OS - Forsaken Soul - Page 2

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Amazing os

I loved it.....

It really shows if someone is pushed to hard what can be the consequences.....

Roshni's anger and hate seemed valid to me!!

Aman deserved it after breaking a pure soul

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: HRfan26

That was amazinggg.. Although not something that I would want to see in the show. But still something that is very logical. It was amazingly written and I could visualize the entire scene.

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Indulekha00

Nice OS.... I mean even though Rosh did the unimaginable, liked your style.

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: UmIbrahim

Thank you. This was intended as a stand alone but if any further ideas pop up , I will try and pen it down. I have a question though, why should Roshni turn into Ayanah? If Aman truly loves her, shouldn't she be acceptable as she is? Try and stop her deeds of course but if Roshni can accept a half Jinn Aman, shouldn't she be accepted as well?

Ur story is too good please continue it want to know what step Aman will take now as to bring his Roshni back. Not necessary that Roshni should be Ayana.

This is one insane thought of making Roshni what she is here. This worked for me. This was such enjoyable read for me. While I wouldn't ask you to continue this because sometimes, when the continuation isn't thought and written - it ruins the magic of the previous write up but do write more whenever inspiration strikes!

Cheers.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

This is one insane thought of making Roshni what she is here. This worked for me. This was such enjoyable read for me. While I wouldn't ask you to continue this because sometimes, when the continuation isn't thought and written - it ruins the magic of the previous write up but do write more whenever inspiration strikes!

Cheers.

Thank you Harshada. Coming from someone who writes so well, this comment means a lot.

I have attempted to do FF’s but have left it midway, except for initial one or two. You are right, trying to force a continuation can ruin the original work .

Cheers back

Originally posted by: UmIbrahim

Thank you Harshada. Coming from someone who writes so well, this comment means a lot.

I have attempted to do FF’s but have left it midway, except for initial one or two. You are right, trying to force a continuation can ruin the original work .

Cheers back

I think, that's the story of every second person. I have dozens of half finished tales. 😆

Wow it's so beautifully written.... Loved it...

Whoaaa!😳

This was so different and so so, SAD!

I hope this doesn't happen. Reminded me of Ada, poor girl was pushed to take such a step.💔

You wrote it heartbreakingly beautifully.

I hope you write lighter ones after this 😆

Fabulous OS..The one shot gave me goosebumps literally... 👏

Beautifully Written. Well justified end too.