AsYa SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho (PART 3 Page 7) UPDATED

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Hello everyone,

Even though I got only a few votes, from those votes, I decided to write on this first:

After Zoya finds out about her Abbu's death, she is shattered and wants to return back to New York. Will Asad stop Zoya and bring her out of her pain?

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This will start from after Asad and Zoya return home from the graveyard. Asad talks to Zoya and tells her if she needs anything, he is there for her. Zoya says she should go back, and we can see the emotions Asad experiences at that time. So here we are. Hopefully you all enjoy.

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Part 1

It was a regular morning at Khan Villa. Except, there was no sher-o-shayaris nor any nok-jhoks. Since last night, energy in Khan Villa was low; obviously the one who makes everyone laugh and smile was not in the best emotional state. All are seated for breakfast and Tanveer is serving Asad. Even though all of his family members are present, his eyes are searching for the one not there. Zoya.

Asad is unable to focus on his breakfast. All his thoughts lead back to Zoya. "Pata nahi Zoya kaise hai or abi tak kamre sy bahar kyun nahi aaye. Mujhe unhe raat ko he keh dena chaiye tha k mat jao. Lekin mein kyun itna socha raha hoon? Kyun mera har ek khayal unke bhare mein hai? Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar dy gy." Asad thought to himself. "Lagta ab Najma sy he kehna pare ga k Zoya ko dekh k aaye."

Asad: "Ammi, Ms. Farooqui nahi aa rahe breakfast k liye? Tamatar, jao dekh k aao."

Najma looked at Asad with a confused look but nevertheless, she said, "G bhaijaan, mein dekh k aate hoon" and with that, Najma got up and went to go check on Zoya.

Dilshad: "Asad, usse thora waqt do. Uss bechare ka gham bohat bara hai or woh bechare toh kisi k saath apna gham b nahi share karti. Kal raat shyad thk sy soye nahi. Bohat dair tak uske kamre k light on thee. Iss waqt use hum sab k saath ki zaroorat hai or uske Appi aur Jeeju b yahan nahi. Asad, umeed hai k tum iss mushkil waqt mein uska saath do gy, na ki use jagra. Samjhe tum?"

"AMMIIII, BHAIJAAN. JALDI AAYE." Najma screamed from Zoya's room. Asad gave a worried look at Dilshad, and got up and ran to Zoya's room. Dilshad followed him. And well, Tanveer just rolled her eyes and went to see why Najma screamed.

"Kya hua tamatar?" Asad asked Najma and looked at her sitting beside Zoya, trying to wake her up.

"Bhaijaan pata nahi Zoya ankhein kyun nahi khol rahe. Ammi dekhe na Zoya ko." Najma was tensed and out of her worry, she couldn't think of anything.

Najma moved and Dilshad came and sat beside Zoya. She patted her cheeks, to wake her up. "Zoya... arre, isse toh bohat tez bukhar (fever) hai. Zoya, beta ankhein kholo."

Dilshad was patting her forehead and stroking her hair. "Asad, doctor ko phone karo. Zoya ko haath he nahi lagya ja raha. Itna gharam hai iska jism."

"G Ammi, abi karta hoon." Asad left the room to call the doctor.

Meanwhile, Najma got a bowl of cold water with towels. She handed that over to Dilshad and both her and Dilshad put the towels on her forehead and her hands.

"Ammi, Zoya ko kya ho gaya. Aaj tak use iss halat mein kabhi nahi dekha. Hamesha itne strong rehte hai lekin ab..." a tear escaped Najma's eye.

"Beta, woh bohat pareshaan hai iss waqt toh shyad isliye iske tabiyat kharab ho gy. Apna sara dard toh yeh apne andar rakhte hai toh soch soch k he iski tabiyat kharab ho gy. Lekin tum fikr mat karo. Zoya bohat strong hai. Jaldi he theek ho jaye gy." Dilshad said to Najma, even though a part of her was worried about Zoya.

Just then Asad walked in and heard the last few words that his Ammi said. "Ammi, doctor ko phone kar diya, woh thori dair mein aate ho gy."

