RoNakshi OS : Bheegi bheegi Raton mein

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This os is something I wanted to write since the time ronakshi's rain dance sequence was out.. But real life happened so I couldn't write.. Now that I have got some little time I wanted to write this down and fill in my obession with them

This one is in special dedication to my lovely forum friends nimaa, shanuu, rosh, anushkii, prii, ara , ankuu , wasuu, and also to my all my lovely readers..

It's all because of you guys that I started writing again.. Your words are what makes my effort worthwhile

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The rain sequence was finally shot and netra ji was more than happy that her TRP is going to shoot up..

Even pooja was happy for seeing a live rain dance performance and was in all praises for her bhabhi..

Sonakshi was feeling relaxed too cause after all Rohit was there for her and she only imagined him all the while performing the song.. Who would know it better than her that how badly she wanted Rohit to be there instead of sumit!!

In short, everyone was in place with there emotions except for Rohit, something changed in him after seeing the dance and he was not able to come in terms with it.. He was deep engrossed in some kind of thought.. When sona's voice borought him out of his world..

" Rohitttt... Rohittt.. Kahan kho gaye ho?!! Kab se bula rahi hoon" Sona shaked him a little and brought him back to reality..

" Kya bhabhi aap bhi... Rohit aapko aise sexy bheega hua dekh ke mesmerized hogaya hai.. " Pooja quipped in a mischievous tone to Rohit

"Kya Pooja.. Kuch bhi bol rahi ho" Sonakshi said to Pooja a little embarrassed before she could continue any further.. Rohit said in a irritated tone.. "Kya sexy, she was not looking sexy.. And yeh kya tareeka hai apni bhabhi se baat karne ka... "

Sonakshi and Pooja were baffled hearing Rohit.. This was the first time Rohit spoke that way.. Sonakshi was more than surprised.. She didn't understand what suddenly transpired in him..she wanted to ask him.. But Pooja started "acha ok Rohit calm down.. Aisa kya hogaya achanak se "

And that's when Rohit realized what he spoke.. Even he couldn't understand what happened to him and why he said that... Trying to avoid the conversation further..

"Kuch nahi hua hai.. Mujhe kya hoga.. It's just that woh bheegi hui hai.. And she will catch cold.. Ab tak madam ne 15 takes le liye hai.. She will definitely catch fever if she doesn't change .. So thats why!! " Rohit said in concern but there was something.. Sona was observinv him all the while... She could sense his shallow breathing.. She knew he cared for her.. She understood his concern but there was something else.. and now she was sure of it..

Pooja's words brought her out of trance..

" Acha acha, theek hai Rohit.. Bhabhi abhi change kar lengi.. Don't worry.. And listen I am going to my friends party here.. It's a few minutes drive from here.. So I will come home directly and I have informed mom and dad.. So don't worry " Pooja said in a flow and Rohit and Sona just noded an ok but Rohit continued.. " Woh sab theek hai.. Lekin tum Ravi ke saath jao.. Go in my car.. Mein aur sona uske gaadi mein chale jaayengey... " He ordered Pooja.. And Pooja agreed and left from there..

The team had also packed up and had left.. That left only Rohit and sonakshi there..

After Pooja left, Rohit turned towards sonakshi and saw her looking at him with questions.. But even he had the same questions.. and sadly he couldn't see the answer.. So he just thought of avoiding it..

"Ab poori raat aise hi bheege hua rehna hai.. Sardi lag jaayegi.. Change karlo" Rohit said in irritation to Sona.. And Sona could sense him..but she thought it was his concern and she was overdoing it but her heart was not ready to accept it..

"Haan baba chalo.. I will change.. Ok.. Happy ?!! " Sona said smiling hoping that he will atleast smile back.. But he didn't.. Now all her doubts turning out to be true..

