AsYa SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho (PART 3 Page 7) UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Always_asya

Lovely update dear 👍🏼

Thank you ☺

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Hi everyone! Firstly sorry for keeping all those waiting who are reading my story. Secondly, thank you for your comments. It really means a lot and it motivates me to write more. I'm back with part 2B and will be updating part 3 in a week. Thank you for your patience.

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Part 2B

Later that night...

Zoya was sitting in the backyard with her music box in her hand. Ever since dinner, she has not been able to stop her tears. " "Ammi, Abbu, ap dono mujhe kyun iss duniya mein akele chor kar chale gy." Zoya cried. "Mera toh iss duniya mein waqai koi apna nahi." Zoya put her head in her hands and cried her heart out. "Allah Miyan kya sach mein apne mujhse dono Ammi or Abbu ko cheen liya kyunki mein unn dono k layak nahi hoon? Isliye cheena kyunki mujhe har ek rishta mazak lagta? Kya Mr. Khan theek kehte thy?" Zoya continued talking to herself, with tears streaming down her face.

"Nahi Ms. Farooqui." Unknown to Zoya, someone was listening to her and watching her this entire time. Yes, it was her Jahapanah Six Packs.

Zoya's head shot up and stood in front of her was Asad. Asad stared into Zoya's bloodshot eyes which stared back at him with the same intensity. He took a seat beside her and Zoya looked away and wiped her tears.

"Ap Mr. Khan..." Zoya did not know what to say to him.

"G mein." He responded back.

Both sat in silence for a while. Maybe seconds passed, or maybe minutes. Both didn't realize. Zoya fiddled with her music box, not knowing what to say. The chatterbox herself was speechless today. But one thing she knew for sure was that Asad's presence provided her with a comfort that she could not explain.

For the first time, Zoya's silence was killing Asad. So he decided begin a conversation with her. "I'm sorry Ms. Farooqui." He turned to her.

Zoya looked up at him. "Sorry?" She questioned.

"Woh actually, maine apke baatein sun ly. Ap dinner table sy aise chale gy. Phir uske thori dair baad mein apke room mein gya... matlab knock kiya lekin ap kamre mein nahi. Toh socha shyad ap backyard mein hon. Jab b ap pareshaan hoti hain, yahan aati hain." Asad explained.

Zoya didn't respond so Asad continued. "Maine apko bohat kuch sunaya hua, apko hamesha judge kiya apke baat sune bina. Or hamesha apki Ammi ko baaton k beech ly aaya bilawajah. Or aaj apki baatein sun kar bohat guilt feel hua. Isliye Ms. Farooqui." (Sad Mitwa)

"It's okay Mr. Khan. Apko mafi mangni ki zaroorat nahi. Ap ny jo b kaha thk kaha." Zoya said, stopping herself from crying. No, she wasn't going to break down in front of Mr. Khan again.

"Nahi Zoya, mein galat tha. In fact bohat zyada. Please ap aisa mat sochiye. Beshak apki Ammi nahi hai. Lekin meri Ammi b toh apki Ammi jaise hain. Ap apne ap ko kabhi akhela mat samjhe." Asad was feeling really guilty and upset for this innocent girl.

"Mein akhele he toh hoon Mr. Khan. Mera toh koi apna nahi." And that was it, Zoya broke down. No matter how much she tried to control herself, she couldn't. She put her head in her hands once again and cried her heart out. Then, she felt two arms go around her (Sad Mitwa).

Asad couldn't see Zoya crying and he knew she needed someone at the moment. She was vulnerable. Of course one would be after discovering the death of their Abbu. But on top of that, Zoya felt she had no one to turn to. Asad put his hands around Zoya and let her cry. Cry until she could cry no more. He rested his head on her head and closed his eyes.

Zoya felt safe in Asad's arms. His arms provided her with a comfort that only a place like home could provide. Zoya did not know what relation she shared with Asad, but whatever relation it was, nothing made her feel safer than being in his arms. He felt like her own, like family, and only a person who cares for one like a family member would comfort to such an extent.

Zoya calmed down a little and looked up at Asad. "Mr. Khan." Asad opened his eyes, still keeping his arms around Zoya. "G." He responded.

"I'm okay." Zoya slowly removed his arms from around her and gave him a smile.

"How can Zoya pretend to be okay? Woh kab apne khushi k saath apne gham b share karenge? Aise toh woh thk kaise hon gy? Hamesha upset rahenge andar sy or bahar sy khush hone ka natak karenge." Asad thought to himself.

