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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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will update within 2 to 3 days

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Part-5

Akshan were very effected with the kiss that they shared in morning Aj inorder to avoid Tanya went to his office while Tanya was at home and thinking about AJ she went to kitchen he notices Aj cooking food and was smiling at her she also smiled bt as she tried to touch him he vanishes. After this such more incident took place with her where she imagined AJ

Tanya- oh ghosh congrats Tanya u have lost ur mind u r hallucinating ye q ho rha hai ye sb us kiss ke wajah se ho rha hai and guess what mjhe accha v lag rha tha bt aisa q hame unse baat krni paregi lekin vo mere bare mein qa sochenge kuch v ho ham unse baat krke rhenge.

In office

Well AJ's condition was also not that good after the morning incident he only know how he controlled himself he wanted to have her kiss her again bt what will she think about him what if she leave him again no a mere thought of leaving her from his life is enough for making him insane.

Aj- mjhe khud ko control krna chahiye tha main baar baar ye q bhool jata hu filhal use kuch v yaad nhi hai aur agar vo mjhe chor kr chali gyi to nhi main aisa nhi hone doonga mjhe us se baat krni paregi.

In Home

Guddan was moving to and fro waiting for akshat to come after some time Aj enters in the hall Guddan look at him both are nervous they went to each other bt cant meet their eyes.

AJ- mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hai

Guddan- hame v aapse kuch baat krni hai. See shows him a photo Aj gets shocked as it was there couple photo. Hame iske bare mein baat krna hai.

AJ- y..ye...tumko..k..kha..se...mila

G- ye hame us band kamre se mila she point her fingures toward the room

Aj remembers how he himself decorated the room to surprise her bt when he came with her he had ordered the servants to lock the door bt he knew very well guddan would have noticed the close door and might became curious and had somehow obtained the keys from servants. He wanted to show it to her by himself but at the right time bt now what will he do. He was thinking for some excuses.

Aj- Tanya vo vo

Tanya- vo vo qa laga rakha hai kuch puch rhe hai ham

Aj- Tanya tum Tanya nhi balki tum Guddan ho meri wife tumhare accident ke wajah se tumhari yaadasht chali gyi aur bahut dhunde ki koshis ki maine tumhe akhir tum mjhe mili vo v 2 saal baad.

Tanya- y..ye..sach nhi ho skta . Aap jhoot bol rhe hai

Aj- nhi guddan main sach bol rha hu agar main jhoot bolta to 2 saal pehle tum kon thi tumhi bta do bta skti ho nhi na.

Tanya thinks and realizes that she indeed didn't remember anything beyong 1 and half years.

Aj- Mjhe pta hai tumhe ye accept krne mein mushkil ho rhi hai bt its truth u r Guddan my wife jis se main beintehaa mohabbat krta hoon.

Tany/Guddan holds her head some blurry images were flashing in her mind she faints Aj gets worried he took her in the room aftersometime she gains conscious she was holding her head Aj goes near her bt she pushes him

T- door rahiye aap Ham guddan hai ye baat apki sach ho skti hai par aap hamse mohabbat krte hai ye baat jhooti hai aur hame aap jaise jhoote insaan ke sath nhi rehna.

AJ- ye qa bol rhi ho guddan main tumse pyaar krta hoon ye baat jhoot nhi hai.

T- agar aap hamse pyaar krte to aap hamare rehte kisi aur aurat se shaadi nhi krte . Aj was shocked he couldn't understand what is she saying. Hame sab to nhi lekin ye yaad aaya hai ki aap hamare rehte ek dusri aurat se shadi krne ka faisla le rhe the aur to aur aapne hamare rehte us aurat se shadi v krli.

Aj – I can explain guddan meri baat to suno.

Guddan- nhi sun ni hame aapki baat aapne hame dhoka diya tha

AJ- nhi guddan ye sach nhi hai.

G- accha to aap hi batayie aapne dusri aurat se shadi kit hi yes or no

Aj- gu..guddan

G- I said yes or no

Aj- yes lekin...he was stopped by guddan

G- bs hame aur kuch nhi sun na aakhir apne qubool kr hi liya u cheated on me aapka pyaar ek jhoot tha she left the room while crying Aj sits with a thud .

Aj- guddan ko yaad aya v to ...q antra q jate jate v tumne mujhe mere pyaar se alag kr diya he started crying bt nhi mjhe guddan ko sb samjhana hoga he searched her bt she was not at home it made him worried suddenly he got a phone call he runs form there.

Jindal Bhawan

Aj entered there while running

Aj- kha hai vo aur kaisi hai.

Angad- Av tk unhe hosh nhi aya doc ne kha she is out of danger vo aapke room mein hi hai everyone heads towards Akshan room.

Akshat went towards Guddan who was unconscious lying on the bed he touched her head which had some minor injuries he kisses her forhead .

