Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 38

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Posted: 5 years ago

Fabulous chapter n geet life is in danger n all are praying for geet n maan n piya both are praying for her n piya is doing same as her father doing n maan dreams about tia n tia is saying to hold geet before its too late n now waiting for nxt update n pls pm me too

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Fabulous chapter n geet life is in danger n all are praying for geet n maan n piya both are praying for her n piya is doing same as her father doing n maan dreams about tia n tia is saying to hold geet before its too late n now waiting for nxt update n pls pm me too

Dear add me buddy... It's very difficult to find each reader separately

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Posted: 5 years ago

Geet takes the bullet meant for Maan. Piya misses her mother so much. Maan’s mind is trying to tell him to accept Geet’s love.

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART - 42



Some Lonely and deserted place. One man was enclosed between many armed man. Their head was glaring one of his ruffin. He slapped him hard,made him falls on road. His ruffin held his feet and pleads for mercy but his stern face turn more harder. He pointed gun on his forehead. "how dare you hit her? I gave you simple task of shoot Maan dead and what you did?" He was fuming.



"I am sorry boss but it wasn't my mistake. I fired on Maan but don't know from where she came in between." He clearified but he wasn't capable to pacify his anger and he shoot on his head.



"Threw it out." he commands to his other goons. "Maan this time you escaped but you can't be lucky all the time. What you did with me and my parents isn't forgivable. You have to pay for it." Rahul was boiling in anger and annoyance enclosed because his enemy escaped the death which was meant for him.



Maan searching his Tia like a mad. when he felt something. Geet's tiny finger looped his tiny finger. Maan swirled in pace to check her out. Her eyes were closed and breaths rapid. A sign of gaining conscious but same time of worry as her breaths grew rapid. Maan leaned over her, stroking her head softly.



"Don't worry,i won't let happen any thing to you." Maan rushed outside and brought doctor back into the room.



Maan wait outside till doctor completes his examine. Maan was constantly observing their expressions from glass window and he was assuming what they're going to told him. "How is she doctor?" he asked.



"She show some sign for few seconds but again lost." His voice was dim like his expressions which clearly showed his worry. "Have Faith Mr. Khurana." He consoled and left.



Maan came inside and sat near her limp form. He hold her lifeless hand and kissed it gently. He strokes her hairs and his eyes shed tears.



https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=YmBZXDUWug8



Jise zindagi dhoondh rahi hai

Kya ye woh makaam mera hai

Yahaan chain se bas ruk jaaun

Kyun dil ye mujhe kehta hai

Jazbaat naye se mile hain

Jaane kya asar ye huaa hai

Ik aas mili phir mujhko

Jo qubool kisi ne kiya hai



Haan..

Kisi shaayar ki ghazal

Jo de rooh ko sukoon ke pal

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjaare ko ghar

Naye mausam ki sehar

Yaa sard mein dopahar

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjare ko ghar

Hmm…



Jaise koi kinaara

Deta ho sahaara

Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par

Koi raat ka taara

Karta ho ujaala

Waise hi roshan kare woh shehar.



Whole night passed like this,but Geet didn't open her eyes again. It's only 6 am when Daija was there with Piyu who was crying like hell.


"Papa... Mumma..." Maan stood and took Piya from Daija. He snuggled her but she wants her mother's warmth only.



"Ye roye hi ja rahi thi. I can't see her like this." She was also in a broken state but not showed.



Piya raised her arms seeing laying Geet... "Mumma.... Mumma..." She sobbed and coughed badly. Her breathe got halted because of crying like this.



Maan's heart broken into many pieces seeing his loved ones suffering.



He placed Piya near Geet as she was wriggling in his arms. Piya stood on bed and raised. She was unable to understand why her mother laid like this and not taking her into her arms. Piya stretched out her tiny palms on Geet's hand and rubbed. "Mumma...." She called but when she doesn't respond she cried more louder.



"Daija Piya ko bahar le jaiye." Maan didn't want that she hurt herself more.



Least he was aware that Piya's voice reaching her mother's heart. Daija took Piya and lead outside. Piya waving her hands and called her mother. She was stubbornly demanding her warmth.



"Pi....ya...." Maan heard a whimper coming from her side. He leaned over her and scanned. "Pi...ya.." Geet replied to her daughter.



"Daija stop. Piya ko yaha laiye." He stopped and placed Piya near her. He leave daija with them and rushed to bring back doctor.



This time Geet responded properly. Maan cocooned Piya and stood aside. "Congrats Mr. Khurana. Your wife is out of danger now. We hoping for her coming into consciousness soon." He said with a smile and left after adjusting the machines attached with her to monitor her state.



Dard mere woh bhula hi gayaa

Kuch aisa asar huaa

Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha

Hmm.. Jaise baarish kar de tar

Yaa marham dard par

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjare ko ghar

Naye mausam ki sehar

Yaa sard mein dopahar

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjaare ko ghar....



As they expected she gain consciousness back and Piya laid next to her. Holding her firmly. She wrapped her tiny arm on her waist from right side and fists her clothes firmly. Though she was weak but mother is mother. Geet stroked her baby with her right hand.



All were there. Having a huge relief. Nurse came and asked all of them to leave. "Sister please allow my daughter here." Geet knows Piya. She won't able to stay away from her.