"Mujhe sab nazar aa raha k kitni thk hain ap." Asad replied. "Ap apni smile k peeche bohat sare gham chupate hain."

"Ap mujhe itna kaise jante hain?" Zoya asked, a part of her happy that someone could finally see through her.

"Ap hum sab k saath itne waqt sy reh rahe hain. Itna toh ab pata. Lekin ek baat hai. Apki yeh wali aadat bilkul Ammi jaise hai. Ammi b aise he apne sare gham apni muskurat k peeche chupate hain or mujhe sab pata chal jata hai. Shayad isliye pata k ap b aise he karti hain." Asad went on and on, and the words just came out.

Zoya was amused. "Wow emotionally challenged Akdu Ahmed Khan. Akhir ap b bolne lag gy." Zoya laughed.

Asad just stared at her. He didn't care if she was laughing at him. He just wanted her to be happy and he always wanted to see her dimple wala smile. "Akhir mujhe ho kya gya? Ms. Farooqui or unki khushi mere liye kabse itni important ho gy?" Asad thought to himself.

"Kahan kho gy Mr. Khan?" Zoya snapped her fingers in front of Asad. Asad came out of his thoughts. "Woh kahin nahi."

"Apne jo phele kaha, did you really mean it?" Zoya asked.

"Kya?" Asad was a little confused.

"Yeh he k apne jo b mere bare mein socha woh galat tha or yeh k mein akhele nahi?" Zoya questioned.

"G Ms. Farooqui. Ap bilkul b akhele nahi." Asad responded.

"Lekin Mr. Khan, ap sab toh mere apne nahi." Zoya looked upset all over again.

"Yeh sach nahi. Apne itni kam time mein hum sab k dil mein ek aise jagah bana liye jo koi nahi leh sakta." Asad replied. Zoya looked at him shocked. "Am I dreaming? Kya Mr. Khan mujhse waqai mein yeh sab keh rahe?" Zoya thought to herself.

"Apke dil mein b?" Zoya blurted out and then mentally slapped herself for saying that out loud. (Mitwa)

Asad didn't know what to say to that. Yes, Zoya has a special place in his heart. He doesn't know what place and he can't even say it to her. "Woh, actually. I mean... Mera matlab... actually..." Asad mumbled on and on.

Zoya laughed and said, "rehne dy Mr. Khan. Mein toh aise he mazak kar rahe thee." Asad smiled a little at her.

"Waise bohat raat ho gy hai or mujhe ab bohat neend aa rahe hai. Ap b ja k so jaye." Zoya said to Asad. Asad nodded and Zoya got up to leave.

"Ms. Farooqui..." Asad called out to Zoya as she was about to leave.

Zoya turned around and said, "G Mr. Khan?"

Asad didn't know why he called out to her suddenly. Maybe it was because he didn't want her to leave. "Nahi woh kuch nahi. Ap jaye." He smiled

Zoya laughed and shook her head at him. "Waise aaj raat k liye shukriya. Apne sirf aaj nahi par pichle do dino sy mera bohat saath diya. It means a lot Mr. Khan." Zoya turned around and left (Mitwa). Asad had a million dollar smile on his face and he too walked inside towards his room. Today, two souls slept peacefully after so long. Talking to one another had definitely improved both of their moods. Zoya felt lighter after Mr. Khan cheered her up and Asad felt at ease seeing Zoya smile again.

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This update was filled with AsYa so I'm hoping you all loved it. It may not have been what you all were looking forward to but this is just the way I want it to be. Especially since at this point in the show, Asad and Zoya didn't accept their feelings towards one another. Only 2-3 chapters are left so I hope you enjoy the coming updates. Feedback is always appreciated.

Lots of Love,

Angel

Edited by asadzoya14 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update..

Thank you for pm..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you ☺

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Such a lovely update. I loved it. Thank you for the PM

I loved those days of QH when Asad loved and cared so much for her but got awkward every time Zoya called him out on it....

Look forward to reading the next update x

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatima30

Such a lovely update. I loved it. Thank you for the PM

I loved those days of QH when Asad loved and cared so much for her but got awkward every time Zoya called him out on it....

Look forward to reading the next update x

Thank you ❤

And yes I agree with that. One of the reasons why Qubool Hai was only good until 200 episodes. AsYa and the storyline was basically destroyed afterwards

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update dear

Loved it

Their convo was nice

Akdu spoke too much today

Update soon please

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Asya❤️

🤣🤣 Asad keh ke bhi unkaha(wondering if there is any such word😜) kr diya!!!

An update without billi!😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing!!!!update fast super happy to see our babies still alive in our stories and heart do update soon

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