Our unfinished tale- ek adhoori kahaani. a Mehya OS *updated 4/8/19* - Page 4

You made me cry😪😢😢😭

I liked first part, shy Mehak flirting with Shaurya 😻 but ending heart wrenching 😭💔

Thanks for the os🙋 keep writing 💁

Thanks for friendship day gift Mishti.

Beautifully written. Love the first part of story.

But ending is heartbreaking..feeling so sad for Shaurya..finally he got true love but for few time.

Pls write more n more..and update your pending stories too.

Thanks for this beautiful OS Mishti.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗. It was so heart wrenching to read the sad ending of Mrhrya stories.... But for a change sake it was good to read....n u have written it so well.....putting all the emotions.....just loved it... 🥰😘👏👏😎😎....plrase do keep writing....thanks for the PM😘😘😘

So heart touching...you made me cry... very well written... please please please do write more...

My sweetest friend🤗

Thank you for this one❤️

I loved it😳

I said I want to see Shaurya's blood tears not mine😛

Even though I wanna see his blood tears the MehRya fan in me is sad..but its ok I will be fine😆

One thing I notice is how beautifully you wrote this story...thank you so much for this gift girl. 😳

Love,

Jiya

This was an Emotional OS

Mahek actually by her flirting changed

Dr Shaurya Veer Khanna

he eventually fell in love with Mahek

only to lose her to death , something that he feared

And I decided to start reading the stories and guess what I got to read this first 😂 ... very emotional story 😖😖...well written mishi ...👏👏