"Jammy, ap breakfast kar ly. Phir apko office b jana hai. Khala or Najma hain yahan Zoya k paas." Tanveer said to Asad, who was just looking at the attention Zoya was getting from everyone.

"Tanu, mein office chala jao ga or breakfast b kar loon ga. Tum fikr mat karo. Iss waqt Ms. Farooqui theek nahi toh hum sab ko unke saath hona chaiye hai."

Dilshad looked up at her son proudly. "Asad, aaj toh tumne zahir kar diya k tumhe Zoya ki fikr hai," Dilshad thought to herself. Tanveer glanced at Zoya and walked out of the room.

"Ammi." Zoya stirred a little and her hand reached out to Dilshad. Zoya was still unconscious but she felt the presence of someone close to her, like her Ammi was there. Dilshad held Zoya's hand and said "Zoya, meri bachi."

Asad looked at Zoya and then at Dilshad, whose eyes were filled with nothing but love for Zoya. He looked back at Zoya. Just then the doorbell rang. Asad went to go check and it was the doctor. "Aaye doctor." Asad guided the doctor to Zoya's room. Dilshad moved away from Zoya so the doctor could check her.

Doctor: "dekhe, bukhar toh bohat tez hai lekin mein kuch medicines likh deta hoon. Har meal k baad ek tablet dena inko. Don't worry, she will be fine."

"Doctor, inhe khosh kab tak aaye ga?" Asad curiously asked the doctor.

Doctor: "maine inko abi injection diya toh thori he dair mein inhe khosh aa jaye ga. Ap bas inka khyal rakhe. Agar kisi b cheez ki zaroorat ho toh mujhe phone karna. I'll take your leave Mr. Khan."

Asad walked the doctor to the door and went to go buy the medicines. After a while, he came with the medicines and went to go check on Zoya. Najma was sitting beside Zoya, and Zoya was still unconscious.

"Tamatar, Ammi kidr hain?" Asad asked Najma while placing the medicines on Zoya's side table.

"Woh bhaijaan, woh Zoya k liye pizza lene gy hain. Jab Zoya uthe gy, toh pizza sy woh khush ho jaye gy." Najma said to Asad with a smile. Asad smiled at Najma. Then he looked at Zoya, who was slowly trying to open her eyes.

"Najma, lagta Ms. Farooqui uth gy." Najma looked at Asad and then at Zoya.

"Najma." Zoya said weakly.

"Haan Zoya, kuch chaiye hai apko?"

Zoya was trying to sit up. Najma held her arm and tried to help her up. Asad moved forward and placed pillows behind her so she could rest comfortably.

"Nahi. Woh, kya hua?" Zoya was wondering what Najma was doing beside her and why Asad was looked at her, with concern in his eyes.

"Woh, actually apko bohat tez fever tha or ap subah breakfast py b nahi aaye toh Najma apko check karni aaye thee. Ap shyad behosh thee. Or woh..." Asad trailed off as soon as he saw Zoya holding her head. "Kya hua Ms. Farooqui?"

"Bas thora sa chakar aaya. But don't worry, I'm fine na." Zoya smiled at him.

"Injection ka asar ho ga." Najma said to Zoya. "Ap aram karein okay?"

"Tamatar, maine kaha na k mein theek hoon." Zoya side hugged Najma.

"Haan Zoya, dikh raha k tum kitne theek ho." Dilshad walked through the door with a box in her hand. Najma moved away so Dilshad could sit beside Zoya.

"PIZZAAA." Zoya exclaimed excitedly. "Phuphi." Zoya flashed her dimple wali smile at Dilshad and hugged her tight.

"Ms. Farooqui, itna zor sy chilane ki kya zaroorat hai." Asad said.

"Kya hai Asad. Dekho woh bechare kitni khush hai pizza ko dekh k. Warna toh kal raat sy..." Dilshad said, annoyed at Asad. Asad noticed Zoya's eyes filled with tears. "Phir apne Abbu k bare mein sochne lag gy. Mujhe kuch karna chaiye hai." Asad thought.

