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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
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Thanks for being third one to comment Kavya 🤗thank you so much😳 it mean allot to not so good writer like me 🤗
Loving the story track and how Jalal has mixed up feelings for Jodha and now he has started to make her aware hoping they decide to handle things maturely but still continue their nok jhok😉
I know to much love sweet not good nor bitter things are good that to when it's come from hero heroine 😆 so I go on with kabhi khatti kabhi meethi way 😆and I am glad you guys are enjoying it and about them handling things maturely only just behave immature with each other 😆
Anyway glad you enjoyed thanks for lovely comment 🤗
Well right but this time not to go ME again so enjoy the updates thanks for comment 🤗
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Glad you enjoy Divya di 😳thank you🤗
Both are stubborn, mainly jalal. Always hurt her, never try to listen or understand her.
Yeah both are stubborn and even behaving nature before other behave immaturely with each other 😆 they're like you hate me I hate you let's face each other taste of hell 🤣
Attack on jalal, and as always jo is saviour (But who will save him from jo)🤣
Indeed saviour of each other from other villains and attackers but unsafe from each other only but again their witty way would protect them from each other to 😉
The restrictions & differences because of religion is so sad, only their love can do the magic (And don't know wo kab hoga🤣)
Bold@ even I don't know 😆 anyway you're right only there love can outfoxed all the difference and countered each restrictions 😳
Last lines were sooo nice❤️
I am glad you like that line
Hope your health is good now.
Yup I am doing fine thanks for asking 🤗
infact I am back to my hostel so now it would take time 🤔
Keep updating😃Sure anything for you guys
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Thanks allot for your beautiful review Divya di it's so lovely and giving insight to characters as well thanks allot it means allot to me 🤗
Chapter 24
(Jodha looked at him with stunned confused expression ,his way of making her aware he won't leave her always had to be intensely high. Death to can't do us apart really "! day back he said until death do us apart "! Now even death can't do us apart "! did he agreed to the monster part? did he plan to drag me to hell with him or what? Thinking this in annoyance she looked at him and spoke).
"What you mean "? by claiming to hate "! I really hate you "! there is no claiming to it"! cause it's truth"!
(She didn't even get to reply him when he ask by stepping closer to her looking straight at her with unreadable expression on face but slight coldness could be seen on his eyes but his question did. Caught her of guard like his action does but again she can't complain either).
"Once you said you wished he was alive I want to know "! did you fell in love with him"? or ever fell in love with anyone"!
(The way his hand curled up in fist and he awaited her answer she knew, unlike those people who can either hate her or love her but cannot ignore her. He is an expectation whatever he feel for her he doesn't want her to feel anything for anyone he is extremely possessive of her or maybe everyone held dear by him everything he seem to prefer as Precious to him. He doesn't like to share. Not wishing to rule him up any further she spoke firmly looking at him with calm firm expression).
"In my view people doesn't fell in love they rise in love"! Unfortunately I didn't go through the path of this emotion yet"!
(Jalal looked carefully at her trying to guess she isn't lying but than knowing how Rajput are ,he knew she can do anything but lie never this is something she isn't familiar with or learn at all and within a time how much he know her he can say when she is lying and when she isn't lying at all thus with smirked on face he spoke).
"No one conquer your heart yet"! You know what this revealtion mean to men"? who claimed firecly born to win and conquer"?
(She felt so intimated by his stare it's his eyes get darken frequently at her presence sometime she even hestitate to breath at his presence so near as if it's going to be last. His stare on her either it will be full on intensity and passion desire which made them threatening and very much unnerving. But there is something she can't find the word to describe in her mind. It doesn't feel bad that she knew it's in some way make her feel powerful. It's evident he desire her in a way men desire women right the way he was looking at her was clear how with each passing second he is losing control on himself).
"Hate can turn a sea into desert"! But love can grow flower in the barrel land"! Be aware I am born to win"! "I can conquer your heart and rule it as I pleased"! But don't get your hopes high", I still hate you with my life"!
Good for you cause even" The sun can rise from West and set on East"! but I cannot love a beast"! Like you"!
"We will see about it"!
(Saying this he walked out of the room. Leaving Thoughtful Jodha behind. Why he have to be so damn dominating and brutually mean ? Few minutes back he spoke so big big words as if nothing mean for him more then her. And next minute don't take anything to heart as I still hate you crap. Crazy, mean, brute, jerk ,selfish ,self-centre ,insolent ,royal brat and and ugh cursing him in mind if he really care than he won't be reason of my heart which get wound every time when he say he hate me).
