Rishbala ts falling in love part 3 (last part) on 23th January

part 1:-

at darjeeling station,
a BMW car enters in there.
its a quite silent place. a man around 35 come out of car and went to counter.
man:excuse me,yeh shimla wale train kab aaye gye.
counter:3 hours late hoga.
man:kya 3 hours late hoga,okey..
the man go and sit on a bench.
a coli is sitting there.
coli:kisi lene aaye hai aap ji.
man:aapne patni ko.

at train,
a women is seen enjoying the view of mountain. she asked the tc.
women:bhai shahab aur kitna waqt lage gya.
man:3 ghanta aur.
women:thik hai..
she sat before window.
woman:arahe hai tumhare patni Rishabh kundra.

at station,

coli:aapko newspaper mein dekha hai sayad.
man:haan,dekha hoga sayd india ke top lawyers ,justice rishabh kundra.

coli:haan..aapka yahan kya kaam.
Rk:tea garden buy kiya hai yahan toh isse ke kaam se aaya hai yahan.

waise aapka koi kaam hai kya ab.
coli:na ji .
Rk:toh baat kar lete hai.wait larna bilkul na pasand hain mujhe.

at train,
women cares rishabh pic on her phone.
women :sorry jante ho aapko wait karna bilkul pasand nahi hai magar main toh train ke speed toh increase toh nahi kar sakte.
she laughs on her talks. a old woman hear her and asked.
old woman:pati hai tumhara.
women:haan..
old woman:kitne saal ho gaye saadi ke.
women:17 saal..
the woman talks to the old woman about her marital life.
at station,

Rk:akela kya karinga station mein.
kahani sunnen gye.
coli:sunaye..
magar kiske
Rk: mere kahani.

17 years ago,
Rishabh's pov,
i am Rishabh kundra,studying at university. i just fall for a girl of my class.
but unfortunately i never ever get a interaction with her.
1st me and her subject are different. we just a only one class together that also in a week.
an the girl also don't serious about study and bunk the class.
the university is ending soon.
and i want to propose her but how,
my friend ansh give me idea to write a love letter to the girl.
and i take his opinion.
it was 17 years ago so love letter waz cool at that time stuff.

whole night i write only one love letter .
and finally its done.
i describe myself, my background, my love for her in the letter. How could any girl will fall for me after reading this letter. and this happens.

next day,
i don't get chance to talk her so i went to her driver and asked for her address so that i had so scope for myself. i can't meet her after all today was last day of college. if I get the address then it will helpful.

next day,
i went to her house which i get address. its an apartment which look rich and classy people lives.
will she accept my love. I'm a student from quite middle class.

i asked for help from the watchman.
who was a nice man.
Rk:kya aap humare madat karenge.
watch:thik hai,paar kis ghar mein jaake dena hai.
Watchmen:kisko
Rk:3c flat ke ladki ko.
watchman:acha tum Madhu betiya ke pyaar mein par gaye ho.
waise woh hai bohat ache.
Rk:haan jante hai hum abhi aap jaye aur dejeye uss ye letter.
watchman:thik hai..
the watchman leaves.
i can see the home through window.but i only can see their shadow for the curtain.
precap:don't know.

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will the letter make it to its destination?

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Rishbala ts falling in love

part 2:-

Rk see under the tree shelter and wait for his lady love.

Rk:Haan karege ya naa magar aaj main sawal Ka Jawan jarur Lunga.bohat saal ho gaya.

at apartment,

a girl is dancing heart on the music.

She is practicing her classical dance.

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Mora Har Man Sukh Paayo Ri

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Albela Albela Albela

Albela Albela Albela

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Dhir Naa Naa..

Dhir Naa Naa..

Dhir Naa Naa Naa Naa

Chauki Puraao Magal Gaavo

door bell ring she stop her dancing and went to open the door and see the watchman.

watchman:madhu betiya.

Madhu:ji uncle koi kaam hai.

watchman:kaam nahi hai ye letter ek ladke ne tumhe dene ko bola hai.

Madhu:kyun ladka.

watchman:neche betha hai.

watchman leaves.

Madhu went near the window and secretly seen him,before he can see her she moved away and breathing heavily.

don't believing what she saw.