"Ms. Farooqui, subah sy hum sab bhooke hain kyunki apki wajah sy hum sab ny kuch nahi khaya. Apna pizza toh humare saath share kijiye." Asad tried to change the topic and lighten the mood. Asad saw a smile come on Zoya's face.

"Hawww Mr. Khan. Ap sab ny subah sy kuch nahi khaya toh isme mein kya karoon." Zoya said to Asad, shocked that he said that to her. "Waise Jahapanah Six Packs ko pizza pasand he nahi toh phir..."

"Bhook toh lage hai toh isliye pizza chal jaye ga." Dilshad was shocked at her son's behavior. "Yeh wo he Asad hai jo baat baat py Zoya par chilata tha." She thought to herself.

"Aacha Aacha, hum sab mil k pizza khaye gy. Kyun Zoya?" Dilshad asked.

"G phuphi. Agar Mr. Body Builder ko khana toh kyun nahi."

"Lekin Zoya, mera weight bar jaye ga." Najma pouted at Zoya.

"Mere tamatar, ek khane sy kuch nahi ho ga." Zoya lovingly pulled Najma's cheeks.

Everyone laughed. Dilshad went go get plates and they all ate pizza in Zoya's room, including Asad. Tanveer was not there because she went out for some work.

"Ya Allah, mere baachon ko hamesha aise khush rakhna." Dilshad knew her home's happiness is linked with Zoya now. If Zoya is happy, she manages to make everyone else happy. Dilshad even noticed changes in her son since the arrival of Zoya. Yes, they both fought 24/7 like Tom and Jerry, but in between all this, her son had learned how to find happiness in small things, even though he doesn't fully express it.

Asad looked at Zoya several times, while she was happily eating her pizza. This did not go unnoticed by Dilshad. She smiled and hugged Zoya.

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Here's the first update. I hope it's good. It might seem a little boring or a little short but I still hope you all enjoyed. Please comment and give feeback. It took a while to write this update. Next update will be coming soon.

Lots of Love,

Angel

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INDEX

PART 1: PAGE 1

TEASER 1: PAGE 1

PART 2A: PAGE 2

PART 2B: PAGE 3

PART 3: PAGE 7

PART 4: COMING SOON

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Superb part dear. I like this sensible and understanding Asad more than angry and tameezwala. He even ate pizza to make His Miss. Faaroqi happy 😃😃😃 Great start ♥️ eager to read ahead 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: ManaliKSGIAN

Superb part dear. I like this sensible and understanding Asad more than angry and tameezwala. He even ate pizza to make His Miss. Faaroqi happy 😃😃😃 Great start ♥️ eager to read ahead 👍🏼


Thank you so much ❤

I really appreciate it ☺

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks for the PM!

Mat Jao Zoya😢

Asad changing for Zoya😍

I couldn't vote for any story on your poll as I was kinda busy so didn't have time to check the forum and when I saw your post poll was already closed ..btw I wanted to read this story first😁

Edited by parakshi - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: parakshi

Thanks for the PM!

Mat Jao Zoya😢

Asad changing for Zoya😍

I couldn't vote for any story on your poll as I was kinda busy so didn't have time to check the forum and when I saw your post poll was already closed ..btw I wanted to read this story first😁


Thank you so much ❤ and don't worry about it! I am glad that you want to read my stories ☺

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Teaser 1

"Zoya, tum wapis ja rahe ho or tumne hume bataya tak nahi. Kya ab hum sab tumhare kuch nahi lagte?" Dilshad asked Zoya, shockingly.

"Phuphi yeh ap kaise baatein kar rahe hain? Ap toh meri Ammi jaise hain matlab ab toh Ammi sy bhar kar." Zoya tried explaining to Dilshad.

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Asad: "Ms. Farooqui.... Zoya please mat jao. Pata nahi kya ho gaya mujhe....."

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"Ammi, Abbu, ap dono mujhe kyun iss duniya mein akele chor kar chale gy." Zoya cried.

