Obsession vs love - Rudhita os

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Hey guys hope u all like this. This is for my friends @786 and @Nancy.🙂🙂🙂🙂



Summer evening ...a squirrel jumped from one branch to another, and that impacted and ruffled the leaves of the Peepal tree ...as if a person who is drowned in her deep thoughts suddenly wakes up from that slumber and realizes the actualities of life !

Bondita was sitting on the cement bench of the Rose garden in choudhary mansion ... left in a void ...reviewing her life's recent happenings in that turbulent solitude!

Why these strange things are happening to me...Is it a sin to live life on one's own terms ...without doing any harm to others ...adjusting everywhere ...at every stage ..always thinking about others and their happiness? Now why I am feeling powerless ...this is the time I have to support my Anirudh ...have to do something ...to bring him back on the track of life . He is more than shocked ...in a way petrified ...unable to do anything...because he is trapped in a lustful and vengeful woman's web...he is unable to establish the truth !

Yes ...all men can stand adversity in every aspect of life but not in love !!! He thought that saudhamini was still loving him and his thoughts stopped there ..and his culture did not allow him to think beyond that point !

But Bondita knows the truth ...ego and greed lead saudhamini to take bold steps ... Then Anirudh's rejection burnt her desire and then lust dominated and fanned criminal tendencies in her ! ..Bondita met her to try and change saudhamini's attitude and make her realize, in this thirsty tryst ..what she lost and where she is heading ...she wanted to tell saudhamini ...not Anirudh , but she is doing more harm to herself .

But saudhamini is so adamant to acknowledge her sympathetic advise and abused her further more and almost pushed her out of her house . Bondita realized that a stern action is needed here to save her Anirudh!

Then ...while coming out Bondita looked back ...looked at saudhamini, just like a tigress takes a pause before pouncing on it's prey...a warning in her glares ...anger in her words ...her steps were depicting a warrior's march forward..yes a decision has been taken !

Saudhamini realized this ... was stunned and stood there as if she was stranded amidst a ring of fire ...seen Bondita's power...her strong mind ...her ability to rise from defeat in a majestic way...confidence in her body language , and her maturity when it comes to handling relationships !! There itself ...in front of her ...Bondita had seen the different shades of woman power instantaneously and a thrust towards life ! A shiver went up her spine ... for the first time a sort of realization dawned on her! ...this woman is not an ordinary mortal...looks like a holy revolution personified !

Bondita was sitting in that garden and thinking about the events of the day .

Suddenly she remembered her mother ...and she looked at her palms thoughtfully ... "Ma ..that day , in my childhood when we lost everything after the ultimate death of Bondita's father, to safe guard me you shifted to many's house but their we got nothing except pain like the beating I got from mami for my questions against the social norms of the society but MA you ...you applied oil to my palms and cried a lot for my physical pain ...but ma ...do you know ...later I experienced so much pain in life ... whenever life crushed and threw me on the ground ...I used to remember your soothing gesture and got solace and again gathered courage and fought back with every adversity ...with that beautiful thought of your love and affection ma !

Today you are not there ...but ...yes I have another ma who shaped my life ...made me realize the life's truths ... that by being calm and composed you always win the world ! I inculcated those tender feelings and caring nature of yours and am moving further in my life ...many a times running towards you I got solace in your embrace ! Today ...you also moved away from me ..to a farther destination . Where I have to seek solace ...from where I can derive that fighting spirit ..that inner strength ? kaka sasur! ...for few seconds Bondita got a ray of hope ...yes Kala is there for me ...he can understand me and give me solace in this fateful time ...A thoughtful pause ...then she shook her head with a no ! Kaka is entangled with his social commitments towards the village and there in so many things are happening at a fast pace and at this juncture bothering him is not good ! Yes ..he taught me the capability of stern action and assertive nature, taught me to work with determination ...if need arises ! She was thinking ...what to do ??!!

She knows that Anirudh is not at fault ...his only sin is slapping saudhamini in that entangling moment of seduction!...to stop her in that fanatic rage . In a sharp contrast he stood tall for having saved their marriage despite saudhamini's deadly temptations !---here the problem went much beyond a fatal attraction! Saudhamini was gaming for shifting perspective and looking for a traditionally unacceptable relationship ..with an uninterested Anirudh !

Then why saudhamini is lying ? What she wants from him ...here she got the clear answer and closed her eyes with frustration ...how is it possible to expose saudhamini and bring out the truth ?