They started walking down the stairs.. And Rohit held her hand.. It was more tight than usual.. As if if he would not hold her that tight then she would vanish in air.. That grip of his hand on her meant something more and she knew this time for sure that he was jealous.. Sona thought to address his jealous heart after she changes..

They reached sona's green room and Sona went to change.. Like a well mannered gentleman he waited outside..

He actually thanked his stars that he got some lone time so that he could sort his thoughts out

Rohit's self thoughts( antar aatma)

Tu kar kya raha hai??!! What us wrong with you??!! Why are behaving rough with her?!! Usne aisa kya kar diya??!!!! What the hell is wrong!?!!!

Oh!Mr.dr.surgeon .. Har baat pe mujhe hi tumhe clarification deni padti hai.. Pyaar hua tabhi mein aaya tha batane.. Aur ab jealous ho.. Yeh bhi samjhani padegi???!!! How dumb can you get??!!!

What??!!! Jealous??!! Aur woh bhi uss langoor se.. Never.. Why would I be jealous.. Maine hi toh sona ko encourage kiya tha woh sequence karne ke liye.. Then why would I be jealous.. I will never have problem with her romantic scenes.. It's her work!!! And I understand that..

Ohhh.. Pagal.. Did I say that you are not understanding or you are coming in between of her work.. I just said you are jealous... Jealous not because of that langoor... But because you wanted to be the first one with whom your Sona experiences all this... You want to be the first one to touch her in those wet drops.. You wanted to be the first one to hold her that close when water droplets embrace both of you.. You wanted to be the first for her who can give her those experiences.. And this you realized after seeing the dance.. So, Dr. Rohit sippy accept it that you are jealous ... And the fact that Pooja called her sexy and Sona too once compared your fire with that idiot sumit and all this Is creating havoc inside you...

Accept.. Accept it Dr. Surgeon that you are jealous. But don't be rough with her for no fault of hers and don't behave like a jerk!!! She is my Sona.. I mean our Sona.. Dare you hurt her!!!

His thoughts come to an hault when Sona walks out of her green room wearing a plain chiffon blue saree and her was left open and she had dried them.. Rohit was memerized to see her.. (Ahann.. mesmerized would be an understatement) He just couldn't take his eyes off her.. He was so lost in her until she walked up to him and shaked him..

"Rohittt.. Ho kya gaya hai tumhe.. Baar kahan ho rahe ho?" Sona asked concern evident in her voice

"Nahi, nahi kuch nahi... Mujhe kya hoga?" Rohit replied but Sona was not satisfied.. Before Sona gets to know that he was jealous he changed the topic..

" Sona... Ghar nahi chalna?!! .. It's getting late.. Cmon call shankar and ask where he is.. Ek toh thand bhi lag rahi hai.. Tumhe nahi lag rahi hai? Itni patli saree pehni hui hai..? " Rohit just went on in a flow..

"Relax Rohit.. Shankar aa jayega.. Abhi thodi der pehle hi baat hui thi.. Aata hi hoga.. And mujhe thand kaise lag sakti hai.. Mera dr. Toh mere saath hai.. " Sona replied to him and hugged him sideways and made Rohit to keep his hand around her waist.. Rohit smiled at her.. He made the grip on her waist stronger...

"Dr.hoon lekin har waqt saath mein dawaai leke nahi ghumta.. You got to take care of yourself.. Mrs. Sippy.. " Saying so he pulled her in front of him..

"Dawaayi saath leke nahi ghumte.. Magar ilaaj toh aata hai na! " "Yaad hai pichhli baar jab mein aise hi night shoot kar rahi thi woh bhi aise sprinklers waale panni ke saath.. And mujhe thand lag rahi thi.. So you gave me your jacket.. Which is my favorite now... And then jab mein uss ice truck mein freeze ho rahi thi..aur faint ho gayi thi.. then you gave me the body heat... So davaayi ho ya na.. ho mera dr. surgeon ilaaj toh jaanta hai.. " She said so and went a step closer to him and held his hands....A wide smiled crept on his lips recollecting them....And their eyes locked.. Both went back into their moments spent together.. knowingly unknowingly they created many.. and each memory had different story...