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Here is the first teaser of the next update. I have midterms coming up so next update will be in a few weeks. Thank you to those who took the time to read my story. I really appreciate it! ❤

Lots of Love,

Angel

Edited by asadzoya14 - 5 years ago
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Nice start dear

Loved it

Asad tried to cheer zoya. That’s nice

Teaser was interesting

Update soon please

Do pm me if you can

All the best for midterms

Thanks

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear

Loved it

Asad tried to cheer zoya. That’s nice

Teaser was interesting

Update soon please

Do pm me if you can

All the best for midterms

Thanks

Thank you ☺ I'm glad you liked it!!

Of course, I'll pm you!!!❤

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Thank you ☺

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Hello everyone, here is Part 2A of Agar Tum Saath Ho. I managed to find time to write an update finally!! I hope it's not too boring. Hopefully you all enjoy!!

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Part 2A

Everyone, including Asad, spent the day checking up on Zoya. Eventually, Asad went to office because he trusted Najma and Ammi to take care of her. It was night time and Najma was helping Dilshad prepare dinner. Asad went to go freshen up after returning from office.

"Najma, Zoya ka dinner uske kamre mein ly jana. Bechara toh ek din me kitne weak ho gy. Use aram karne dete hain." Dilshad said to Najma.

"G Ammi. Waise Ammi, Zoya kitne himmat wale hai haina? Matlab k kitna kuch ho gaya or aaj woh humse itni khushi sy baat kar rahe thi." Najma said happily.

"Beta, uski smile he uska gham sab sy chupate hai. Aaj woh kuch zyada he muskara rahe thee matlab k woh pareshaan thee par kisi sy usne yeh zahir nahi karna tha." Dilshad said while lost in her own thoughts about Zoya.

Najma just looked at Dilshad and tried to understand what she meant. Najma knew Zoya was going through a lot after she found out about her Abbu's death, but even then she was smiling today. Najma never really thought that Zoya's smile hides all her sadness.

Just then, Asad opened his door and walked out of his room. At the same time, Zoya opened her door and came out of her room. Asad and Zoya had an eyelock for what seemed like hours (MITWA).

"Mr. Khan jab mere samne hote hain toh mujhe or kuch dikaye kyun nahi deta?" Zoya thought to herself.

"Jab mein Zoya ki ankhon mein dekhta hoon, toh mujhe yeh ajeeb sa ehsas kyun hota hai? Pata nahi iss ehsas ko kya naam doon?" Asad thought to himself.

"Aree Zoya tum yahan kyun aaye? Maine Najma ko kaha k woh tumhara khana kamre mein ly jaye." Dilshad said to Zoya, breaking Asad and Zoya out from their thoughts and their eyelock.

"Phuphi, mein kamre mein bore ho rahe thee toh socha k ap sab k saath dinner karti hoon." Zoya smiled to Dilshad. "Or waise b Phuphi, mere tabiyat phele sy bohat better hai. Ap fikr mat kijiye." Zoya came behind Dilshad and put her arms around Dilshad. Dilshad patted Zoya's cheek. "Beti ho na mere toh fikr toh hoti hai." Tears formed in Zoya's eyes and she hugged Dilshad tight.

"I love you phuphi." Zoya emotionally said to Dilshad. Najma came and said "mein b" and joined the hug. Dilshad hugged both of her daughters protectively. Asad too became emotional, seeing the three most important people of his life with one another.

"Ek minute, matlab k ab Zoya b meri life mein utni hi important hoti jaa rahe hai jitni Ammi or Najma hain." Asad thought to himself. Asad was confused with his feelings, especially since the way Zoya had been down since yesterday. He wanted to take her in his arms and take away all her pain and hurt. "Lekin kya mein aisa kar sakta hoon. Hamesha sy unhe hurt karta aa raha hoon or ab achanak sy unki takleef mujhse bardasht nahi ho rahe." Asad was lost in his own thoughts until someone called out his name.

"Jammy, ap office sy aa gy? Kasa raha apka din?" Tanveer came to Asad and asked him.