#######################################~> Amer
(Carefully and cautiously she moved like a lioness about to pounce on her prey, focusing her attention on the tiger moving towards the cave unknown to predator eyes fixed on him, putting her arrow on her bow fixing targeting towards her prey, she released her arrow which hit straight on the head of Tiger with a loud cry he end up felling down).
"It's dead now", come out and do me Honor to get him back to fort Kanika"!
(Coming out from the bushes she was hiding Kanika glance at the dead tiger, than look back at Avantika her queen and friend Gitanjali. She sense the tease in her voice when she said about coming out, thus smiling sheepishly she spoke).
"It's not as if I was hiding your highness"! As you know tiger and I have unfortunate history"! One of this accursed animal is the reason my right foot Toe is dead"! Oh lord May Almighty forgives me for cursing his creation"!
(Avantika didn't said anything but Geetanjali ended up laughing at this. While few servant move to carry the dead tiger even not being at favour of hunting they had to end up coming in forest for hunting once in a while of month. The lack of rain in Rajputana made them get in water Crisis which eventually make Animals to come out of forest towards residential areas in the hunt of water to quench their thrist. But the civilian ended up messed with them to get them out of the place. Making the wild beast to hunt them down if only rain arrived but monsoon seems nowhere near yet. Before it was Avantika and Jodha together head to forest for hunting but now she isn't thus Avantika had to do alone with her friends).
"Pardon me for my audicty your highness"! But is it really important to pay a visit at Agra"!
"Indeed it is"! It's not only about completing the Ritual"! Or my political visit there"! But I want to check up on my sister"!
"But is that safe for you to go there"! I mean he already have her Highness"! So there are possibility that he may harm you to get entire control on Amer"!
"No it's not"! But again being royal Rajput and queen"! Life at risk aren't new"! But I will be careful on this"! More over It's been long but we get no massage by her"!
(Avantika motion the Group of Soldier to March back to palace, while she herself move towards border area to inspect the security arrangements from forest area only. The servant and soldier were reluctant to leave but they had no choice thus they obey her and March back to palace. While she head back towards west part of forest to chtechk over the borders with her friends by side).
"Your highness last time we got here you"!...
"Help help"!..
(A frightened voice echo's in deadly silent forest Avntika was near to an old constructed Temple of Lord Shiva situatated near a cave in forest which wasn't far from West border of Amer. Avantika held on her sword got tighten she immidately speed up her horse to get on direction from where she assume the voice coming from. She barely reach near cave when a poor Sage clad in Saffron Color cotton Dhoti Kurta and a bundle of Red color cloth run before her horse she immidately halted).
"What's matter with you Sage"?
"Help me protect me", few few Robbers are after me"! I I went to Bundi for one wedding ceremony there"! On my way back the Robbers attack me to rob everything I get at Bundi"!
"Worry not"," Sage"! You Seeked protection from me"! I won't let them harm you"! Just get in the temple"!
You don't know them they're man-slaughters ", "they won't think twice ", "before polluting the temple with my blood"! And what about you"? They can harm you"!
"Don't worry have faith on Lord Shiva"! This devotee of Lord Shiva promise you your safety"! Till the the end of her life"!
(Soon they Heard voice of heavy footsteps the Sage trembled in fear if it wasn't about his two little daughter he won't cared about the treasure he got at Bundi. No matter how scared he was he didn't wanted the girl to get harm either but than he get motion by her to step in temple which is just at but distance he run for his dear life and step in the temple. Avantika look before and saw the rage filled eyes sharp edge weapon were shinning in their hands. They looked no less than merciless brutes but it didn't frightened her even an ounce. Infact their appearance were the call of Royal Braveheart Rajputani her responsibilities to protect her people with her life).
"Has any old sage arrived here"? Or get in temple"?
"Eve if it is so"! Do not presume I will let you harm him"! Forget about letting you enter in the Holly temple of Lord Shiva"!
"We don't intend to hurt a women"! Just reveal his whereabouts"! Or better leave the entrance"!
"The end of my life can let you reach out for him"! By grace of Lord Shiva I know today isn't the end of my day"!
