Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 31

"From chapter 1 to chapter 27"! The story is very gripping and intriguing👏

"if not the plot than the dialogue of charchters are mind blowing"! 👏"

"At first I thought the story is like Judith McNaught novel kingdom of dreams"! As there to we have royal sisters abduction at hand of enemy😆 But than there was scene make me think it's might going according to George R. R. Martin novel"! game of thrones cause there is dance master as it's wrote in Story But no not at all few scenes here and there but the plot was entirely different"! Which left me speechless for while"! 😊 at how coolly you had wrote this splendid 👏

"The charchters are unpredictable yet very much understandable"! But more than that story plot is unpredictable"! Yet very much praiseworthy👏

" I won't go on grammer and spelling mistakes"! As that's very much invitable"! when you wrote daily while having busy days"! 😊

"From two bro and two sis intro and lifestyle way of living "! to how diffrent the two empire was well written 👏

"Not only this about villain the master mind behind each conspiracy their motive their aim was well defined as well"! 👏

*Power *greed *desire* war *murder conspiracy *assassination attempt *fashion *relation *emotion

"All these things were mention mostly in every chapter"! Making it clear it's not about push pull hate to love passionate story"! But it's thrilling as well 👏

"But I am glad cause you doesn't seem to create suspense at all"! Which make it easy for impaitent curious soul like me 😆

"As much I look forward to the lead banter i am interested in how they're handling theirs responsibility"! As Emperor and empress there is always one or other thing you add to make it more reltable"! 👏

"I am glad you had portray the charchters of lead strongly and dignified manner no one less than other"! Both are stubbornly strong hot headed , the villain seem to come up with one or other low wicked plan as well"! 😆

"I lacked time or I might wrote more"! But it's wonderful story I liked very much"! Keep it up author🤗 each chapter come out better than previous one which make me look forward to updates from now onwards"! Thanks for PM 🤗

Originally posted by: kriya_12

this chappy brought many memories of no name to my desire....😆

Update was fab😉

Jalal is too good in this actually, but feel bad for jo. (She has to wait for 'loving jalal') as ryt he is not aware of his own feelings.

Oh the kiss🤣😳 It came as a surprise actually😆

Ja will not leave those idiots for sure😡 also this maham is dusgusting😡

Rukaiya 🤣 she is irritating yet interesting cause of her jealousy towards jo.

The way hamida asked ja- you love her (she knows him well)

Overall perfect chptr

Thanks for the update.

Keep entertaining😃

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di

Glad you like it and enjoyed 😳

So confusing

Goes good n then bad

Their relation is confusing🤔 or the story plot🤔

Update soon Di

Will try to do so 👍🏼

Thanks for Pm Di

Your welcome 🤗

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Me First Di

Thanks

For being the first one

to comment

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Such a beautiful update. Didn't want it to end.

Thank you 😳so much Divya di🤗

You didn't wanted it to end this itself mean allot ❤️

Originally posted by: kriya_12

great , that was a nice movie ......😃

Indeed😳 it's humourous meaningful family movie

Originally posted by: kriya_12

this chappy brought many memories of no name to my desire....😆

Awe😒 you make me miss No name to desire😔 I feel so sad to see it's being left incomplete 😭 i wish she completed it 🤔

it's one of favourite story of readers in forum ❤️so if my chapter can make them refresh memories of it 😃than than I am really glad to hear this

Anyway here it's about my story😆 so I wonder what's things in this update make you recall no name to desire"? ❓

Thanks for comment 🤗

Originally posted by: James12

"From chapter 1 to chapter 27"! The story is very gripping and intriguing

I am glad you find it intriguing to read entire story in one go and find it worth spending time on

"if not the plot than the dialogue of charchters are mind blowing"! "

Oh that's so kind of you to say I am honoured by your words

"At first I thought the story is like Judith McNaught novel kingdom of dreams"! As there to we have royal sisters abduction at hand of enemy But than there was scene make me think it's might going according to George R. R. Martin novel"! game of thrones cause there is dance master as it's wrote in Story But no not at all few scenes here and there but the plot was entirely different"! Which left me speechless for while"! at how coolly you had wrote this splendid

Well you're not wrong in assuming it from the time I had watched GOT and Read KOD I was so into writing one plot same as that on JA alas not entirely into copying it thus I add few of scenes which I find really appreciable and really imagine them in it"! so right few scenes here and there but entirely different plot of story

"The charchters are unpredictable yet very much understandable"! But more than that story plot is unpredictable"! Yet very much praiseworthy

I am glad but you seems really into the story almost getting the depth of them your every words are very kind I am really really happy to hear

" I won't go on grammer and spelling mistakes"! As that's very much invitable"! when you wrote daily while having busy days"!

