Rudhita AT #2|Main Dhool Hun Aasmaan Tu| - Page 32

Originally posted by: Sujz

arre woh bade log hai, comment karti hi nahi🥺

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

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Just ignore when we do that

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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

I may sound rude Shaheen but yaar please work on your editing

The names should always be written in capital letter.

Capatilize the names everytime

Try showing the emotions a bit more intensely in the next update

This one didnt need much so no problem as such

You write in script language which honestly isnt good by the writing point of view until and unless its a play

If you have written it as a play then some other things matter too

But if not dont use this technique of writing

Originally posted by: Home786

Got it 👍🏼 I try to follow in my next Os. May be I am a good creative play writer rather awesome writer. Thanks dear for your valuable words.

Anyways its good as a story just the issues is of techincalities

Originally posted by: Sujz

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Originally posted by: Sujz

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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Kahaani thodi badi hai

Sunne ka time hai toh bol

Arey kya grp be🤣

Groupism is bad

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Originally posted by: MishtiNew

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Isse Mahabharat batane ke liye time toh lagega

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Even I feel you are a playwriter than a novel writer

Anyways its good as a story just the issues is of techincalities