He is here..

Here comes to her.

She desperatly come the letter and start reading the letter.

She get amused reading the letter how good the guy is.

and most important thing is that she already likes him yes she likes not likes loves him a lot but never have the courage to talk to him like she is obedient to her parents.

No love sove for her.

she see him waiting for her answers. he will wait for her answers through its yes or no.

Madhu:i can't believe Rishabh bhi mujse pyaar karte hai.

main bhi usse bohat pyaar karte hoon.

magar ab main kya karo bohat nervous feeling ho rahe hai.

haan kaho ya naa.

ma papa woh kya sochenge.

main kaise kya karu.

aur itne jaldi itna bada faisla lena sahi nahi hoga.

main ma papa se baat karunge.

its a bright sunny day.

Rishabh is sitting on hot sun.

Madhu see him secretly as she dont want him to realise that she is seeing him but rk understand all this and smile at her childish nature.

Madhu feel bad as he is standing on hot for her.

she took lunch and call watchman.

Madhh:kaka aap uss yeh khana de doon aur haan ho sakte toh uss samjhu ke woh yeh na rahe.

watchman:humne toh samjhaya betiya.

magar woh nahi samjhta hai.

magar suna hai ladka bohat a ha hai mera beta arvind bhi toh same college main parta hai.

Madhu:mujhe pata hai woh kaisa hai humesha sabk madat karne wala sabki izzat karne wala.

aap abhi jaaye

watchman brings lunch for rk

Rk:yeh sab kis ke liye.

watchman:aapke liye, madhu betiya ne bejhe hai.

Rk:Hume toh usska haan kya intezar hai.

khir choro yeh lunch he le lete hai. bukh lage hai bohat.

Rk have the lunch and enjoy the food.

Rk:oh wah kamal ke khana banate haiwoh.agar Shaadi ho gaye naa toh mujhe acha khana mile gya.

Madhu see this from window and smiles.

she take the phone and call her friend.

Madhu:hello anu..Maine na bohat Paresh an ho.

anu:kya hua tujhe.

Madhu:woh jo humare university ka senior hai..wahe jo haar student KO aapne notes dete hai.

anu:haan jante hai jis ke liye aap deewani ho.woh debate pe jaaye toh tum uss debate competition ko performance samjhe ke dekh te ho Jaise madhuri dixit nach rahe hoon.

Madhu:arre uss ne mujhe letter lekha.

anu:arre toh kya hua.

Madhu:arre uss ne mujhe love letter lekha hai aur yese lekha hai naa ke main toh parke usske pas bhag jana chate ho.

anu:toh jaa na bol de tu bhi isse pyaar kart hai.

Madhu:darr lag raha hai pehli kisi ko khaha nahi...

anu:toh ek kaam kar raste pe kisi ko i love you bol de phor usske practice karle.phir usse bol de.

Madhu:uff tu bhi na chal bye.

Madhu cut the call and feeling tensed. she don't get courage to speak to Rishabh actually she in nervous.

Rishabh keep sitting there and the keep stare her every minute.

Whole day passed.

it's evening.

Rk is still sitting on there.heavy rain is happening.

Madhu see rk from balcony getting deach on rain. she feel tensed for rk

her mother come to home and see her

padmini:sorry beta late ho gaye ho.

waise dekho kon aaya hai karan ke maa.

karan ke saath hum tumhare rishta karna chate hai.

Madhu get shocked.

precap:will Rishabh and Madhu unite.

A rishta for her already. She needs to get moving.

Sorry didn't understand what Is your comment

Awesome update

Madhu also loves RK,

her parents fixed her mrg with some other guy,

waiting to know whether she will convince her parents ow will go with RK,

thanks for the update

Rishbala ts

part 3:-

Madhu get shocked to hear about her marriage alliance. she leaves her mother hand shockingly.

mother:kya hua beta.

Madhu:maa..

Main..

Main..

hum ye shaadi nahi kar sakte.

mother:paar kyu beta, karan acha ladka hai aur London settles ho raha hai tum agar aapne career settle kar sakte hoon

Madhu:maa,wajah yeh hai ke hum kisi see pyaar karte hai aur woh bhi humse bohat pyaar karte hai.

