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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

UFFFFF🔥

That was such an intense rollercoaster ❤️

His pain was palpable, it was over the boiling point and Prerna, oh she was not scared to burn in it! Their conversation was eye opener, his toleration level was undone, he could not control himself and she, being his painkiller, took him. In a true sense, meri har khushi tumhari, tumhara har dard mera 💔

Beautiful ❤️

Look who's talking? The Fiction queen herself landing here🤗

Zarranawazi ka Shukriya☺️

Well, I did write this piece from a very angsty point of view. I am a sucker for loneliness and haunted melancholy. Guess that reflected from the scenes. I wrote their reunion too without the hearts and roses. A relationship of PAIN is what they share.

Thank you for the kind words of appreciation. Much love🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: 7APK


Oh My God 😱😱😱😱

This was out of my imagination 😍😍😍😍

Amazing Chapter 😚😚😚😚

P.S. I want a happily ever after Epilogue PLEASD😊😊

Aww, thank you🤗 I am thrilled to read such a compliment from you.

Thank you for investing your time in this story.

Well, Epilogue will kill the essence of an open-ended possibility. I wanted to keep it weird and with the UNDER-CURRENTS of their relationship.

I am not good at cuddly moments nor romance. So, epilogue might be skipped but imagine a world where two individuals are still strangers witha history of pain, with a communication, tied as parents and uncovering facets about each other, each passing day. That's HOW PRERISH WOULD BE IN AN IMAGINARY EPILOGUE.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Aww, thank you🤗 I am thrilled to read such a compliment from you.

Thank you for investing your time in this story.

Well, Epilogue will kill the essence of an open-ended possibility. I wanted to keep it weird and with the UNDER-CURRENTS of their relationship.

I am not good at cuddly moments nor romance. So, epilogue might be skipped but imagine a world where two individuals are still strangers witha history of pain, with a communication, tied as parents and uncovering facets about each other, each passing day. That's HOW PRERISH WOULD BE IN AN IMAGINARY EPILOGUE.

I would LOVE it❤❤❤❤

Please write more stories like this on my PreRish😍😘😍😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Also, I desperately need an epilogue.

Thank you.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Look who's talking? The Fiction queen herself landing here🤗

Zarranawazi ka Shukriya☺️

Well, I did write this piece from a very angsty point of view. I am a sucker for loneliness and haunted melancholy. Guess that reflected from the scenes. I wrote their reunion too without the hearts and roses. A relationship of PAIN is what they share.

Thank you for the kind words of appreciation. Much love🤗

Dekho you're too sweet🤗

I'm a sucker for angst and you did phenomenal! I just read it again ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

When I read the second part I thought RB will play around mannilal and flirt with prerna. But the third chap was totally different., Unexpected. The intensity, angst and pain felt so real. And as Prerna said in s1 that their rishta is that of Dard so this dardbhara chapter was awesome. Image

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

What did i just read☺️🤪 Loved it manzil. Didn't expect it to go that way after reading the second update. But it was just perfect!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: 7APK

I would LOVE it❤❤❤❤

Please write more stories like this on my PreRish😍😘😍😘

Thank you for the compliment. I wish I have more ideas. Let me see if I get time post-Diwali❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Also, I desperately need an epilogue.

Thank you.

Epilogue, difficult. Like I said, left it to the reader's imagination. Thank you🤗

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