It was time for even the heaven to play it's card so that they get to add another memory and pin it up in their hearts

They were lost in each other but the sudden thunder sound brought them back to reality.. There was a sudden change in the atmosphere.. With winds blowing , thunder and lightening.... Sona clutched onto Rohit when the thunder again crackled and this time Rohit wrapped his arms around her and assured her that he was there for her.. To divert her attention Rohit started conversing.

" Yeh mumbai ke mausam ko ho kya gaya hai.. Achanak.. Bin mausam barsaat.. How is that even possible..??!! "

"Yeh mumbai hai Rohit.. Yahan mausam kabhi bhi badal jaate hain... And aise bin mausam barsaat ka aana indicates the presence of love.. Aisa tabhi hota hai.. Jab do dil aapas mein takra toh jaata hain.. Lekin phir kabhi juda nahi ho paata" Sonakshi replied to him with a dreamy look on her face..

"Acha.. Aisa bhi hota hai.. I watch only Hollywood isiliye mujhe itna saara bollywood dialogues ke baare mein nahi maloom..bohat ache se yaad hain tumhe.. Not bad" Rohit said looking teasingly at her.. And she playfully hit him... "Kuch bhi Rohit.. Yeh koi dialogue nahi hai... This is what I feel.. Tum bhi baakiyon ki tarah mere feelings ko dialogue samajhne lage ho.." She made a sad face and moved away from her.. Rohit thought be actually made her upset ... "Heyy Heyy.. Sona.. Aisa kuch nahi hai.. Mein sirf mazak kar raha tha... Ofc i watch bollywood.. Tumhe yaad hai na uss din.. Maine ddlj ka prank hi toh kiya tha tumpe... And and.. I never consider your feelings as dialougues.. Never... You are misunderstanding me " Rohit in a guilt tone and all the while Sona was smiling ineardly.. "Sona Sona.. Please.. " And he was cut in between.. " Shhh.. Rohittt... Calm down.. Mein sirf tumhari taang kheech rahi thi... Tumhare alava mujhe aaj tak kisi ne samjha hi nahi.. Not even my mom... It's you who has understood me in and out... completely.. Tum mujhe kabhi hurt kar hi nahi sakte.. Yeh permission tumne apne aapko bhi nahi di hai.. " She said cupping his face.. And Rohit became emotional and Sona slightly wiped his tears which were visible to her in the corners of eyes.. And Rohit just smiled...

The wind started to blow wild.. And the weather was demanding people to stay in..

"Sona.. let's go in.. And stay in your green room..its not safe here.. " Rohit said holding her hand and dragging her hand..

Sona let go off her hand from his.. " Kya Rohit.. Boring jaise baat mat karo.. Yeh sardi ki mausam ki pehli baarish hai... I am not going in without getting drenched... " Sona said stopping midway and opening her arms looking up.. As if welcoming the rain.. The wind blew across her face and through her hairs making Rohit rooted in his position.. He just kept looking at her.. And time seemed to stop.. But both of them were brought back to senses when they heard some sound!

They heard some crashing sound.. A few metres away from where they were so they went to check.. And all they could find was a cycle left behind and an old radio..

"Look Rohit, an old Radio.. I have always loved them.. Aaj ke time pe kahan milta hai yeh"

"You are right Sona.. Lekin woh aadmi kahan gaya.. Hoga.. And we should go in.. It may rain anytime.. And moreover tum abhi itni saara bheegi ho.. Aur ab baarish hone waali hai.. Phirse bheego gi toh pakka bimaar hojaogi" Rohit said in all worry..

