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Posted: 5 years ago
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Yeh mein kya dekh rahi hoon. Ankie ji ka OS, in this barsaat of PreRish FFs/OS

Mr. Busy Bajaj and Mrs. Angry Bajaj...what a combination Iss baar toh Mehra ki bhi class lag gayi😆

Do write more Ankie...it was nice to read this take on PreRish😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: cassiop

Hum intezar krenge.. hum intezar krenge...

Khuda kre ke qayamat aur upadate aaye..

😆 just pray that the Muse stays. 🤣
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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😆 just pray that the Muse stays. 🤣

praying 🙇‍♀️🤲🙏

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Soanz.19

Yeh mein kya dekh rahi hoon. Ankie ji ka OS, in this barsaat of PreRish FFs/OS

Mr. Busy Bajaj and Mrs. Angry Bajaj...what a combination Iss baar toh Mehra ki bhi class lag gayi😆

Do write more Ankie...it was nice to read this take on PreRish😳

thank you so much mother of 1.5yr old 🤗 hahaha itna bhi nahi 😆

Mehra ki class i wanted Prerna to take once like she kind of had of Ram 🤣 and hence here 😆

Aww thank you so much ♥️♥️♥️ you know it's difficult to write on Bajaj Because justification nahi hota. 🤔 but i will surely 👍🏼 hope it was worth your time 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

thank you so much mother of 1.5yr old 🤗 hahaha itna bhi nahi 😆

Mehra ki class i wanted Prerna to take once like she kind of had of Ram 🤣 and hence here 😆

Aww thank you so much ♥️♥️♥️ you know it's difficult to write on Bajaj Because justification nahi hota. 🤔 but i will surely 👍🏼 hope it was worth your time 🤗

Always worth reading such beautiful stories🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Soanz.19

Always worth reading such beautiful stories🤗

awwee man this feels so good 🤗
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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Wow! This is such a beautifully crafted one-shot. ❤️

I loved the narrative style. It added a unique charm and intrigue to the story. Talking about the domestic, everyday action that takes place here, credit goes to your narrative style and choice of words and sentences that elevate the ordinary and transform it into something extraordinary.

This is your best work so far. ⭐️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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How I wish I could write like you do. This is amazing and I read you are coming up with Part 2 for this (read the prompt), I am sure it will be super super awesome.. Waiting for it

Please update very very soon!!

Love

Sunshine :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Awesome my dear

It was very cute 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Wow! This is such a beautifully crafted one-shot. ❤️

I loved the narrative style. It added a unique charm and intrigue to the story. Talking about the domestic, everyday action that takes place here, credit goes to your narrative style and choice of words and sentences that elevate the ordinary and transform it into something extraordinary.

This is your best work so far. ⭐️

narrative style gets the cake honestly😆. I LOVE LOVE LOVE second person narrative so much. 😎 Difficult but i love things that are difficult you know😎. 😆 thank you so much my dearest 🤗 Because you are the one with "Highest Intensions" 😆 jokes aside. Thank you so much ♥️ i am so so so happy that you liked this stupid thingy of mine so much ♥️🤗 hope it was worth your time. Thank you ♥️🤗

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