Kalma OS - This moment should not stop .

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This moment should not stop

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Both Kalyani and malhar were on a small vacation to the hilly forest in Kerala. They were having a competition to make wild mushrooms soup but they are not available in market at that time. They decided to trek to one hilly forest and find the wild mushrooms there .

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Yes once insecurities grounded his heart his eyes. That time his eyes get curtained by these insecurities. His eyes lost that charm. That pain was doomed by a twinkle of her eyes. Yes he was layered himself with stoned heart. He became cruel. But that good gentle soul still lied captive in hundreds of cages by his pain and suffering.


Guys will update tomorrow. Scene inspiration from a Korean video. Good night all šŸ¤—


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting teaser Neera

please continue when you get time

(it's ok if you continue after your all exams)

All the bestšŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Interesting teaser Neera

please continue when you get time

(it's ok if you continue after your all exams)

All the bestšŸ‘šŸ¼

Bhagu my 1 practical is done today. Toh I took rest today. Toh yeh story likhi. Sirf final touch is baki.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing

Please update soon 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vermilion

Bhagu my 1 practical is done today. Toh I took rest today. Toh yeh story likhi. Sirf final touch is baki.

ok

thanks for writing ā¤ļø

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This moment should not stop


Both Kalyani and malhar were on a small vacation to a hilly forest in Kerala. They were having a competition to make wild mushrooms soup but mushrooms are not available in market at that time. They decided to trek to one hilly forest and find the wild mushrooms there. They walk there and there but didn't not able to find them.


Kalyani was moreover enjoying scenic beauty of forest and our malhar concerned with her only .


Kalyani was busy taking photos.


Kalyani :: Kya view he re baba. Maja aa gaya malhar ji.

Malhar :: Hmm

Kalyani :: ye jungle really accha hai. Thousand times better than AN. Roj drama hota rehta hai. Sacchi zoo hai Apna AN .šŸ˜†

Malhar :: Hmmmm

Kalyani :: Malhar ji hum Pillu aur aai baba Idhar ek hut banakar rehle kya. šŸ˜Ž

Malhar :: Hmmmm


Malhar was not really interested in her useless banters. But gazing her like a majnu is his favourite pass time now. 😳


Kalyani :: Kya malhar ji sirf Hmmmmmmmmm. Gillete guard se shave kariye aur jo marzi boliye . ( sarcasm ) 🄺


She shooked Him once and he came back to real world.


Malhar :: Ha Kalyani esa karte hai hum sab yahi shift Ho jate hai. Tum purani jamane like like satyam shivam sundaram ki white Saree wrap kar lena. ā˜ŗļø

(he had grin while saying this. But Kallu didn't realise his meaning)

Mai lakdi Kata karoonga. Phir hamara baccha shikari banega. Tum jungle Mai without internet reh paoongi. 🤣

Kalyani :: OK OK malhar ji that's enough meri tang kich na band Karo. Let's go further more deeper in forest. 😔


After walking some distance . Kalyani slipped out at a steep place due to mud. Malhar jumped to save her. Now what.

Romantic chakri.


They stopped after a while. One over another. Just looking into each other eyes comfortably. There was a flow of life between their souls at that moment. ā­ļø


Meri raahein tere tak hain

Tujhpe hi toh mera haq hai

Ishq mera tu beshaq hai

Tujhpe hi toh mera haq hai

Saath chodugi na tere piche aaungi

Chheen lungi ya Khuda se maang laaungi

Tere naal taqdeeran likhwaungi

Main teri ban jaaungi

hmmm

Main teri ban jaaungi

Sonh teri main kasam yehi khaungi

Kitte waadeya nu umra nibhaungi

Tujhe har waari apna banaungi

Main teri ban jaaungi

Main teri ban jaaungi


They both broke their eye contact and get up. They both were dusting away soil from their clothes. Kalyani looked on his leg. He was injured on his left leg.


Kalyani :: Malhar ji aap ko toh chot lag gayi. Wait , let me apply some ointment.

Malhar :: haa tumhe bachate vaqt lag gayi. It's OK. Vaise tum dawai bhi laai ho.

Kalyani :: I am always ready for any condition.

Kalyani :: Malhar ji main ye spray lagane wali hoo. Thoda dard hoga OK.

Malhar :: Mard ko dard nahi hota. šŸ˜Ž


Kalyani applied spray.

Malhar screamed in pain.


Malhar :: Aaaaaah 🤣

Kalyani :: Aap mard nahi rahe kya. 🤣

Malhar :: vo toh bus Mai taiyar nahi tha.


Kalyani sprayed 2-3 times more. He controlled that pain but he clutched her shoulder . He bandaged up by her.


Kalyani :: Chale kya ab

Malhar :: Haa Chalo.


He tried to get up but couldn't.

So Kalyani helped him to walk by being a support to him.

After walking some time he saw wild mushrooms in the bottom of a tree.


Malhar :: Vo Dekho Kalyani vaha wild mushrooms hai.

Kalyani :: sacchi Chalo vaha chalte hai.


They walked towards there. And start picking up mushrooms. Kalyani was really happy. 🄳


They heard roar of a wolf . It was two shining eyes in bushes. Both malhar and Kalyani run away and climb on a tree. That wolf just sat there and waiting for them to Get down from the tree.


Both Kalyani and malhar just remained on the tree silently.


Kalyani (Wispher) :: Inke toh chot lagi thi na phir bhage kaise. šŸ¤”


Malhar heard her but ignored her .


Malhar in mind :: it is just a excuse to remain close to you..


They remain silent.

After almost four hours when darkness covered sky. That wolf depart from there.