Aj- kaise hua hai ye sb.

Angad- vo bhai main batata hoon actually mjhe office se call aya tha ek important document pe apka sign lena tha main apko call kr rha tha pr aap phone nhi utha rhe the isliye main aapke paas hi aa rha tha tbhi bhabhi mre car ke samne aa gyi aur vo behosh thi av main ghar se jyada door nhi gya tha isliye unhe ghar pr hi laa diya. I m sorry bhai ye sb meri wajah se...

Aj- tu q sorry bol rha hai isme teri koi galti nhi hai saari meri hi galti hai .

Dadi- nhi lalla dil chota mat kr lalla kanha sb thik kr dega bharosa rakh uspr sb thik ho jayega.

Aj- kb thik hoga maa kb q apke kanha ko mri khusiyan bardaast nhi hoti q ma jb bhi sochta hun sb thik ho jayega tb hi mri khushi mujhse door ho jati hai qa bigada hai maine kisi ka.

Angad- bhai bhabhi ko hosh aa rha hai...

Aj looks at her he was happy and was going towards her bt suddenly remembers her outburst

Aj(in mind)- Guddan ko bs aadhi adhoori baat yaad aya hai vo mjhse bahut jyada gussa hai mjhe dekhegi tb shayad uski tabiyat kharab ho skti hai use takleef hogi us se av door rehna hi better hai with this thought he stood up and had reached till doors he was stopped as what he heard was the music for his ears

"Ji..Jindal sahab" after hearing this word he turn towards her he was craving for it for so long guddan was gesturing to him to come towards her he without wasting any second and took her into bone crushing hug tears were unstoppable from Akshat's eyes.

He was not ready to leave her Guddan parted herself – kh jaa rhe the aap apni guddan ko chod kr..

Aj- tumhe sb kuch yaad aa gya guddan he then wanted to tell her the truth regarding his and antra's fake marriage 2 years back bt he was stopped by guddan.

Guddan- Kuch batane ki jaroorat nhi hai Jindal sahab hame sach usi din pta chal gya tha aur ham wapis aapke paas hi aa rhe the tbhi antra ke aadmiyon ne hame kidnap krne ki koshis ki ham waha se bhaag hi rhe the tbhi ek truck se hamara accident ho gya aur jb hamari ankh khooli to ham khurana house mein the aur hame kuch v yaad nhi tha.

Aj- pr Guddan tumhe sach kaise pta chala.

Guddan- asal mein jb hamne aapki aur antra ki shadi dekhi to ham aapse bahut gussa the isliye ham apne ghar gye pr waha pr koi v nhi tha hamne sbka phone try kiya pr phone nhi laga fir waha pr hamri pados mein rhne wali ek aunty ne bataya tb hame sb samjh aa gya aur jb aap police ke sath antra ko pakad rhe the tb ham wahi pr the pr uske aadmiyon ne usi wakt hame pakad liya aur kidnap kr liya..

Aj was sad and happy at the same time he was sad as his guddan had faced so much and he was happy as he got his love back.

Everyone hugs her they chit chat till morning everyone then left akshan alone

Aj goes towards her and sit beside her and claimed her lips to ensure himself that she is safe and is with him while guddan goes with the flow as she was inexperienced one bt she was enjoying the kiss after sometime they parted in need of oxygen . He interwind his fingure with her. He was about to kiss her again..

Guddan- waise us bhootni aunty ka qa hua Jindal sahab

Aj- ab vo is duniya mein nhi rhi .

Guddan- pr kaise.

Aj- vo sb chodo ab ham naye sire se apni zindagi ki shuruat krenge aur mjhe do saal pehle ki vo manhoss din bilkul nhi yaad krni.

Guddan hugged him- I love u Jindal Sahab.

Aj- I love u too

so here is the last part of this Fs do share ur views and ignore the mistakes...and do tell me if u want an epilogue or not..

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Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Kajal21 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Updated plz check😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

Amazingwa..maza aa gya..kamal likha h..😳

epilogue...chahiye😳

I will miss this story..a lottt...keep writing😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superbbbb

And yes we want epilogue ,keep writing dear😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Amazingwa..maza aa gya..kamal likha h..😳

epilogue...chahiye😳

I will miss this story..a lottt...keep writing😃

Glad u liked it saina will give epilogue soon 😳koi nhi av ek aur story bacha hai😛

Aap v apne stories continue kijiye😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti24

Superbbbb

And yes we want epilogue ,keep writing dear😊

Thanks for liking it😳

Yup will give an epilogue 😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Glad u liked it saina will give epilogue soon 😳koi nhi av ek aur story bacha hai😛

Aap v apne stories continue kijiye😃

will w8 for the epilogue😃

Meri story ka update apko kl pakka mill jayega😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome ending Love it

Thanks for liking it😳

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