Suddenly she remembered the words of saudhamini 'you can ask anybody from my family and friends and also our samaj people ...they will tell you how honest and respectable person I am '!

She got a clue and set herself an agenda and decided to move in that direction and explore the truth and expose the real colour of this seductress ! She tried her best to save saudhamini from defaming herself ...to settle the matter within the four walls ...but saudhamini is so adamant to act or react to Bondita 's good advice !

Now her main aim is ..saving Anirudh ...her lovable husband !

A tender hand pressed her shoulder , she heard the sweet word boudhi! She turned her head and saw batuk there with a smile on his face !She held the hands of her devar cum son cum best friend ... closed her eyes for a few seconds ..and the motherly instinct dominated in her and forgot all troubles for a second! With him she moved inside the house with a determined look !

Hazy paths are nothing new for her... always has been a lonely traveler ...nobody is there to share her sorrow, because people look upon her as a troubleshooter! .. right now, searching for solace ...yes there is a cool soul ... who can give her shoulder to lean on ...to get some peace !

As she put Binoy baba to sleep and entered her bedroom she saw a disturbed Anirudh sleeping in a curled up position. She slowly tucked herself in the bed and started visualizing next day's proceeding... As her thoughts were straying from one event to the other, she suddenly remembered, how at her Mehendi' ceremony, police came, arrested and took away Anirudh on false charges, courtesy baumik babu, and how she ran out with a haldi smeared' face to give moral support to Anirudh and handled the family members and helped Anirudh to come out clean, again, because of a repentant baumik babu ! She gathered courage, reviewed the facts file' outlined her action plan and with a shade of contentment, she slowly slipped into her sleep.

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Heh sharmila, this is one of best I have read. Awesome words, astounding dialogues, impressive narrations, most importantly mesmerizing dealings of emotions. I am overwhelmed reading your writings. Keep writing dear. 

Btw do read my SS, I have updated my SS with its part 3 continuation. Do peep in and give your comments. I love reading lovable words as a gift of encouragement. Do read and comment.

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Originally posted by: Home786

Heh sharmila, this is one of best I have read. Awesome words, astounding dialogues, impressive narrations, most importantly mesmerizing dealings of emotions. I am overwhelmed reading your writings. Keep writing dear. 

Btw do read my SS, I have updated my SS with its part 3 continuation. Do peep in and give your comments. I love reading lovable words as a gift of encouragement. Do read and comment.

Thanks and will definitely read ur ss. Glad u liked it

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This was an amazing explaination of a scenario !!

Totally stunned.

Liked the last part so much. The way you portrayed Bondita was amazing and beyond praise!!!

I loved every part of it.

You made the characters sit and walk in front of me !!!

Kudos

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Originally posted by: nancy56

This was an amazing explaination of a scenario !!

Totally stunned.

Liked the last part so much. The way you portrayed Bondita was amazing and beyond praise!!!

I loved every part of it.

You made the characters sit and walk in front of me !!!

Kudos

Thank you and glad you liked it dear.

Your these words encourages and inspires me to write more. Hope you enjoy my future works too🥳

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Love the way you penned 😳 I started to imagine reading the first para... It was just like reading books ⭐️

The obsession of mini vs love of bon is well written!! Just love your bon being fierce ,bold and fighting for her ani

Thanks for this write up 👏Do write more 🤗

Waiting to read your work

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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Love the way you penned 😳 I started to imagine reading the first para... It was just like reading books ⭐️

The obsession of mini vs love of bon is well written!! Just love your bon being fierce ,bold and fighting for her ani

Thanks for this write up 👏Do write more 🤗

Waiting to read your work

Thanks and I will definitely write if you have any criticism or suggestions do share. 😊

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Originally posted by: Past1

Thanks and I will definitely write if you have any criticism or suggestions do share. 😊

There is no criticism yaar (how do I call you?)

And about suggestions... You are an amazing writer and you are great at what you writing so you don't need any suggestions 😊

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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

There is no criticism yaar (how do I call you?)

And about suggestions... You are an amazing writer and you are great at what you writing so you don't need any suggestions 😊

Thanks u can call sharmila or sharmi like my family and friends call me di🙂. Hope you wouldn't mind me calling you Di

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Originally posted by: Past1

Thanks u can call sharmila or sharmi like my family and friends call me di🙂. Hope you wouldn't mind me calling you Di

Sharmi 🤗

Ofcourse you can call me di 😳 who would say no if someone call you by respect 😉

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