PreRish OS : With You, Humesha!! - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was so good!!!

Rishabh Bajaj is so damningly perfect..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I know I am late. But was busy with work and RB's sudden unexpected entry😆.

Now coming to the OS. Hayeee, I am so so so happy reading this having this stupid grin on my face😁. Prerna was betrayed by Basus💔. No one believed her that Sona is Komo and she was trying to kill Sneha. Anurag also doesn't believe her thinking that Sneha is Bajaj's daughter. Basus🤢😡🤬.

She is back to Sharmas and in darkness. No peace and the pain of no trust from the person she loved and did every bloody thing sacrificing her life to save him and his family is a huge shock for her. This is when she remembers the only person who respected her and left her for her happiness with a promise to always be there for her. She is crying for him to be back for her.

And here he is in the bittersweet state. Happy to know that she delivered a healthy baby but he is lonely and in extreme pain thinking that he may never see them even from a distance. But once he got to know what happened with her, he immediately starts for her.

The phone call is feels❤️. She recognized his silence and started to cry not knowing how to express her pain. He is back and directly left to meet her👍🏼.

I absolutely loved how he lights up her room bringing light in her life again, caresses Sneha's head in affection🥰. She is in shock and disbelief that he is here in front of her. The hug is infinite feels😍. He thought to prove her innocence but she doesn't want a father like Basu for her child who doesn't believe her and didn't accept his own child👍🏼. And I love how she called his Rishabh🥰and someone as Mr. Basu😆. She wants revenge😈. She was the one who stopped him earlier and now she is the one for whom he would take their revenge together.

He feeds her. The introduction of papa and beti is awesome🥰. She was uncertain but he named her as Sneha Rishabh Bajaj. And looking at Sneha, she is always attached to her handsome papa😎. I feel so bad for her, she thinks if she sleeps he will go away like a dream. She slept holding his hand❤️. He slept holding her hand and Sneha's crib❤️❤️. This is bliss❤️❤️❤️.

Marriage preparations. He took their revenge👍🏼. He got Sneha's custody papers and gave the DNA test results after the signatures. Awesome thing. The lovey-dovey moments between them confessing and showing their love for each other is dreamy❤️. Finally, they would get married and have their happily ever after❤️.

This is so brilliant Sur🤗. I loved loved loved it❤️.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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"And I cannot wait to make love to you on our marital bed."


I think I just died☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Sur

Thanks for the PM first.

What a beautiful short it is.

The extent of humiliation she faced from the basus, she was broken from inside and needed someone who can support her, understand her and who else better than RB


The way you introduced RB is very interesting, one phone call and she knew it was him


The way he feeded her the food, told her to take a nap and her fear that he will go away again and his assurance that he is never ever going to leave her is too beautifully emoted. She doesn't want him to prove anyone anything when he tells her he is ready for DNA test shows that she is now done with basus forever.


Finally the custody of sneha before their marriage is the bestest gift she got from him on their wedding.


Love to read more such shots in the future too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you for the lovely story. It was as awesome. Please write more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow awesome story dear ❤❤ thank you soo much for this wonderful os eagerly waiting for your next update

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