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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Dekho you're too sweet🤗

I'm a sucker for angst and you did phenomenal! I just read it again ❤️

Aww, thank you again🤗

Originally posted by: mitras

When I read the second part I thought RB will play around mannilal and flirt with prerna. But the third chap was totally different., Unexpected. The intensity, angst and pain felt so real. And as Prerna said in s1 that their rishta is that of Dard so this dardbhara chapter was awesome.

Well, thank you. I am not surprised that the readers are SURPRISED. This flick was Tarantino style non-linear and disjointed storytelling. I deliberately introduced a non-significant character to give a glimpse of a third party.

Rest, as you said was AGONY and PAIN. I am glad that you liked it. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation🤗

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

Damn, what did I just read?! This could be the classiest, most intense and passionate work ever presented on PreRish. The way moments flew by and nestled into a beatific beauty of amour and hesitantly driven realisation left me awestruck. The flashback and childhood fantasies are always a treasure to admire, believe me if I say I loved the legend of Dudhsagar falls and Rishabh's wild fantasy of searching the princess. I really loved the way you encapsulated the tale in a simple fluid crescendo of lively matters.

First of all, thank you for landing here. I love your fiction and read them. I might not be able to comment regularly as life calls but love them all. So, I appreciate it immensely for you to take out time for coming here, investing time and then showering such a gracious bunch of praises🤗 Thank you. I just did a little writing that is.

Coming to legends, I have always loved them, so tried to incorporate it here.

Menaka's introduction was least expected and in a way she reacted during the bonfire has made her neutral in my eyes when I expected her to be negative in here (after finishing part2 of this).

Menaka was supposed to be a mirror for Rishabh. That was the sole intention of her introduction.

Prerna giving away about how Prem survived in the Basu Bari and treatment he was entitled after all the risks his mother has took upon herself. It was natural for someone to break boundaries and cry her heart out. Still she remembered of Anurag when she lost control over that broken being but the wounds were deeper enough to paint the hesitation with bliss. Missed moments of Kuki and Prem t though, how do they make as siblings?

I did try to throw in hints with the kids being happy with each other. This wasn't a kid or family-centric story. It was about Prerna and Rishabh's freedom from their past. So, hinted bits here and there only.

Can I please expect an epilogue highlighting a strong headed Prerna moving out of Basu Bari (after paternity test to let the bad Basu boy know his worth and antics) and married to Bajaj?

Pretty please!

PS: Commendable job! Why you hide your talent for so long?

LOL, Talent, not really? There's no hiding, just some scribblings -an outpouring of an embittered heart after Bajaj's EXIT.

I appreciate your request but I like vague endings, as I have mentioned in my previous comments. This fiction was heavily inspired by Tarantino's NON-Linear disjointed storytelling. The epilogue will kill that vagueness and disjointed story. I suck at romance, not my cuppa tea. I can only write really painful stuff which is vague. I hope you understand that.

Thank you so much again for such a heartfelt comment🤗

Originally posted by: Soanz.19

What did i just read☺️🤪 Loved it manzil. Didn't expect it to go that way after reading the second update. But it was just perfect!!

Hahha🤪

EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED.

I am so glad that you liked it. thank you again for your gracious comments🤗

Your song selections are always on point Piu🤗

This place is special to him. So these moments with his mother are special. The FB is all hearts, he is so different, his childlike enthusiasm, curiosity to find his princess. And he did find his Queen at the exact spot. Prerna is hiding so much and he wants her to open up to him. Her ignorance is hurting him, he couldn't take her rejection.

The scene with Menaka is so damn good. She understood him and his emotions correctly. But whatever followed after this is magical & painful at the same time. His pain, agony, anger has to come out like this and she accepted it with open arms. This scene reminded me of one of your old FFs. The ending is so perfect, they are free now.

Absolutely brilliant story Piu. Loved it❤️.

Originally posted by: MR21

Your song selections are always on point Piu🤗

Ramya 🤗 Thank you. This piece was inspired from all the songs mentioned in the chapters. I am glad you liked them 🤗

This place is special to him. So these moments with his mother are special. The FB is all hearts, he is so different, his childlike enthusiasm, curiosity to find his princess. And he did find his Queen at the exact spot. Prerna is hiding so much and he wants her to open up to him. Her ignorance is hurting him, he couldn't take her rejection.

Rejection haunts him and kills him to pieces The place does have its own memories. They come back to him. Big time!

The scene with Menaka is so damn good. She understood him and his emotions correctly. But whatever followed after this is magical & painful at the same time. His pain, agony, anger has to come out like this and she accepted it with open arms. This scene reminded me of one of your old FFs. The ending is so perfect, they are free now.

There you caught it! The scene was borrowed from you know SOTN!!! 😆

Absolutely brilliant story Piu. Loved it❤️.

Thank you so much Ramya for your kind words of appreciation. They always fill my heart with pleasure❤️

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Amazing updates

Thank you 🙏