Fun OS: Nankhatai ke Nuske (ft. Roshni, Aman, Chotu & Baazigar) P2 Pg2 - Page 4

Wow mahi... It was so cute one... Thanks for writing this... 🤗

Waiting for the next one... Do. Write soon..

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Wow mahi... It was so cute one... Thanks for writing this... 🤗

Waiting for the next one... Do. Write soon..

Thank you so much Lata!🤗

Nicely concluded... 👍🏼

Waiting for your next story 😃

Originally posted by: Indulekha00

Nicely concluded... 👍🏼

Waiting for your next story 😃

Thank you! <3

😆

Superb entertaining one.... 👏

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Superb entertaining one.... 👏

Thanks a lot 😳

Mahi!!

The second part was superb. As you said, Aman ki baari thi.

Loved way they got lost, over confidence and finally Chotu misses his chachu, and knows his worth. Good fun, oh and then men catch Roshni .

Way Baazigar took an entry and punctured her hopes too was epic. Chotu goes to Aman, then later scaring men, but protecting Roshni and she confessing her feelings to him, Wow! Entertaining, hilarious and lovely.

Keep writing more.

-Madz

Btw wanted to ask you, you followed PB? Saw you in forum..read how the show got totally butchered. Had seen a few episodes. All I would say, is the essence of show was trio. It's wrong and makes no sense to show Babes in a negative light, no offence.

Plus I always hate this trait of making others bad for the sake of glorifying others. But most tv shows have this trait and few of my fav characters have suffered, have a disease of falling for side tracked couples, lol.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Btw wanted to ask you, you followed PB? Saw you in forum..read how the show got totally butchered. Had seen a few episodes. All I would say, is the essence of show was trio. It's wrong and makes no sense to show Babes in a negative light, no offence.

Plus I always hate this trait of making others bad for the sake of glorifying others. But most tv shows have this trait and few of my fav characters have suffered, have a disease of falling for side tracked couples, lol.

Yeah I do. Rather wait, I used to. Cause this ain't the PB I knew of. This is some rotten show worse than Balaji ones. The pessimism and negativity in the show is killing me off.

This isn't even Babita. This is some other woman in her skin.

Mini wasn't only glorified, she was also made to suffer. The worst thing was the emancipation of Babita got lost, which was the theme. Or they are simply showing how women who are independent or try to be one are home breakers.

To hell with that show now. I hate it.

Everyone is redeemed now except her. What the Eff they wanna prove I've no idea.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Mahi!!

The second part was superb. As you said, Aman ki baari thi.

Loved way they got lost, over confidence and finally Chotu misses his chachu, and knows his worth. Good fun, oh and then men catch Roshni .

Way Baazigar took an entry and punctured her hopes too was epic. Chotu goes to Aman, then later scaring men, but protecting Roshni and she confessing her feelings to him, Wow! Entertaining, hilarious and lovely.

Keep writing more.

-Madz

Thank you so much Madz! This means a lot ❤️

I'll surely try to :)

Thanks again 😳