"Thk raha Tanu. Ammi, hum dinner karein agar ap sab ka yeh emotional session khatam ho gya toh?" Asad asked Dilshad.

Everyone got seated at the dinner table. Tanveer rolled her eyes at the emotionless response she got from Asad.

"Ms. Farooqui, ap apni medicines ly rahe hain?" Asad wanted an excuse to start a conversation with Zoya. He didn't know why but he just wanted to.

"G Mr. Khan. Phuphi mera bohat aache sy khyal rakh rahe hain." Zoya explained while smiling at Dilshad, who smiled back at Zoya and caressed her hand. Asad nodded and smiled at her.

"Zoya, jis maksad sy ap India aaye, woh toh pura ho gaya toh apke aage k plans kya hain?" Tanveer asked Zoya, who so badly wanted Zoya to leave from this house.

"Actually, Tanveer maine abi kuch socha nahi." Zoya looked down at her plate and played around with her food.

"Humne isliye poocha kyunki abi apko apni Appi or Jeeju ka saath chaiye hai toh apko unke paas New York mein hona chaiye haina?" Tanveer questioned.

Asad, Dilshad, and Najma just looked on. "Yeh Tanveer kaise baatein kar rahe hai or woh b iss waqat?" Dilshad thought to herself.

"Woh yahan par Phuphi or Najma mere saath hain. Phuphi ny ek Ammi ki tarah or Najma ny ek behen ki tara iss mushkil waqat mein mera bohat saath diya. In fact, Mr. Khan ny...." Zoya trailed off. Zoya looked at Asad and Asad looked back at her. She quickly looked down at her plate.

"Haan Zoya par phir b. Apke Appi or Jeeju apke apne hain. Matlab k unn dono ny apko phala or bara kiya toh woh apke Ammi Abbu jaise hoye na. Or waise b, Khala toh apki sagi Phuphi nahi or Najma b apki sagi behen nahi. Iss ghar mein apka koi apna nahi toh isliye apko New York jana chaiye hai, apno k paas, kyun Zoya?" Tanveer continued on, knowing that somehow she would manage to hurt Zoya enough to compel her to go back to New York.

Asad gave Tanveer a deathly stare and he could feel his blood boiling. This went unnoticed by Tanveer and Zoya but it did not go unnoticed by Dilshad.

"Phuphi, mein apne kamre mein ja rahe hoon." Zoya could feel all her emotions coming back to her. The tears in her eyes were threatening to spill but she held them back. "Zoya, beta tumne kuch khaya nahi. Thora sa kha k toh jao." Dilshad worriedly said to Zoya.

"Mera mann nahi kar raha." Zoya quickly got up and ran to her room before anyone could say anything else. She entered her password on her iPad and searched for early flights to New York. "Mujhe wapis chale jana chaiye hai. Yahan sach mein mera koi nahi." Zoya cried to herself.

Meanwhile....

"Tanu, yeh sab kya keh rahe thee tum Zoya ko? Tumhe pata nahi k kis takleef sy woh guzar rahe hai? Har baat karne ka ek waqt hota hai." Asad expressed his anger towards Tanveer.

"Jammy, akhir jo hum keh rahe thy, woh sach hai. Iss baat ko ap b mante hain." Tanveer was raging inside but had to keep cool on the outside.

"Phele manta tha par ab nahi. Ab yeh Ms. Farooqui ka b ghar hai." Asad got up and left from the table before he said something to Tanveer, which he would have regretted later.

"Tanveer, yeh tumne theek nahi kiya." Dilshad gave Tanveer one last look and left as well. Najma followed her shortly after.

"Khair, koi nahi. Kuch b kar lein yeh sab. Mujh py gussa kar lein lekin Zoya ko ab yahan sy jana he hoga." Tanveer laughed to herself evilly.

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This is a really short update and I apologize for that. It was more of a filler update to get the story moving forward. But I can promise that Part 2B will be filled with many AsYa moments and a few Mitwa moments as well. I hope you all liked this update. Please do like and comment. Feedback is appreciated!

Lots of Love,

Angel

Edited by asadzoya14 - 5 years ago

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