(entire childhood like every Royal Rajput she grew up listening the stories of her ancestors or Rulers of Nation, if she swoon over their bravery than she admire their kindness and Righteousness as well. When a king cannot hestitate to cut his own Flesh to protect a bird who took shelter to him his justice kindness and righteousness didn't let him back out . How she can forget about Sanjam who cut his own flesh to protect his friend his king Prithviraj Chauhan on battlefield from eagle his loyalty to mother-land his friendship and love for his friend didn't let him backout. Than how being Queen and Rajput Chatrani she can back-out most importantly when she promised the Sage. The sword were unseathed the group of robbers had outnumbered her and her friend no doubt. within few minutes the clash of weapon heard the sage inside temple started praying for her and her friend saftey which eventually lead to his saftey as well. Avantika friends shot arrow at Robbers disarming them while Avantika was fighting with the robbers leader. While she was fighting with Leader one robber set arrow on his Bow Targeting her about to shot her even seeing that Avantika was sure it will hit her as her both hand was busy with leader. She glance around for her friends and found them busy fighting with other robbers with sword as their arrow got finished. Thinking it to be last she took name of Lord Krishna she continues fighting with Leader and that's when a miracle happen before the Robber could shot her something come from her side of neck giving hard blow to the Robber weapon and disarming the Leader made its way to other robber who was just behind the leader making him fell down from horse. She look down and saw a spear it's saved her life a simplest in it's look but determination flashed in it's sharp pointed iron head - as if someone's heart, simple in over all but had a pointed focus to protect. It hit the Leader and Other Robber so skillful way that the sharp pointed head didn't even touch though it's just moved mere inches by the side of her neck. Who the braveheart skilled warrior can be? With the question she look behind and there stood a tall fair skinned young man holding the arm of leader of Robbers his side profile was facing her thus she couldn't see his face, clad in grey color iron Armour over chain-armour (chain-mail) over White Color full Sleeved Collar plain Jama, and Pajama and high royal leather boot a creamy color cloak on his back having armour color helmet on head he had dark red color cloth as veil on face).
"Shame on hands which raise to hurt women"! Instead of protecting them and their Honor"! Do not forget that valour has some ethics to"! It's not all about skills of using a weapon but much more than that"!
We don't have time or Interest in your preaching right now"! do you even have strength in your arms or it's only on mouth"!
(The man didn't said anything but Avantika watched the leader of robber give a light kick on lying sword which swing upword and he caught it from back. The leader this trick somehow amazed Avantika but she looked forward to Men who protected her he was calmly standing and by his spear and resist the attack from other side it was clear he doesn't even wish to harm the Robber. But he was definitely skilled Spears man soon enough She come out of his charm and started fighting with others robber who come to attack on the Man after half hour the robbers gave up).
"Spare our life"! we won't come here again"!
"Not only here but you won't pick up weapon to harm innocent"! I may have word with Queen of Amer for you"! She may show mercy in you than"! But before that you have to prove your worth"!
(Queen of Amer, who is he"? how he know me"? Ofcourse my identity isn't issue everyone know me but the way he spoke seems as if he know me personally, she immidately look back at him and found him looking at Leader and that's when she saw pair of Blue eagle eyes calm yet they look so magnetic the charm of them as such that she failed to tear her gaze from him).
"I will never forget your kindness"! My lord you're so forgiving even with the power of punishing"! I will do as you say"!
(The leader of robber voiced out her own thoughts, she always wonder, how many people can do this? even having Power to punish the sinner forgave them! The men said nothing just nodded and and how soon he got to change evil heart well the robbers weren't entirely evil they were just sinner by commited deed which they did cause of circumstance still she was really impressed but than a part of her got conscious regarding the identity as soon the robbers left he move towards her she immidately look elsewhere before he could caught her staring at him).
"Hope you aren't hurt my lady"!
"No I ain't hurt but I am greatful to your help"! I won't been left alive if you didn't arrived"!
"Thank the God not me"! No one protect other untill he wish"! But I still wonder what made the robbers attack you"! You're not having any treasure with you"!
"It's not me it's an old sage they come for I was just protecting him"!
"Sage you say"! But where is he"?
"Here"!
(Spoke the sage coming out from temple with happiness and relief he was really happy to get saved by robbers he step near to Avantika her friend ride horse near her as well. They watch her action all along and that were indeed surprise by her answering to him as she doesn't really answer everyone but she did maybe cause the Man protected her thus she thought owe explaination to him).
"I will forever be at your debt for protecting me"!
"Greeting sage but Where you live Sage " we can drop you there safely"!
"That's not needed my home isn't far from here"!
(Avantika and That Man nodded at him while he walked out of there. Even the Man was about to leave but stop dead in track by Avantika questions who was interested to know his identity).