Even though I want to re-edit it and correct them but I don't get time to do so thus I am glad that you and rest of readers let my mistakes slid but I would try to work on this

"From two bro and two sis intro and lifestyle way of living "! to how diffrent the two empire was well written

"Not only this about villain the master mind behind each conspiracy their motive their aim was well defined as well"!

Awe I am speechless you're writing about almost everything from detail to intro to intention to the dialogue to situation and not only writing but finding it worth praising that's very few people does I am so greatful to get a reader like you now thank you so much it's means allot to me

*Power *greed *desire* war *murder conspiracy *assassination attempt *fashion *relation *emotion

"All these things were mention mostly in every chapter"! Making it clear it's not about push pull hate to love passionate story"! But it's thrilling as well

Indeed it's not only about love and romance it's more then that and I am glad I could make it clear and you caught it as well the way you pointed out few of main words which is there in every chapter that's show how interestingly you had read entire story thank you

"But I am glad cause you doesn't seem to create suspense at all"! Which make it easy for impaitent curious soul like me

That's relatable even I don't like it when my favourite authors left us on cliff-hanger thus I don't try to do that on my story still somtime I do when I am really tired to write any further or get so embarrassed myself while writing

"As much I look forward to the lead banter i am interested in how they're handling theirs responsibility"! As Emperor and empress there is always one or other thing you add to make it more reltable"!

I would try to do that and come up with their duty as Emperor empress as well and I am glad to know you're interested more in others as well than the royal couple

"I am glad you had portray the charchters of lead strongly and dignified manner no one less than other"! Both are stubbornly strong hot headed , the villain seem to come up with one or other low wicked plan as well"!

Yes I wanted everyone to be strong even if they're good or bad almost everyone black and grey so that's it's get fun to enjoy the story but it's have me delighted to know you're enjoying this throughout allot

"I lacked time or I might wrote more"! But it's wonderful story I liked very much"! Keep it up author each chapter come out better than previous one which make me look forward to updates from now onwards"! Thanks for PM

Still you had wrote so much in whatever little time you got to have me thank almost in every replaying phrase of mine thank you so so much for your wonderful lovely long Review it's mean allot thank you will wait further for your reviews on later updates

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

i feel sad that pp left the story incomplete😭

Same here Divya di 😭

I still hope she come back and complete it 😊

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Update was fab😉

Thank you Divya di🤗 I am glad you find it fabulous😳

Jalal is too good in this actually, but feel bad for jo. (She has to wait for 'loving jalal') as ryt he is not aware of his own feelings.

Indeed he isn't😆 and it's good he isn't aware yet 😉already he is so damn possessive if he got to know than only God know what will happen 😲how he would behave 🤔

Oh the kiss🤣😳 It came as a surprise actually😆

Surprise or not you definitely enjoyed that part 😉

Ja will not leave those idiots for sure😡 also this maham is dusgusting😡

Indeed they're pathetic but don't worry they're going to pay whatever they're doing 😎

Rukaiya 🤣 she is irritating yet interesting cause of her jealousy towards jo.

I am so delighted to know you enjoyed even her part 😳but to be frank she won't be Vamp😆 but she will be grey shade

The way hamida asked ja- you love her (she knows him well)

Well said 👏 No one knows kids better than there mother 😳and here she is Dowger Queen well experienced lady 😃 so yea she know him well

Overall perfect chptr

Thank you Divya di 🤗

Thanks for the update.

Your welcome 😳

Keep entertaining😃

I will definitely do 😊thanks for lovely beautiful review 🤗