They both decided to get down.


Malhar :: Kalyani ruko. Ek baar Idhar Dekho.


The tree on which they climbed is a flowering tree with beautiful red flowers. That red flowers in darkness and moon are looking fascinating.

Kalyani saw where he pointed.


Kalyani :: kitna divine hai ye.


They continued to look in their surroundings.

After a while they saw in each other eyes.


Every time she saw in his eyes. She was forced to forget her reality. That talkative eyes open a new world , irrelevant to hustle of this world. She sailed away in those eyes. How much emotions he holds over there. That betrayed tears are still flowing in his eyes. Once sampada was ashamed for him. But what is his fault. The fault is he loved her close ones too much. Why he had to pay back for the good things. Yes once insecurities grounded his heart and his eyes. That time his eyes get curtained by these insecurities. His eyes lost that charm. That pain was doomed by a twinkle of her eyes. Yes he layered himself with stoned heart. He became cruel. But that good gentle soul still lied captive in hundreds of cages behind pain and suffering. The only bright light that brought him again back to his gentle side was Kalyani. Yes that process was slow but yes now she owns his eyes. Everytime she saw in his eyes. She drowned in them. She start a infinite journey to reach his core and search for her soul in them. But she couldn't. They stand still. Just for reaching each other heart through eyes. They don't need words to know each other thoughts. Their eyes are enough. Yes they are still looking in each other eyes. It's not false if I say their eyes are lover. These two lovers are mad in love. They confessed, proposed, married, consummate at that moment only .

Really they were lost in each other eyes. Now his eyes are full of love and mischief just because of Kalyani. It's not wrong to say she is his saviour.


Kalyani POV


"I GOT LOST IN HIS EYES, BUT TRUTH BE TOLD, I DON'T WANT TO FIND A WAY OUT,"

Just a second in these eyes, you stole all my words away.

The stars twinkled in his eyes,and the Sun itself warmed his smile . I knew I might burn . but I just had to inch a little closer.

I get lost in his eyes . i love his eye colour ,Its neither blue nor green but coffee .Coffee that keeps you up at night,Coffee that makes uh addicted. His stares are deadly, but I want to die for them.


Naino Ki To Baat Naina Jaane Hai

Sapno Ke Raaz Raina Jaane Hai

Naino Ki To Baat Naina Jaane Hai

Sapno Ke Raaz Raina Jaane Hai

Dil Ki Baatein Dhadkan Jaane Hai

Jispe Guzari Woh Tan Jaane Hai

Hum Deewane Ho Gaye Hain Aapke

Hum To Bas Itna Jaane Hai

Tu Mera Hai Sanam

Tu Hi Mera Hum Dum

Tere Sang Jeena Ab Saaton Janam

Tu Mera Hai Sanam

Tu Hi Mera Hum Dum

Tere Sang Jeena Ab Sathon Janam

Nazare Ye Aapki Karne Lagi Hoshiyarian

Kahin Kar De Na Ye Mere Liye Dushwaria

Nazare Ye Aapki Karne Lagi Hoshiyarian

Kahi Kar De Na Ye Mere Liye Dushwaria

Husan Ki Baat To Husan Hi Jaane Hai

Roop Ke Naaz To Roop Hi Jaane Hai

Sahi Galat To Darpan Jaane Hai

Jispe Guzari Woh Tan Jaane Hai

Hum Deewane Ho Gaye Hain Aapke

Hum To Bas Itna Jaane Hai

Tu Mera Hai Sanam

Tu Mera Hum Dum

Tere Sang Jeena Ab Sathon Janam

Tu Mera Hai Sanam

Tu Hi Mera Hum Dum

Tere Sang Jeena Ab Saaton Janam

Sukhe Patton Ki Tarah Thi Meri Ye Zindagi

Oss Ki Bundon Ke Jaise

Jab Se Mujhpe Tu Geeri

Sukhe Patton Ki Tarha Thi Meri Ye Zindagi

Oss Ki Bundon Ke Jaise

Jab Se Mujhpe Tu Geeri

Ruh Ki Baat To Saans Hi Jaane Hai

Honton Ki Khwaishein Pyaas Hi Jaane Hai

Kyu Jogi Ho Jogan Jaane Hai

Jispe Guzari Woh Tan Jaane Hai

Hum Deewane Ho Gaye Hain Aapke

Hum To Bas Itna Jaane Hai

Tu Mera Hai Sanam

Tu Hi Mera Hum Dum

Tere Sang Jeena Ab Sathon Janam

Tu Mera Hai Sanam

Tu Hi Mera Hum Dum

Tere Sang Jeena Ab Saaton Janam


May be its their longest eye lock .

They end up hugging each other and a forehead kiss.

Malhar POV


The after effect of the hug felt like drowning into a pool of whiskey. I had never drunk from a glass or a bottle but always from Kalyani ’s intoxicating eyes, her splendid figure, from the luster of her flowing hair.

Your hugs and kisses are like the stars that light up my life when things get dark.


Plz like and comment. 😲

Edited by Vermilion - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely ya😚. It’s nice to read something positive and romantic with my kalma. It’s refreshing from this drama. Thank you beautiful writing 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aww

Such a cute and beautiful story

loved the detailing of scene, emotional scenes, nature

KalMa are so cuteā¤ļø

thanks for writing

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aww so cute ā¤ļø kalma in a forest away from the drama in AN!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vpplinu

Lovely ya😚. It’s nice to read something positive and romantic with my kalma. It’s refreshing from this drama. Thank you beautiful writing 😊

Thanks Vpplinu. Glad you liked it.

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