"Won't the saviour would reveal his name"!
"People call me"! Keshav"!
"What you call yourself"?
"I am yet to make a name for myself"! When I do"! I will let you know"!
"You're leaving how you plan ", to make Queen of Amer agree to be merciful on Them"?
"It won't be needed with power to punish sinner"! she have heart to forgive as well"!
(Saying that the Man got on the horse and rode away before she could get chance to say something. Leaving Thoughtful and very much impressed Avantika behind).
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~> Agra
"What "? are you sure whatever you find out"! about the assassination attempt on me it's true"?.
"Well not really cause we are still investigating on this"! But that's what we find out and it's link to her"! He is the man come from Amer as her Horse caretaker"! Infact we investigated further and found out he sent letter to someone by piegon"! few letters we got from his quarter"!
(Jalal glare at the letters presented to him by Abdul while Zaheer gave the detail to him the content in letter was encrypted thus it was hard for him to understand and even his men failed to fathom the content, lion targeted on Moon symobolic arrow, than honeybees troubling elephant, while Elephant crush Ant's, what's all it can be it's not making sense at all).
"No someone is framing her when officers in my empire can frame an old man and boy", fabricate evidence against common folk '! than such conspiracy aren't so surprising"!
"But we cannot ignore the possibility of clues we find as I pardon me for my audicty as her highness hate you"! The equation you both share"!
"Forget the equation between us remember the relation we share , she is Rajput loyalty run in her vein"! "She rather die than have her husband killed in-fact she risked her life to protect me from this Assassin"!
(Zaheer and Abdul look at each other than at him amused by his way of trusting her even though he claim to hate her. If they being his friend cannot understand him than they cannot really blame Jodha for mistrusting him the men is complicated as the encrypted content in Letters before him. Jalal was now trying to make a connection to all this trying to understand that not getting anything he spoke in thoughtful tone looking at all letters).
"Let's try to intercept the symbol"! Lion cave"!
"Well known as Lord of forest"! So maybe the lion here symbolic of Emperor and cave as Empire"!
"Moon symbolic Arrow"! Can be define As Afghan Empire as it's symbol of their flag"!
"Honeybees troubling Elephant"? And Elephant crushing Ant's doesn't make sense"!
"That's where we all are stuck"! And even we intercept this than there is this letter of trouble in peace"! Yet messenger of peace are safe"! Is hard to understand"!
(Jalal listen to Aziz Zaheer and Abdul words he was surely getting the clue, where it's heading but he was unsure on this, thus he stayed quiet while they try to intercept the code Encrypted letter. When another thought come in his mind and he spoke in firm tone).
"My decision at court wasn't liked by everyone"! Is it going to be threatening for us"!
"Yes there are roumours spreading just cause the convicts were Hindu you freed them"!
"It was expected ironic if I punished them than the roumours would been", just cause they're nonebeliver I punished them even though they were victim"! So don't go on roumours part that's hardly matter"!
"I don't know what was more hard to handle you as army leader or Emperor"!
"Both have their own hurdle and struggle"! Intercepting a mere encrypted letter isn't hard for us", when I meet you people you better have it figure out"! And yes even though roumours mean nothing to me cause they're roumours after all "! but the one who spread matter to me so do get hold on them"!
(Saying this Jalal walked out of Meeting room what he can do there anyway he already figured out the letter just didn't wanted to admit it. More over after intercepting the letter he had other task that's to deal royal ladies he had enough of their conspiracy as well walking towards the chamber of Maham he step in watching her instructing something to her loyal Servant Resham).
"Greetings Vazir'e Alia , it's must be tiring day for you Vazir'e Alia isn't it"?
(Watching him she stop speaking while her servants and maid bow to him. He didn't let the guards announce about his arrival cause he didn't wanted to let her have chance to intercept his intention to be there. Pretending to be righteous but doing everything to shield her son and conspire against him to get her own son be on throne, he knew better not to get in her sugary talks enough of her conspiracy against him secrets meeting with Scholars getting them against him).
"Greetings your Majesty"! Tired not really in-fact I'd there anything I can help you with"!
"Yes Vazir'e Alia only you can that's why I come here myself"! But I think I am wrong to be here you seems busy"! unlike my mother and wife you didn't really spoken anything regarding the decision taken by me"!
"You're emperor your majesty who we are to object on the decision you taken already"!
