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Parody song is allow here?

Great initiative👍🏼⭐️

I am a writer. Being a daughter of an Army officer, I am honoured to share this poem that i wrote in honour of Martyrs and all soldiers who are serving our country

https://snehaexpression.com/2019/01/21/an-ode-to-soldiers/

Nation is safe at a price,

Let's honour the supreme sacrifice

@Alexia_Wilson

Ooo I am so much into such deep poems. ❤️I would love to know the inner meaning of this. 👏

@Koeli_Appy

such beautiful art <3 ❤️ You are so talented *cries*

@gallvanter @Braveheartdoc @Leenaa

Thank you 🤗

@suta

How have you been? missed you too🤗

@surabhi01

Parody song as in you will change the lyrics of already existing song? It shouldn't be offensive.😳

@Snehaexpression

That poem gave me goosebumps👏❤️

Hey my name is Neera . I am a 16 year old Indian girl btw 😳.

I write poetries , and I am posting 2 poems of mine here.

I am a spirit

I am a spirit with highest serenity of moon .
I am a spirit drenched in depth of sea of love.
I am a spirit scorched in fire of rage.
I am a spirit blown away by wind of fear.
I am a spirit pierced by poisonous thorns.
I am a spirit applauded by garland of oyster .
I am a spirit lost in far stretches of desert.
I am a spirit found out in scenery of woods.
I am a spirit enlightened in shine of stars.
I am a spirit cursed with dark of eclipse.
I am a spirit blessed with rays of Krishna .
I am a spirit insane in love with myself.
What am I,,,,
I am just a spirit .

By Neera

And

Illusion of reality

I smile watching scintillating fiery
A fury of stars and galaxies
Fire is not sparking
Echelon of smoke not covered skies
Sand is not irritating my eyes
Kids are not starving
Mothers hadn't lost their children
wives are not screaming
Lands are still home to creatures
Waters is still with high waves
White flowers are still blooming
Butterflies are still dancing
Birds are still making love
Red maple is still growing beautifully
Lily of incus is still favorite of honey bee
Everything is beautiful but scary ,
Nothing never last forever .
These falling star, a genie of wishes once ,
Now seem to be a messenger ,
Of something very unknown but am very scared .
This is depressing .
More scary, I am not understanding beauty of this nature .
I am fearing for something
What if we lost this beauty ,
What if we are the only reason of it .
What if innocence of eyes of animals is betrayed ,
By us only .
What if humanity extinct ,
But human left .
What if development of technology is on the cost ,
Of destroying human values .
Am not predicting all these in air ,
It is happening ,
Every second we looses our one part of humanity to devil .
Every second we destroy what we even can't think .
Every second we do something very unimportant things we should not .
I just hope all this world to
Be magical like fairy tale .
Never ending magic and laugh .
I don't see any hope we can be mature ,
Enough to accept truth of living .
We are living in a reality ,
Which is a illusion .
It's a reality of our thoughts
Not a reality with moral of humans .
Yes being human is a bliss ,
It's a blessing ,
But we have some duties to do .
We have to respect this space ,
We have to respect this nature ,
We have to respect ourselves ,
We are not a entertainer of other ,
We are a hero of our existence ,
We are a saviour of others ,
We have some work to do .
But we are doing something wrong ,
Very wrong ,
I can't explain it but can feel it .
It's very hard to connect my words .
But it's just a thing
That feel the reality
Not the illusion of be in false reality .

By Neera

Do not copy. I am the only original writer of this poetry. It is posted on instagram by my account only IE, Divine works.

Again do not copy.

I am eager to read your reactions. 😃

Must say @Neera two great poetries you have posted my dear

Must say really touching especially the first one.

By looking at your poetry I realised you are free verse poet arent you?

If you beat your wife and cry

“Justice for Priyanka Reddy”,

I’m sorry to say, but

You are just another hypocrite.

If you make your child feel unsafe at home

And then you write slogans asking

Justice for nirbhaya,

You are a fox hiding in the bush.

If you oppress women in the name of religion,

Then please don’t say,

Justice for Vayalar girls has not been served.

You want to beat, abuse and hang the rapist,

But my question to you is,

When are you going to kill the demon in you.

Let every women walk the path they want,

Let them decide which men to choose,

Let them be their own masters.

Isn’t it sad for you that,

Even with a degree in hand,

And every qualification in the world,

She needs to ask your permission to go anywhere?

Isn’t it sad for you that,

You were born out of a woman, but,

A girl becomes impure once she is on a period?

Maybe one day, you would change,

Then We wouldn’t have to cry,

India is unsafe place for women.

@Neera : You are only 16 and you write so well. 😲 That is seriously so amazing !

Amazing Poetry @Tanu

Must say a great message to all the people out there

Powerful and so meaningful

Well are you also a free verse poet?

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Must say @Neera two great poetries you have posted my dear

Must say really touching especially the first one.

By looking at your poetry I realised you are free verse poet arent you?

Thank you so much di or big sis. BTW are you Indian ? Yes I am a free verse poet. I am pathetic in writing rhythmic poems. Thanks so much for your appreciation.