PreRish OS : Just Perfect 27/11 - Page 6

Awesome OS Ankie.... Loved it... The gussa of Mrs.Bajaj ....and the way she showed it was fabulous... She didn't even spare Bechare Mehra ji.😆...woh bhi kya sochtha hoga kaha phas gaya mein inn dono ke beech mein 🤣 ...but then the subtle way Rishabh cajoled her is ....the ending lines are pure love😍 ....wonderful!!!

Originally posted by: esha143

Awesome OS Ankie.... Loved it... The gussa of Mrs.Bajaj ....and the way she showed it was fabulous... She didn't even spare Bechare Mehra ji.😆...woh bhi kya sochtha hoga kaha phas gaya mein inn dono ke beech mein 🤣 ...but then the subtle way Rishabh cajoled her is ....the ending lines are pure love😍 ....wonderful!!!

this is lovely OS Ankie ji, her gussa frustration is right on top while he is busy with work... bechare Mehra ji is also not spared lol

the ending their aankhon ka ishaara and his crooked smiles and wink .. i can so imagine this

your writing in first person is such a delight to read ji 🤗 write more and soonish

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

this is lovely OS Ankie ji, her gussa frustration is right on top while he is busy with work... bechare Mehra ji is also not spared lol

the ending their aankhon ka ishaara and his crooked smiles and wink .. i can so imagine this

your writing in first person is such a delight to read ji 🤗 write more and soonish

I believe when you reach a certain age in your marriage har baat ke manana nahi hota hai. Guess that's what mature couples generally do, even if they throw a tantrum max to max but then little moments like this, makes it up unlike the honeymoon phase couples. It all about moments and living up to them 🤗

I love to write in this narrative so much. It's difficult but i LOVE IT. I have always preferred to write in this narrative but majorly people generally do not like as it's one of the most confusing and unconventional methods to write in. 🤭 But thank you soooooo much for taking out time even after so much of work you have and then reading and then commenting. Thank you 🤗 i feel so much loved 😭

Ps this has a part two 🤭

When do we get to read Part 2 .. I am just so excited for the next update narrated in your style

Please update soon!!

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

When do we get to read Part 2 .. I am just so excited for the next update narrated in your style

Please update soon!!

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

i will start to write today 👍🏼

Yey.. you start today, so happy to know that..

But the real question is when do you finish and post ☺️

Just kidding.. I'll be here to read whenever you post

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Yey.. you start today, so happy to know that..

But the real question is when do you finish and post ☺️

Just kidding.. I'll be here to read whenever you post

@sunshine i do this to all, it feels so weird to face the same 🤣

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

i am trying my best Honestly. 🤣

Well your best is what we want..