RoshAn FS : Phool [Shot 5 (Finale) : PG 7] - Page 5

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Reserved, cos am missing to read. You wrote so many parts. Those are very short. You'll be able to catch up on it in no time😳

Will be giving feedback by morrow, Octo. Apologies for missing it. It's okay🤗

Reminds me, have missed Mahi's shot too, sorry Mahi..will do morrow.

PS : Am writing for Mahi here, cos I know she will visit here regularly. I'll let her know🤗

Madz, totally looking forward to your feedback but take your time😃

Hash how dare you say it was time pass and bkwas

it was lovely.

I found it soo beautiful

Ab toh mujhe aur bhi excitement hain ki how will you frame it

He distancing himself and she running towards him

destiny as they say

Love will win the battle no matter what

Originally posted by: munchkinland

Hash how dare you say it was time pass and bkwas

it was lovely. Su🤗

I found it soo beautiful I'm glad 😃

Ab toh mujhe aur bhi excitement hain ki how will you frame it I'll try updating soon😳

He distancing himself and she running towards him

destiny as they say Destiny😳

Love will win the battle no matter what

I'm so happy that you took out time and read this Su. Means the world to me🤗

Loved it.... Double dhamaka... U made my weekend.... 🤗

I read all chapters.

Really loved the flow, essence of characters and simplicity. Glad to see Parveen positive and a normal family. Aman's care for Roshni and staring her in sleep was adorable, and Roshni's hidden love too

Loved reference of tree, love part. It was awesome.

Farah Bonding was great and she was spontaneous. What a plan?! Roshni is too innocent and so much in love, she didn't realise she just talked to Chotu and disconnected call, and Farah told he is behosh, lol

Loved the way she ran back to him though, and hug..wow.

Keep writing.

-Madz

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Loved it.... Double dhamaka... U made my weekend.... 🤗

Aww, I'm glad. Thank you for reading😃

Originally posted by: Madhura..

I read all chapters.

Really loved the flow, essence of characters and simplicity. Glad to see Parveen positive and a normal family. Aman's care for Roshni and staring her in sleep was adorable, and Roshni's hidden love too Thank you. I'm glad the flow can be felt. I'm tired of these vamp like Moms so this Parveen is already reformed in my story😆. Both love each other but kahenge nahi😳

Loved reference of tree, love part. It was awesome. This whole story started with that idea only.😳

Farah Bonding was great and she was spontaneous. What a plan?! Roshni is too innocent and so much in love, she didn't realise she just talked to Chotu and disconnected call, and Farah told he is behosh, lol I love Farah. I wish they get her more involved in the story😃

Loved the way she ran back to him though, and hug..wow.

Keep writing.

-Madz

Thank you so much Madz. I'm glad you liked it. 😃

WHOAAA wait! So she knew it all along!😳

Aman ko itna parehsaan kiya! Not done!😳🤣

OMG. This was a real shocker. Sacchi I didn't see this coming!

The concept of this story was so beautiful ❤️

I'll remember it for loooong.

Thanks Octo :D

And sorry, there was so much excitement of exams getting over and coming back, I just forgot

Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

WHOAAA wait! So she knew it all along!😳 She Did😛

Aman ko itna parehsaan kiya! Not done!😳🤣 He had hurt her🥺

OMG. This was a real shocker. Sacchi I didn't see this coming! I'm glad I could bring in the shock element😛

The concept of this story was so beautiful ❤️ Thank you😳

I'll remember it for loooong. Aww🤗

Thanks Octo :D

And sorry, there was so much excitement of exams getting over and coming back, I just forgot

It's okay Mahi. I knew you were busy. Hota hai. Thank you for being the constant here🤗