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Originally posted by: Mimzy

Eeeee....I dnt knw hw to write nautanki scripts ...Dialogue ki jagah everything is mute for me😆my imagination is not fully fledged.....phir bhi lemme go and try .....

You are sounding like uru here 😆

*uru sharing her success story*

You know I was new in the forum and just for fun I wrote something on shwet ...just 1 2 lines 🤣 At that time mridhu meen and socio were only writing nautankis and I used to be their audience 😆 then getting impressed with my 2 lines , meen asked to participate in the nautankis😆 I said I dont have it in me ...😛 and she said you have to write bas 😎 and see now where is I am 🤣

So I can do it , so can you😛😎 ( guruji giving motivation)

Originally posted by: Onyourface

Sorry mein sochte sochte so gayi thi

Meenu thinks * yeh mishti toh badi chalak nikli mujhe laga voh bewakuf gusse mein kuch gadbad karegi jiska faayda utha ke main mishti aur abir ko alag kar dungi ...lekin isne toh police complaint kar di

Meenu:*calls laxman* laxman abhi ke abhi Jaake kahi chup jao

Laxman: haan lekin kyun ... raat ko hide and seek kyun khelna hai aapko

Meenu: lohipinino dobo daffod ....kisi safe jagah jaa ke chup jao ....aur kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahie ke tumhe pata hai ki nishant addict hai ...samjhi Gayo...

Laxman: arey arey lekin Hua kya ...main kaha chipne jau

Meenu: vo sab batane ka abhi waqt nahi hai ...bas kisi ko kuch mat batana ...vahan chupo jahan tumhe protection mile...samjhi gayo ....

Laxman: hello ....hello....... hello....yeh sab kya ho raha hai...kaha chupu...protection kaha milti hai ?

.....

Rajkot Jail

Kunal: ( screaming inside the jail) inspector mujhe abhi ke abhi release karo ...Maine nishant ko drink nahi pilayi hai yaar ....Maine sirf ek glass mein sirf alcohol mix ki thi bas .... crime tab hota jab Maine use alcohol diya hota ....for God sake ...mujhe nahi pata tha vo addict tha....Maine bas mix ki thi alcohol bas ...pilayi nahi thi

Inspector: dry state mein kisi ki party mein daaru leke jata hai ...kyun re .. vo bhi glass mein sirf mix karne ke liye ...kyun sherbet aur daaru ki love story banana thi tujhe ??....main bewakuf hun aisa likha kya mere chehre pe , haan shaane...muh bandh rakh ? Tu toh lamba jayega jail mein

Kunal: aap samajh nahi rahe ho main kya keh raha hun ...main criminal nahi hun

Inspector: yahan har koi yahi bolta hai kuch naya bol

*enters meenu running*

Meenu:*screening* kaha hai...kaha hai ...mera beta kunal ...kiski himmat hui Rajvansh parivaar ke bete ko jail mein daal ne ki

Inspector: aeeeee yeh tumhare daddy ka ghar nahi hai ...police station mein Chilana bandh karo

Meenu: main Meenakshi rajvansh hun ....

Inspector: haan vo naam nahi bolti toh bhi aapke haav bhaav se pata lag gaya tha humko

Meenu: mere bete ke khilaf complaint kisne ki?

BP: humne

Meenu: aapki beti toh befizul ke Ilzaam laga chu hai hum pe ...ab aap bhi yeh karne pe utar aaye

BP: na hamari beti kisi pe galat ilzaan lagati hai aur na hi hum ...galat ilzaam lagana , logo ki zindagi ke saath khilvaad karna, apne maksat ke liye dusro ka istamal karma, aise sanskar humne hamare bachho ko nahi diye ...

Mujhe thoda time lag raha hai form mein aane mein

omgg Uru meri jaan superb re everyone right on point... you better join the writing team yaar 👏👏🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Mimzy

Show mein naa sahi imagination mein khulega....🤣

Futbal match nahin mila.....toh

RV vs Mah wrestling match pls likho naaa.....

Abir vs Nannu😆 u can make them shirtless in ur nautanki......they can remove their shirts to impress mishti🤣

ohhh mini you have some crazy ideas re.. come on you too start writing like uru said... 🥳

Originally posted by: Onyourface

Toh Christmas aate aate Feb ho jayega...long way to go 😆

ohhooo then new year in march n valentine in april, holi in may 😆

Originally posted by: Onyourface

Sorry mein sochte sochte so gayi thi

Meenu thinks * yeh mishti toh badi chalak nikli mujhe laga voh bewakuf gusse mein kuch gadbad karegi jiska faayda utha ke main mishti aur abir ko alag kar dungi ...lekin isne toh police complaint kar di

Meenu:*calls laxman* laxman abhi ke abhi Jaake kahi chup jao

Laxman: haan lekin kyun ... raat ko hide and seek kyun khelna hai aapko

Meenu: lohipinino dobo daffod ....kisi safe jagah jaa ke chup jao ....aur kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahie ke tumhe pata hai ki nishant addict hai ...samjhi Gayo...