Padmini get shocked. they hear a sound and see Malik standing at door

he also hear her.

Madhu and her mother see him and get silent.

at outside,

Rk is denching in rain.watchman come to him.

watchman:beta abhi tum chale jao.

Rk:kaka aaj agar hum chale gaye naa toh woh phir himmat nahi kar payege.

at room,

Padmini:kon hai woh ladka.

Madhu:mere university se hai.

Maine kab uss baat nahi ki hai

naa woh mujse. Mere kabhi himmat nahi hui ,aur aaj pata chala uske bhi kabhi himmat nahi hui mere pas aake baat karne ki.

aaj us ne letter lekha hai aur wait kar rahe hai humare liye.

Madhu:woh bohat acha ladka hai, university mein puche best student hai.

Malik read the letter..

Madhu:papa, please aap please usse ek mouka de dege.

Aur hume bhi phir aapka jo fesla Hoga hum mann lenge.

Aaj tak kabhi aap dunno ke baat mane hai.

Obedient girl ki Tarah,ek mouka de do please.

Madhu plead with emotions.

Madhu:main usse chate ho Papa, bohat pyaar karte ho.

at ground,

Rk is sitting on rain.suddenly he can see some one coming holding umbrella in her hand.its a girl

he can't see her face but he realise who is the person. He smiled as she comes to meet him.

Madhu come close to him and forward her hand to him.

Madhu:aap chale humare saath ander,

hum bhi aapse pyaar karte hai. humne aapne family se baat ki hai aur woh aapse milna chate hai chale aap.

hamara haath pakre ye.

Rishabh get happy he hold her hand and stand up.

Rishabh see Madhu who stare him lovingly but Rishabh is shocked.

flashback ends.

tc:tum shock kyu ho gaye the usse dekh ke.

Rishabh laugh s.

Rishabh:kyu ki Madhu woh ladki he nahi the jis se main pyaar karta tha.

uss ladki ki driver ne mujhe janbucki galat address deya.

aur coincidently, Madhu mere university ke ek student the jisi main kabhi nahi dyan diya. Deta bhi kaise university nikal gaye,usse ladki ke peche ghum ke kaise dekhta kisi aur ko.

tc:aur tumhare biwi.woh kon hai

Rk:madhubala Rishabh kundra hai.

humare sacha pyaar..

uss din jo Maine uska haath pakra woh aaj tak nahi chora.

uss din maine uss chehre ki masumiyat mein kuch nahi bol paya.main pata Nahi heran tha aur main sach batao kho sa gaya tha usse dekh kar.

Out of bold.

Won dukh nahi dena chata tha maine usee aur aaj tak kabhi pata nahi chalne dia ke woh letter uske liye nahi kisi aur ke liye tha,

woh bardas nahi kar payege aur na main usse kho sakta hoon.

woh uss ne bhi mere liye bohat kuch kiya hain.ma baap ka bohat paisa tha lekin phir bhi mere saath ek room ke ghar mein rahe,

pehli zada kamai nahi hote the magar uss ne kabhi kuch nahi kaha ..

jo mila usse main kush the kabhi uff nahi ki...

usse pyaar nahi karunga toh kisi se pyaar karunga.

Usske saath rehte rehte yeh bhi bhul gaya ,kab main usse mohabat karna lega.

rk hear the sound of train ,

train come. stand up and search for madhu

Madhu come out from train. Rk see her and smiles.

Madhu come to him smiling .

Madhu:kaise hoo aap.

Rk:tumhare bina kaise ho sakta hoon.

Madhu: Arjun kaha hai.

Rk:aapka ladla so raha hai.

Madhu:jaldi chale ghar aaj uska 13th birthday hai

Rk:haan chalo. humne thode na roka hai iss mare hui se station mein tumhe...

Madhu :maare hui..

Rk:maare hui toh aur kya,

dur dur tak koi banda nahi dekha jo bhi dekha ta hai lagta hai abhi nikle gya..

Madhu laughs,rk side hug madhu

they leaves the station

.TC see them leaving and blessed them for future.

They got married and now have teenage son. Things worked out well.