Kaajjal after ML - P11 - Pg 3, Dec26, 07 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ploye

Kashish..u took my breath away...again.. 😳 😳 😳
now you have me sitting infront of the compputer..all red and blushing and trembling... 😳 that was a mindblowing..passionate..hot hot part...aawww DK the couple made in heaven..no one not even destiny can separate them..god..DPS..just makes Kaajjal go all numb and she loses herself to him... 😳 😳

now u sent me back to my DPS lion king..dreamland... 😍 😍 😍
As if i have not been dreaming enough about my prince all day all nite long..now u come with this master piece😍 😍

Kashish can i tell u something?? 😆

your FF kills...but i love dying at ur hands...dreaming of DPS and sending me to newer heights everyday...😍

wahh wahh let me dream..😍 😍

😳 Komal



awww Komal .... that was sooo sweet of you ... thankyou for your kind and lovely words.

waisay, dreams are sometimes the most beautiful place and thing in the world, so chalo donoon saath mil kay dream karain, after all we are dreaming about the same man ... right ... DPS 😉

i am soo glad u liked the part and enjoyed everybit of it. sometimes what we read brings out that person in us we hide somewhere ... this is what happenes with me when i write ..... so i am glad i could convey the feeling to you. 😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmo20

Kashish I am speechless!

How can I describe my emotions while reading this part of your ff? I don't know where to begin...All I can tell you is that I felt every emotion of Dev and Kaajjal. You have truly brought them to life with your words. I can not only picture them so clearly in my mind, but I feel like I am there with them, experiencing Kaajjal's confusion and re-igniting passion and Dev's love and pain as he tries to make Kaajjal remember their love. 😳 😳 Kashish it is wonderful the way you have described Kaajjal's dilemma....how her heart keeps trying to show her that she belongs in Dev's arms and how she cannot ignore the emotions he inspires in her. 👏

Kashish, thank you for this - it was like an extra Christmas present. I loved it!

Anu



awww Anu u have really touched me by these lovely and encouraging words. U know yar, when i write i feel as if its happening in front of me and then i write. i feel i am a part of them and i feel what they feel and then i write and may be thats why things come along like this.

I am sooo glad i could bring the same feeling to you beause that is what matter the most when one writes.

And what to say about DK and thie love and passion ... mind blowing. 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: gambi

Kashuu aaj tumne apne fantastic narration se mujhe itnaa hilaadiya, itna hilaadiya, ki mei kya bolu..I am completely speechless...aur ab jee chaah ta hai ki bass tumhaari tareef karti jaaoo. I loved oit!!! Simply beautiful! Mei kabhie tumhe shabdo mei samjhaa bhi nahi paaoongi, ki mujhe ye episode kitnaa achchaa laga!1 Simply Sarvottam Kashuu!!! Keep it up! Humhe bass aise hi entertain karte rehnaa. Alaah kare ki ek din tum bohot bari writer bano, aur Karan Johar, Yash Chopra sab ko haraado! 😛 Aur itni der baad comment karneke liye mei maafi chaah ti hu. Sorry! 😃 Aur ye raha aapka inaam: 👏

Zareen.



awww Zareen ... tum nay tu mujhay speechless kar diya hai apnay words say ... i am truly humbled by ur kind words and encouragement. Thank You from the bottom of my heart.

hahhaha simply Sarvottam ... lagta hai SVOI bohat pasand aa raha hai tumhain ... waisay i like the term as well ..... 😉


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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
aww di you have left me speechless. I don't know what to say. Great and fabulous would be not the right words for the our outstanding writing. I love the way you write, as whenever i read your fanfics i imagine them.They are so meaningful and romantic.Outstandng job di outstanding!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kushi iam so sorry for the late comment, i was at my cousions hose for christmas, iam sorry 😭
👏 romanticest part ever (i know i said that in the last part too, 😳 but what can i do ur FF parts get more and more romantic 😳 😉 everytime u write them 😃 ) fablious work 👏
Iam so glad that know that kajjal had conviced her love to Dev, know atleast she won't try to run away for her Dev 😳 .............and you the best part in todays part was the hug part, simply gorges.......and not to forget the part where Kajjal is eating chips with Dev's hand, how romantic................just fablious work........


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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Oh my darling Kashish I am so so sorry that I didnt get to respond with a better message that was deserved sooner like I promised 😕 😭

It was crazy, as soon i finished reading ur update and replied, my computer started freezing up. Right after that my computer messed up and basically crashed. There was some sort of virus I guess and everything of mine was deleted 🤢 😡

So I am a little late with my reply to your once again masterpiece 😳 I just love the passion you created between them. You are really making us relive the magic again. 😳 😛

Kashish darling, when i'm reading ur updates, theyy are so well described, so much detail so much meaning in them that its like i'm watching an episode. You truely are a hero. U're just amazing.

Please darling. Continue soon. and NEVER stop writing
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Hello Saint,
I've been reading all your FF's since Kaajjal days and let me tell you they are simple superb. Can you please please continue on Kaajjal after Memory loss. Its been 3 months. Can't wait for the next part. Hope you can continue soon.
Thank you for giving us these FF's once again.

Karma.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Mei bhi intezaar nahi kar sakti! 😆

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