Laxman: arey arey lekin Hua kya ...main kaha chipne jau

Meenu: vo sab batane ka abhi waqt nahi hai ...bas kisi ko kuch mat batana ...vahan chupo jahan tumhe protection mile...samjhi gayo ....

Laxman: hello ....hello....... hello....yeh sab kya ho raha hai...kaha chupu...protection kaha milti hai ?

.....

Rajkot Jail

Kunal: ( screaming inside the jail) inspector mujhe abhi ke abhi release karo ...Maine nishant ko drink nahi pilayi hai yaar ....Maine sirf ek glass mein sirf alcohol mix ki thi bas .... crime tab hota jab Maine use alcohol diya hota ....for God sake ...mujhe nahi pata tha vo addict tha....Maine bas mix ki thi alcohol bas ...pilayi nahi thi

Inspector: dry state mein kisi ki party mein daaru leke jata hai ...kyun re .. vo bhi glass mein sirf mix karne ke liye ...kyun sherbet aur daaru ki love story banana thi tujhe ??....main bewakuf hun aisa likha kya mere chehre pe , haan shaane...muh bandh rakh ? Tu toh lamba jayega jail mein

Kunal: aap samajh nahi rahe ho main kya keh raha hun ...main criminal nahi hun

Inspector: yahan har koi yahi bolta hai kuch naya bol

*enters meenu running*

Meenu:*screening* kaha hai...kaha hai ...mera beta kunal ...kiski himmat hui Rajvansh parivaar ke bete ko jail mein daal ne ki

Inspector: aeeeee yeh tumhare daddy ka ghar nahi hai ...police station mein Chilana bandh karo

Meenu: main Meenakshi rajvansh hun ....

Inspector: haan vo naam nahi bolti toh bhi aapke haav bhaav se pata lag gaya tha humko

Meenu: mere bete ke khilaf complaint kisne ki?

BP: humne

Meenu: aapki beti toh befizul ke Ilzaam laga chu hai hum pe ...ab aap bhi yeh karne pe utar aaye

BP: na hamari beti kisi pe galat ilzaan lagati hai aur na hi hum ...galat ilzaam lagana , logo ki zindagi ke saath khilvaad karna, apne maksat ke liye dusro ka istamal karma, aise sanskar humne hamare bachho ko nahi diye ...

Mujhe thoda time lag raha hai form mein aane mein

🤣🤣 this is epic🤣 don't worry Uru, you are in full form🥳

Kunal forgot his usual dialogue" yeh sab Mihsti ki vajese"🤣🤣

@bold - couldn't control myself ROFL... Literally

🤣

@ italics - epic

Originally posted by: Onyourface

You are sounding like uru here 😆

*uru sharing her success story*

You know I was new in the forum and just for fun I wrote something on shwet ...just 1 2 lines 🤣 At that time mridhu meen and socio were only writing nautankis and I used to be their audience 😆 then getting impressed with my 2 lines , meen asked to participate in the nautankis😆 I said I dont have it in me ...😛 and she said you have to write bas 😎 and see now where is I am 🤣

So I can do it , so can you😛😎 ( guruji giving motivation)

Ayee.....I dnt have a natural flair for hindi as its not my first language...so getting stuck.....I am PMing u something ...just proofread it and continue as I got stuck ....I dnt knw hw to proceed...🤣

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

ohhh mini you have some crazy ideas re.. come on you too start writing like uru said... 🥳

Ayee...diyaaa trying....😒I am not sure of the success😆

Originally posted by: Mimzy

Ayee...diyaaa trying....😒I am not sure of the success😆

are try dear you do have that nautanki trait in you.. come on Sr cheli of uru guruji also supporting you 👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

omgg Uru meri jaan superb re everyone right on point... you better join the writing team yaar 👏👏🤗🤗

😆🤣🤣 it would have been a full fledged comedy show by now 😆

Originally posted by: Samyuktha123

🤣🤣 this is epic🤣 don't worry Uru, you are in full form🥳

Kunal forgot his usual dialogue" yeh sab Mihsti ki vajese"🤣🤣

@bold - couldn't control myself ROFL... Literally

🤣

@ italics - epic

Thank you thank you 🤣🤣🤣

I didn't realise this ..but now when you highlighted the laxman meenu convo .... I got that 🤣 the reason behind your roflong🤣🤣🤣🤣....and now even I am rofling🤣