Maudlin Sinisters PreRish FF (Ch4 pg7 dt 29/11/19) - Page 7

Amazing update Please continue

Hey Love... I reread the whole thing

Chapter 4 was awesome. I loved how you brought out prerna's guilt and her hesitation. I could have never portrayed the way you did. Kudos to you. The whole thing has become so intriguing. Loved it. Continue soon.

PS - Rishabh telling her not to fall in love👏👏👏 I fell in love with you for that scene

Originally posted by: mitras

You see since Tomatoes and lemons can be costly, would rather use comment to describe this. 😊

You may have termed it as mess, but the chapter brings forth the turmoil they feel. The game revenge may yield you satisfaction to one for some extent but it can also bring in the fruit of gulit.

Nicely written chapter😊

Hahaha, seems like onions too followed the suit of tomatoes and lemons. 🤣

Thank you so much for staying and keeping up with my irregularities with update. I hardly get time to pen it out and then type in. But would soon try to update the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey!

This was really interesting because P isn’t one dimensional at all. The empathetic side of hers and the coldness exuded by him are in brand with their basic characteristics.

Glad you found it interesting. I didn't wish to make her character come as flat when there's much potential to shape up and moreover it's a writer's job to bring out the pleasure in pains. Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: MR21

Interesting chapter. He asked her to stop the growing feelings and she agreed too. What's the past with Prerna and why they wanted to take revenge on Basus. Both sides of Prerna are confusing but this increases she is multidimensional. She is sympathetic and also revengeful. Anurag and she had a painful past. And she along with Bajaj had a past for which they are together for revenge. I really wanted to know about the past now. Bajaj looks scary with his thirst for revenge.

Amazing update. Please do continue soon.

Feels great to know how you felt about the episode. There is much dimensions to their characters as well the events that have brought them together to be a team. There's a long running story of betrayal and the survival; it's going to gear for worst scenes and off course mystery to role up further. Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: MR21

Interesting chapter. He asked her to stop the growing feelings and she agreed too. What's the past with Prerna and why they wanted to take revenge on Basus. Both sides of Prerna are confusing but this increases she is multidimensional. She is sympathetic and also revengeful. Anurag and she had a painful past. And she along with Bajaj had a past for which they are together for revenge. I really wanted to know about the past now. Bajaj looks scary with his thirst for revenge.

Amazing update. Please do continue soon.

Feels great to know how you felt about the things heading ahead. They are going to be intense and a lot more hideous with their choices but the events putting them together would always favor. Soon things would rile up for more mystery with a slight revelations of past and how do they came together as a team. I hope the plot line maintains it's intrigue. Thank you so much for putting up with this lazy and busy writer.❤️

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update 👏

Prerna's character has many layers👏

We got to see Rishabh's darkest side😈

This chapter has increased the mystery element

What is PreRish's past that has made them revengeful

Waiting for next

Thank you so much ❤️

Mystery is yet to begin and rile up for twists and rollercoaster ride ahead.

Originally posted by: Kira_James

Amazing update Please continue

Thank you ❤️ Would try my best before this year ends😝

Originally posted by: Phoenix_75

Hey Love... I reread the whole thing

Chapter 4 was awesome. I loved how you brought out prerna's guilt and her hesitation. I could have never portrayed the way you did. Kudos to you. The whole thing has become so intriguing. Loved it. Continue soon.

PS - Rishabh telling her not to fall in love👏👏👏 I fell in love with you for that scene

Here comes my favorite reader to this story ♥️

I hope it fell into the right sequence of guilt and empathy that you wanted Prerna to have for Anurag and off course when the rollercoaster ride is around (as you might have guessed by now) I missed you really bad. Trust me, you would have portrayed your best and infact better than me because these characters were what you inspired me to write and the owner of the imagination would surely have brought the gem with her story. You would have made it better than I could;admit it. Hahaha, initially I felt that scene might give uneasy vibes to some depending on whom this story was based on but now I am relieved.

PS: Your comments makes me write more so gotta check my urge meanwhile.☺️

hey sorry haven't commented before, just got round to reading all the chapters. very dark & intense. a little complicated but the writing is fantastic.