"No mam it's dressing time. Please..." She told the reason.



Before Geet do argue Maan dragged Piya. Though it's a tough job but he did. "Its okay Geet hum yahi hai."



After she done Maan came back with Piya and she clung to her again. Piya raised and kissed her mother on her face every where.



"My baby. Miss kiya Mumma ko." She asked seeing her red eyes. Geet embraced her.



"She cried hai na? Mera bachha itna miss kiya Mumma ko?" Geet's heart wrenched seeing her condition. Maan help her and she kissed her numerous times.



"Bahut. Geet without you I am nothing for her. She wasn't ready to sleep and cried whole time." His voice was deep and eyes intensely dark.



Geet glanced into his eyes and saw red layers in them,proof of the pain he was going through. "And you? Your eyes said every thing Maan."



Maan came near and hold her hand in his palms. "Geet you are our lifeline. Without you we all are empty. Geet i ....." Maan was still struggling with his emotions and don't found the right words to express what he felt and what he want to express.



Geet kissed her baby. "You don't need to explain anything. I can read it in your eyes." She gave a weak smile to him.



Muskaata yeh chehra

Deta hai jo pehraa

Jaane chhupata kya dil ka samandar

Auron ko toh hardam saaya deta hai

Woh dhoop mein hai khada khud magar

Chot lagi hai usey,

Phir kyun mehsoos mujhe ho raha hai

Dil tu bata de kya hai iraada tera



Main parinda besabar

Tha uda jo darbadar

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjarey ko ghar

Naye mausam ki sehar

Yaa sard mein dopahar

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjarey ko ghar



Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjare ko ghar

Jaise banjare ko ghar..

Jaise banjare ko ghar…

Jaise banjare ko ghar....



In her mother's warmth Piya got solace and slept instantly. "Maan Piya ne kya khaya subah se?" She asked in most worried tone.



Maan smiled and it seems like after ages. "She is very stubborn."



"Just like you." She replied briskly.



"You didn't feed any thing to my baby?" Suddenly her eyes turn complaining. It was a glare of annoyance.



"All tried but she pushed away every thing." Maan was fumblings before her.



Geet was angry for keeping her baby starved and its reflecting in her eyes.



"Geet I am sorry but I was so scared and..." Before he complete Inspector came inside for her statement.



"How are you Mrs. Khurana?" He started with formal talk and then asked about the incident.



"I was went to call him but suddenly something hit me and blood start oozing. I fell down and everything goes blank." Geet told what she remembered.



"Bullet was fired from a distance. And the size it self shows that its a very advance rifle. And what she told usse saaf pata lagta hai that bullet was fired to kill Mr. Khurana. Aap to galti se beech me aa gai."



"Excuse me officer." Maan signals him and escort him outside. "Officer don't share it with my wife. She just gain her consciousness and I don't want she take any kind of stress." Maan told him in a much commanding way as he noticed tense lines on Geet's forehead when he revealed the truth of that attack.


"Okay Mr. Khurana."


"And yes Inform me every single detail. I want that person at any cost." Maan demands.



"We are trying our level best." He assured him and left.



"Maan what are you thinking?" Daija observed and asked.



"Daija I want the culprit at any cost but the main question is who is the one? My any business rival won't go to such extend." Maan was fuming. His mind wants answers so he could punish the culprit at his own.

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Posted: 5 years ago

HI,

thanks for the pm.After a shocking period,Geet has finally recovered her consciousness and that also for her daughter.

it has been a long time that Geet has been there besides him.she has proved her claim as a mother.i really wish that Maan now not only realise his feelings towards Geet .but be capable to voice it.

lastly, the song was so perfect.hope the banzara gets his real home.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Rahul wants to kill maan for his revenge and he sent his man to kill him but geet came in between

Maan was happy that geet woke up and as soon as geet woke up she asked whether they feed anything to piya

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Posted: 5 years ago

She is awake :) I was getting worried for poor Piyu. Poor baby is nothing without her mother! Oh Rahul you might as well kill yourself because when Maan finds you there will be no way of surviving.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update baby . so it was that b****** rahul who tried to kill maan but his men shot geet and im sure maan will kill that evil when he will catch him . maan broke down after seeing geet's condition and their angel piya saved geet , geet responded when she heard piya's cry . geet got back her conscious and piya was not ready to leave her . maan was trying to confess but he cant find words and geet realized that cos his eyes told everything .

waiting for next


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Posted: 5 years ago

Interesting.

Finally geet is out of danger.

She came back to consciousness with piya around her.

Piya's voice reached out to her, bringing her back to life.

This is called mother's love.

Maan was relieved seeing her fine.

Geet saw maan's pain n care in his eyes.

He couldn't voice out his feelings. But she understood his unsaid words.

It's rahul behind it. He should be finished now

How did he manage to get out of jail?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Rahul is behind the attack,he wants to take revenge by killing maan

Awww piyu baby's voice reaches her mummaas and she reacts to it and comes to a stable condition...

Hope maan can express wt he feels to her,he now wants to tell her,but he can't able to do

She understands him and can see wt he is going through

😍💙

Edited by NeenaDd - 5 years ago

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