Sona just kept her hand on him and said.. "Arrey baba.. Chala gaya hoga kahin..barish hone waali hai na isliye... Lekin mein yahan se kahin nahi jaa rahi hoon.. Maine kaha na.. Jab tak tum ho.. Mujhe koi bimaari nahi hi sakti.. Stop worrying so much and tum aisa bol rahe ho.. Kabhi kabhi toh mujhe 20-25 baar bheegna padta hai ek scene ke liye... Agar yeh baarish thodi der pehle hui hoti toh.. Netra ji sprinklers chalu nahi karti.. Aur mujhe iss baarish mein hi sumit ke saath woh gaana shoot karna padta.. " As soon as those words left her lips.. Rohit got annoyed.. And he lifted Sona with a jerk such that the radio hit the rock and automatically it switched on.. There was now a different intensity in the air.. Rohit looked at Sona with a little hurt, a little anger and Sona could see it too... There was a different rage in his eyes..The wind blew heavily across them.. Sona's hair came across her hair and Rohit pushed them aside.. And the heaven chose the right moment to put it's showers on..

Mumbai ke iss sardi waale mausam ki pehli baarish mein humara agla gaana unn lovers ke liye jinhe apne pyaar ke saath kuch waqt btana hai.. Jin ka dil jal toh raha hai.. Lekin bol nahi paa raha hai.. So yeh gaana un sabhi lovers ke liye..

As the Rj finished.. The song started to play..

Bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Aisi barsaaton mein aao na

Ho, bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Aisi barsaaton mein aao na

Oh, aisi barsaaton mein aao na


Rohit and sona were getting completely drenched in rain.. Rohit's intense eyes we're causing havoc in sona.. Rohit's shirt clung on to his well chisled body exposing his perfect physique and sona's saree hug her body at the right places and the water drops were tracing the outline of her figure... Both of them were looking irresistible.. Rohit slid his hands along her waist and brought her closer to him.. His cold hands on her heated body.. And the blush automatically appeared on her face... Even in the dim night light he could see her face... Smthg be became secretly proud of.. Which only he could do to her.. Sona's hand clutched his shirt and she hugged him in a desire for more... He bent her down... And kissed her neck.. The water droplets from his hair travelled along her neck length .. He smiled seeing sona's racing hearbeats.. He lifted her up and swirled her towards his side and then came closer and wrapped himself behind her wrapping his hands around her waist..

As the song proceeded further.. giving his green heart some peace in its lyrics and solace in sona.. Oh how he loved rain today!

Dhadkanon mein aa gaya hai

Ek nagma tere pyaar ka

Jaise koi sur mila ho

Dil ke taar se dil ke taar ka

Pal ki hansi mein

Yunhi dillagi mein yeh dil gaya

Hamein kya mila hai

Tumhe to mera dil mil gaya

Their bodies were sticking to each other feeling each other's every bit.. Sona's hearbeats raced as if they the would jump out any time soon.. She went down on his body and arched herself towards him and went behind and hugged him... Rohit pulled her from behind to front and kept her hand on his heart.. And traced the outline of her face, with his fingers, even the water traced her face.. Sona moved her face sideways causing her wet hair to flip and fall on her face.. Rohit seductively uses his finger and turns Sona to face him and pushes the wet strands behind d her face... She smiled.. Rohit turned her around gentle wrapped his hands around her neck and tilted back..

Leke pyaar aanhkon mein

Leke pyaar aankhon mein aao na

Bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Ho, bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Aisi barsaaton mein aao na

Ho, aisi barsaaton mein aao na, aao na

The words of the song stating his mind and sona's blush, her heartbeats giving him answers they moved in sync with each other..

Sona moved away from Rohit and turned towards him.. As the song voiced his inner thoughts.. With all the love in her eyes.. She traced her fingers along his face .. And down his neck.. And so did the droplets This time Rohit had his hearbeats running.. She bent in and kissed his neck sucking in those drops kissing him... Making Rohit's grip on her waist.. She smiled... She too loved the effect she was having on him... Rohit's hands traveled from her waist to her bare back.. And he pulled her away from him gently yet fiercely.. He bent in kissed her right above her cleavage.. Sucking in the water drops from the saree..

Bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Oh, bheegi bheegi raaton mein phir tum aao na

Aisi barsaaton mein aao na

Ho, aisi barsaaton mein aao na, aao na, na na na

As the song approched it's end...

Rohit dropped kisses upwards through her neck and he could feel every inch of her body against him... He made her stand in a normal position and traced his fingers along her arms and fingers.. and interlocked his fingers with hers.. Brought himself closer to her face and placed a kiss on her forehead.... And touched his forhead with hers ...


As the song ended.. Even the radio stopped.. Ab itni barsaat mein radio kharab nahi ho jaayega.. 😆


They parted.. But the rain still didn't stop... Rohit cupped her face.. "Sona.. Main woh.... Woh main.. " Rohit tried hard to say smthg... Sona kept her hand on his.. And pressed her cheeks into his hand.. "Shhhh... Shhh.. Rohit... Kuch samjhane ki zaroorat nahi.. Ab mila tumhare jealous dil ko rahat.. " Sona said looking at him with all the more love and Rohit had tears in his eyes.... He suddenly felt guilty.. "Sona main... " Sona wiped his tears " Shhh.. Rohit... Maine kaha na.. Kuch samjhane ki zaroorat nahi hai.. And guilty feel karne ki bilkul bhi zaroorat nahi... Coz as I said.. You can never hurt me.. Yeh permission tumne apne aap ko bhi nahi di hai..... And Rohit.. I know tumhe mere kaam ko lekar ya.. Romantic scene ko lekar kabhi koi problem nahi hogi.. " She cupped her face this time and continued " Tum iss liye jealous the kyunki tum woh pehele insaan banane chahte the jiske saath mein special moments create karodon kisi aur se pehle... And believe me you will always be the first one and the last one jiske saath mein special moments bana sakti hoon.. Aur kisi ke saath bhi nahi... Woh jo sumit ke saath thi.. Woh parvati thi.. Yeh jo tumhare saath hai.. Yeh tumhari sonakshi hai.. Sirf aur sirf tumhari.. Sonakshi sirf Rohit ki aur kisi ki nahi... So never let any situation or anyone convince you otherwise... I will always love you.. You are one who rules my heart.. And it will be only you Rohit.. Forever.. I love you Rohit.. " As she finished.. Rohit was surprised listening to her..he didn't know someone can know him this well.. His every feeling was voiced out cent per cent right by his lady love and it was overwhelming.. Seeing hum surprised that way.. .. "Aise kya dekh rahe ho... Sirf tumhi mujhe bina kuch kahe samjh nahi sakte Rohit.. Mein bhi tumhe samjh sakti hoon.. " Sona said with intensity... And without waiting any further.. Rohit crashed his lips on to her already wet lips.. taking her by surprise but she smiled.. Letting him in and reciprocated the same passion And the rain drops started to pour harder... The kiss got intense Rohit sucked in every drop of water that made their way to sona's lips... He kissed her as if he would die if he left her.. She kissed her as if her every breath depended on him... She clutched his wet hairs and her hands traveled along them pulling him more closer to him and Rohit smiled his hands traveled from her face to get waist and then to back of her neck.. Pulling her too closer to him.. He dominated over her and sucked on to her lower lip along with the droplets..and she let out a small one and Rohit smiled.. They parted due to lack of oxygen.. They parted but rested against eacother's foreheads.. Smiling... And breathing heavily.. Along with the rhythmic sound of rain drops there was another sound... Sound of their heartbeats beating for each other.. With the rain witnessing the lovers passionate rendezvous they were eacother's forever with every thing...

