to be normal in front of him. 


M. Hmm bolo... 

N. Kab tak chalega aise Minni... If you won't listen to me how will I explain u.... 

M. Listen Neil, I don't need any explanation from you... Bcoz that's all was your personal affair... I just accompanied u there as u asked me to. That's completely your tale of it.... 

N. Really Minni, u don't need any explanation from me. 

M. Of course yes.... 


Neil had enough of her ignorance... He just covered her holding her shoulder... The were just inches apart... 


M. Leave me Neil... Don't cross ur line Neil oberoi. 

N. Really Minni... We have already crossed I feel

Minno couldn't say anything other than just staying mum...

N. I know you are effected bcoz of my past but u don't want to show that u r not effected, Minni I wanted to tell you everything and even I tried but couldn't bcoz of ppl around.. 

M. Neil oberoi, it's ur past I am nothing to do with it. 

N. Minni I know u won't believe me but I have written a letter the same day o was back from Delhi but somehow u can't get read the letter. Please listen to me Minni I want to tell something more about my past. 

M. I don't care Neil oberoi, whatever your past is. Just leave me. 


Neil was now heart broken but can't blame Minni bcoz he knows it's not easy for her to take this. He left her and was about to go but turned to say the actual thing for which he came. 


N. Minni I know whatever I say u won't believe me bcoz after knowing my past what. Have u gone through...i never wanted it come like this  ... All I wanted to say is the feelings which we have for each other  were mutual not one sided.... The crave which u had for me was the same I have for u.... I tried keeping myself away from u but couldn't.... 


Saying this he just vanished... Leaving a shocked Minni behind.... 


Hope u all like it... 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Acha mujhe ek drabble likhne ka Mann kiya on the current situation... Please bear with me as its my first one on mineil ... Here we go... 


It's been two days then are back from Delhi and Minni haven't even looked at Neil... Whenever he is playing with Atta she just used to go from there and confined herself to her room... Neil did trued reaching her talking to her but it was all. Vain as Minni was not even interested to see him at all..... Neil thought mini behavior is bcoz of his past revelation and Minni was not talking to him as she thought that Her feelings were one sided.... 


Neil had enough of her silence and just barged in her room....


N. Minni I want to talk. To you. 


Minni can't ignore as he was in n her room... She tried to be normal in front of him. 


M. Hmm bolo... 

N. Kab tak chalega aise Minni... If you won't listen to me how will I explain u.... 

M. Listen Neil, I don't need any explanation from you... Bcoz that's all was your personal affair... I just accompanied u there as u asked me to. That's completely your tale of it.... 

N. Really Minni, u don't need any explanation from me. 

M. Of course yes.... 


Neil had enough of her ignorance... He just covered her holding her shoulder... The were just inches apart... 


M. Leave me Neil... Don't cross ur line Neil oberoi. 

N. Really Minni... We have already crossed I feel

Minno couldn't say anything other than just staying mum...

N. I know you are effected bcoz of my past but u don't want to show that u r not effected, Minni I wanted to tell you everything and even I tried but couldn't bcoz of ppl around.. 

M. Neil oberoi, it's ur past I am nothing to do with it. 

N. Minni I know u won't believe me but I have written a letter the same day o was back from Delhi but somehow u can't get read the letter. Please listen to me Minni I want to tell something more about my past. 

M. I don't care Neil oberoi, whatever your past is. Just leave me. 


Neil was now heart broken but can't blame Minni bcoz he knows it's not easy for her to take this. He left her and was about to go but turned to say the actual thing for which he came. 


N. Minni I know whatever I say u won't believe me bcoz after knowing my past what. Have u gone through...i never wanted it come like this  ... All I wanted to say is the feelings which we have for each other  were mutual not one sided.... The crave which u had for me was the same I have for u.... I tried keeping myself away from u but couldn't.... 


Saying this he just vanished... Leaving a shocked Minni behind.... 


Hope u all like it... 


Good one Lata.I liked it .😳It was in MiNeil style .I like the ending .It was Neil way .

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Posted: 4 years ago

It was soo amazing lata👏

Pura mineil feel diya!!!

O can imagine this please do write more!!!!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Acha mujhe ek drabble likhne ka Mann kiya on the current situation... Please bear with me as its my first one on mineil ... Here we go... 


It's been two days then are back from Delhi and Minni haven't even looked at Neil... Whenever he is playing with Atta she just used to go from there and confined herself to her room... Neil did trued reaching her talking to her but it was all. Vain as Minni was not even interested to see him at all..... Neil thought mini behavior is bcoz of his past revelation and Minni was not talking to him as she thought that Her feelings were one sided.... 


Neil had enough of her silence and just barged in her room....


N. Minni I want to talk. To you. 


Minni can't ignore as he was in n her room... She tried to be normal in front of him. 


M. Hmm bolo... 

N. Kab tak chalega aise Minni... If you won't listen to me how will I explain u.... 

M. Listen Neil, I don't need any explanation from you... Bcoz that's all was your personal affair... I just accompanied u there as u asked me to. That's completely your tale of it.... 

N. Really Minni, u don't need any explanation from me. 

M. Of course yes.... 


Neil had enough of her ignorance... He just covered her holding her shoulder... The were just inches apart... 


M. Leave me Neil... Don't cross ur line Neil oberoi. 

N. Really Minni... We have already crossed I feel

Minno couldn't say anything other than just staying mum...

N. I know you are effected bcoz of my past but u don't want to show that u r not effected, Minni I wanted to tell you everything and even I tried but couldn't bcoz of ppl around.. 

M. Neil oberoi, it's ur past I am nothing to do with it. 

N. Minni I know u won't believe me but I have written a letter the same day o was back from Delhi but somehow u can't get read the letter. Please listen to me Minni I want to tell something more about my past. 

M. I don't care Neil oberoi, whatever your past is. Just leave me. 


Neil was now heart broken but can't blame Minni bcoz he knows it's not easy for her to take this. He left her and was about to go but turned to say the actual thing for which he came. 


N. Minni I know whatever I say u won't believe me bcoz after knowing my past what. Have u gone through...i never wanted it come like this  ... All I wanted to say is the feelings which we have for each other  were mutual not one sided.... The crave which u had for me was the same I have for u.... I tried keeping myself away from u but couldn't.... 


Saying this he just vanished... Leaving a shocked Minni behind.... 


Hope u all like it... 

i have commented in your thread but ek bar phirse maine padha yaha....aur phirse bahut achha laga

aisa ek scene hona chahiye show mein