Maudlin Sinisters PreRish FF (Ch4 pg7 dt 29/11/19) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -jass-

Chapter - 4 = Romantic #Perish!

Oh, darling! I would look ahead to add Romantic PreRish in future chapters. But I am really sorry for not adding them into the Chapter 4.

It's updated now, may be this new shade of them could please you better.

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Amazing update

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: mitras

A beautiful chapter😊. The equation shared among the people in here is amazing. 😊 . thanks for the pm

Thank you so much ❤️

I didn't wish to make it look bitter by the outlook of it when eventually things turn sour with our thought process. There's a lot more dimensions of people and their relationship. I hope you like them as well.

Thank you.

Chapter 4 is on page 7.

Originally posted by: MR21

Prerna making sure to keep Rishabh informed about her decisions regarding Sneha is a good step. He gives her the freedom to make decisions and she needs his consent & assurance. I LOVE this understanding between them. My lady, My man❤️.

I absolutely loved the conversation between Menaka and Prerna. A completely different take on their first meeting. Damn, she got to know about Prerna's love for Rishabh in their first meet. So for Rishabh, he can only love Sneha, well felt the emotion for the first time for Sneha. The whole past of how Menaka had to go through PPD after her delivery is very well written. People don't understand how many mothers suffer from PPD after delivery, especially in India. Menaka got a person who understands and loves her, she took the right decision at the right time. So, now Prerna had to make sure that Rishabh loves himself first and then he loves her. Tough work.

Awesome update. Please do continue soon.

This chapter is the best one of the three for me.

Understanding between couple is the most integral part of their relationship. Moreover, Prerna is new to the Parenthood and is considerable enough to know his opinion before she dug deep into his past.

Meneka is rather a supporting friend to PreRish than the so called villain as CVs implied in KZK1. Everyone is bound with circumstances and our emotions twist events unexpectedly. She was just charged up with the ignorance in her married life with Rishabh and PPD was a trigger leading a new way ahead. The duo share good equation now and it was after the divorce she could see the real Rishabh, who she wanted know instead of sacrificing her everything to gain his love.

Thank you so much for your feedback. This definitely boosts up my confidence to write more. Hope the chapter 4 suffices your interest. It's updated now.

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Oooh. This “exes can be cordial” is such a lovely idea and I really enjoyed it.

Thank you dear❤️ Hope you enjoy the ride further into this story and it's unexpected twists.

Originally posted by: Phoenix_75

read the updates aaand ...WOW. I loved the third chapter...that has to be my favourite one till now . Its so real. I loved your Menaka. The divorced couple co ordinating for the sake of the child with little or no bad blood is 👏 Kudos for mentioning PPD. and thank you for inserting 'my lady' as the endearment. I had the brightest smile while reading that part. The victorian in me is awake from her deep slumber and before i go and read some period/regency works I want to thank you. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH AARUSHII. and i am so sorry i had to withdraw. i promise to TRY and give some time to this fic as it is very close to my heart . Thank you again for doing this for me. I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU ❤️

Glad to find you back here. I seriously missed you so much dear. It's your storyline taht compelled me to write more and you definitely have upper hand in it's formation than I have. I can sense the attachment you have with this and I hope the upcoming events could maintain the same flow for you.

It is you who should be thanked Natasha not me. Thank you for believing in me❤️ I love you more for this.

Btw, chapter 4 is updated now and I hope it is worth your faith in me.

You see since Tomatoes and lemons can be costly, would rather use comment to describe this. 😊

You may have termed it as mess, but the chapter brings forth the turmoil they feel. The game revenge may yield you satisfaction to one for some extent but it can also bring in the fruit of gulit.

Nicely written chapter😊

Hey!

This was really interesting because P isn’t one dimensional at all. The empathetic side of hers and the coldness exuded by him are in brand with their basic characteristics.

Interesting chapter. He asked her to stop the growing feelings and she agreed too. What's the past with Prerna and why they wanted to take revenge on Basus. Both sides of Prerna are confusing but this increases she is multidimensional. She is sympathetic and also revengeful. Anurag and she had a painful past. And she along with Bajaj had a past for which they are together for revenge. I really wanted to know about the past now. Bajaj looks scary with his thirst for revenge.

Amazing update. Please do continue soon.

Interesting update 👏

Prerna's character has many layers👏

We got to see Rishabh's darkest side😈

This chapter has increased the mystery element

What is PreRish's past that has made them revengeful

Waiting for next