"Aisi barsaatein mein sirf mein tumhare saath aise moments create kar sakta hoon... And now I know I will be always your first and last.. " And he hugged her tight.. She too hugged him.. And whispered.. "Aise barsaaton mein sirf mein hi rahoongi tumhare paas.. And I love the jealous Rohit if you keep giving me such sweet surprises.. " And burried her face in his chest.. Rohit smiled ever so widely and his grip got just got stronger... He found his solace and so did she.

The night was sealed the perfect way with heaven showering their blessings on the madly in love in couple through those rain drops...

Indeed.. Bin mausam barsaat tabhi aati hai jab do dil ek dusre aise takrate hain jaise kabhi unhe koi juda na kar sake...



The end

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Holaaa...Readers.. 🤗🤗

So how was this.. Liked it?? Looking forward to read your comments..

Roses and chappals welcomed.. 🤗

This is the second type I typed the entire thing.. The first one I typed got deleted.. This was supposed to be there on Monday... But never mind... I still hope that all of you liked it... If not I am sorry for letting you down.. And please pardon my mistakes and typos

And thanks a lot for all your love in all my previous works😇😄 I know I have another of my os pending, I will be updating that too.. Couldn't stop myself from writing this.. 😆😆

Song: bheegi bheegi raaton mein

Singer: Adnan Sami

Love, Alisha ❤😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Areyyy meri aluuu 🤗yaar I so wish we see something such in the show but no. That doesn’t matter you know, you have written soooo well that woh kami bhi abh puri hogayi😳 what a beautiful piece and hats off for the beautiful song you associated along. Thank you for remembering me up before you started the story,I feel indeed special and lots of love to you.

Keep writing and you are going to rock in all your write ups ahead.

Tc and hugs.

Merry Christmas⭐️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aluuuuu..this did smthg to me!!!🙈💞💞🔥

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was pure love♥️

I wish i could react with heart on like button as on Facebook we do..

Seriously it was so so amazing..👍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice! A different take on the sequence was fresh and enjoyable read too.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aluuuu finally you penned down our another wish of seeing jealous Rohit during that scene 😍 Your take on that scene was just love💕 Pure and filled with emotions. Rohit being guilty and jealous at the same time was love❤️

Sikku please take some suggestions from the writers here🙄

Come back soon with your day out os 😘

Lots of love Alu baby💕

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Areyyy meri aluuu 🤗yaar I so wish we see something such in the show but no. That doesn’t matter you know, you have written soooo well that woh kami bhi abh puri hogayi😳 what a beautiful piece and hats off for the beautiful song you associated along. Thank you for remembering me up before you started the story,I feel indeed special and lots of love to you.

Keep writing and you are going to rock in all your write ups ahead.

Tc and hugs.

Merry Christmas⭐️

Thanks a ton wasuuu... 😇😘🤗🤗

Aww... That's so sweet of you... Even I wished to see something of this kind in the show.. But that's ok..

I am glad that you liked the song chosen too.. I personally love this song.. Adnan Sami holds a special place!! 😍💕💕

Thank youuu for keeping the trust with my writing💕😍❤❤

Hugs to you too.. A big waali huggie.. 🤗

Take care! 🤗

Belated Merry Christmas 🙈⭐️

Love, Aluu😘😘❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanayass

Aluuuuu..this did smthg to me!!!🙈💞💞🔥

Heyy shanuu.. My love.. 😘😘💕💕

This did smthg to you.... 🙈🙈

This is a hugeee compliment if it hit your heart somewhere... 💕💕❤❤😘😘😘🤗

I hope I could give you smthg you asked for.... 😄

Thank you loads🤗

Love, Aluu.. 😘😘❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: White_pearl_24

It was pure love♥️

I wish i could react with heart on like button as on Facebook we do..

Seriously it was so so amazing..👍😍

Awww... Thank you, thank you, thank you soo much Shilpi.. 🤗

I am really glad that you like it soo much.. Thank you for giving this writing soo much love.. 🤗

Love you...🤗❤️

Love, Alisha.. 😘❤

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Thank you so much! 💕❤🤗

Love, Alisha❤

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