"Oh that's true but ironically the loudest voice of person objecting or questionning my decision would be same who think they're no one to object on my decision"! Nevertheless that's the matter to worry later for now I am here for Scholar session"! But I wasn't into meeting them thus got here as now days you're meeting them often"! So thought it's better to get advise by you"!
(It's not good news the shrewd evil head Lady sense the danger behind so sweet words, it's his way of dealing with people he pretend to like but inwardly seek out ways to slay them. But today he isn't only warning her but having her worked up by his sweet action its not like she complain as far he is being fine by her that's cool or else she to have to run away like her son. Scholars meeting mean he knew she meet them and if he connected the dots than its can be say he think her to be roumour spreader against him against empire to secure her son position. Watching him sitting on the couch taking the glass and goblet to pour wine on glass he look at her. And spoke firmly with unreadable expression trying to observe her over taken nerve by his mere arrival).
"No matter how shrewd I get in understanding my enemies", but women are one complicated creation of Almighty I failed to understand"! And now when they're my opponent I found it hard to win"!
(Oh lord he is talking about me or someone else? What's going on in his mind heaven cursed, why he even become Emperor ? When Nasir alone was enough to keep her on toe now this unpredictable men. His way are way more complicated than his brain and sugary talk his ways are always twisted he won't come straight to point ever that to in start).
"Ironically the people may have women behind Curtain isolated from world"! But when times comes they seek out their opinion even let them be a part of Charging against enemies"!
Your majesty Enemies are enemy only"! And we cannot commit mistake of understimating them on basis of anything"!
"Ofcourse we cannot understimate them"! but what about enemies"? lurking around me in the disguise of well wisher"! Nevermind brother always said wary of people who get so sweet to you, can be bitter in action"! But he forget to advise me how to deal with them cause warning don't hold any importance to them"! Thus I am going to deal with them in my warrior way"! Slaying them how does it sound Vazir'e alia"!
(His word created panic in her heart what he mean by this ,oh she is aware he isn't pleased by her actions in court and the way he mention women than enemy in disguise of well wisher it does seem he talked about her. Lord did he already figure out everything about her action about spread romour if yes than is he going to get rid of her like he get ride of scholar supporters who spread romour in State. Is he going to strike where it's hurt her more her weak nerve her son to prevent her from any more conspiracy. Like she did by having attack on him by her son but fabricating evidence against Jodha. If it is than she need to change his mind on his thoughts thus she spoke firmly).
"But you're no warrior"! I I mean to say um you're Emperor now your majesty you should act as Emperor cause being warrior will make you win"! Ruling"!
(Smirking inwardly at the plight of Maham Jalal took sip from glass, oh he is enjoying victory in scaring the day light of Maham the women is never merciful to anyone not even the one worked for her what she didn't do to protect her insolent pathetic bratty son killing the witness from victim sides to make all the evidence against her son as fabricated one by enemy manipulating his brother against him. Oh it's indeed fun to see her wary just by his words his brother would often advise him. If you cannot slay your enemy than make sure even being enemy they get to do nothing against you. That's what he did he need time to come up with some proper big plan against enemies who are around him disguise of well wisher but he doesn't have time. Cause each state under Mughal territory is suffering and seems to getting out his hold. Leaving state to go and pay visit to other state to make situation stable isn't option for him either).
"Wise words Vazir'e alia"! Warrior slay his enemy to conquer the war ", while Emperor conquer his enemy to rule them"! So I have a word for you don't let me act as warrior yet when i am ought to act as Emperor"!
"I didn't ge"!.
"Ask your son and be wary of your action", you know my reaction as warrior better"! It's no big thing"! I shall take your leave now"!
(Saying this he walked out of her room having nothing left to speak with her. Tired of all the happening exhausted he head to a secret chamber to seek out peace).
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"Sorry guys got back to hostel thus had to stuck back on studies"! Thus now I may take break a bit not daily but I will definitely try to update frequently"!
"Thanks for all of your concern and wishes I am healthy and fine now"! All of your wishes means allot thank you for support"!
Nice update...i also got back to hostel today.. missing home already..if u don't mind i wanted to ask in which profession u r
Nice update...i also got back to hostel today.. missing home already..if u don't mind i wanted to ask in which profession u r
I am glad you liked the update😳 and there is nothing to mind I am into BA LLB 😳
Even I am missing home already the holidays have me time to caught up with my parents so anyway thanks for comment and liking the work 🤗
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Thanks for asking🤗 I am fine now 😳
Back to my hostel 😆
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