Akshan FS- Jana na dil se door *Completed*

Part-1

Akshat and antra was getting married in a mandir Guddan was running as fast as possible but when she reached there marriage was already done she was shattered and broken she couldn't belive that her Jindal sahab who claims to love her most married someone else even though Aj announced his and antra marriage in front of her said harsh words to her, she didn't believed that even though she was angry with him she decided to confront him bt what was the need of that as he have become someoneelse now he is no more her husband her Jindal sahab she dont have any rights on him she lost everything now she decided to ran away from there its when Akshat noticed her and was about to go near her bt Antra holds his hand and smirks seeing her, Guddan cant take it anymore and she ran away from there as fast as she could Akshat shouted her name bt she didn't bother to look at him.

2 years passed

A man is sitting in a dark room in a very miserable sate as if he has lost everything in life he is surrounded by lots of photographs suddenly an elderly hand patted his shoulder.

"lalla" "lalla "idhar dekh meri taraf said an elderly women.

The person look at her it was none other than Great Akshat Jindal he just hugged his mother and was crying on her lap to find some solace.

M- mat ro lalla mil jayegi vo qa halat bana li hai tune apna jb vo tujhe is halat mein dekhegi to qa use accha lagega.

Akshat- 2 saal ho gye maa pta nhi kha chali gyi kash main use rok pata use sacchai bta pata use bata pata ki uske alawa main kisi aur ka nhi ho skta is se pehle main kuch bta pata vo chali gyi mjhe chorkr kitni koshis ki maine use dhundne ki pr vo mjhe mili hi nhi sari galti hi mri hai maine hi use khud door jane diya apne is rishtey ko aur uski value nhi kr paya usi baat ki mjhe saja mil rhi hai ki main us se door hoon mjhe to ye v pta nhi hai ki vo thik v hai ya...he couldn't complete his sentence and started crying his maa couldn't see him pain bt she couldn't do anything she could only console him.

M- tension mat le lalla kanha sb thik kr dega guddan jaha v hogi thik hogi hausla rakh tu jald milega us se. To which Aj could only smile which didn't reached his eyes .

The day from when guddan left him he forgot to live and became miserable no one in the family could see the Great Akshat Jindal broken and shattered bt what could they do except praying and cursing that one women Antra who is responsible for this situation.

Akshat slept in his mother lap after which his sons settle him on bed and covered him with blanket Akshat has spent many sleepless ni8 they had to use medicine in order to make him sleep sometimes bt this medicine too cant lessen his pain bt could only make himsleep for some hr.

Everyone gathered in the hall and discussing about the matter Gupta family too is present there revti and angad is already married. Bhushan often visit the Jindal bhawan to provide the family moral support specially akshat as he needed it most.

Bhushan- Ab kaise hai damadji.

Kishore- av unki condition mein koi sudhar nhi hai tut chuke hai vo puri tarah guddan maa ke jaane ke baad koi v call ata hai to unhe ye umeed rhti hai shayad guddan maa ki koi khabar milegi ushe pr har baar nirash ho jate hai yhi unki jindagi ban chuki hai pta nhi vo is wakt kha hai.

Laxmi- ye sb us dayan ke wajah se hua pehle 15 saal apni jhuti maut se Aj ko takleef mein rakha fir jab sasuma ke rup mein unke takleef ka malham mila to unse vo v bardasht nhi hua aagai sb barbad krne.

Durga- use kosne se v qa fayda jinda rhti to ham use sabak sikha skte marte marte v sb kuch barbad krdiya . (Yes antra the bhootni has died)

Revti 2 saal pehle ka vo manhoos din ham kv nhi bhool skte hai.

"shi kha us din ne mra sb kuch cheen liya kitna shi jaa rha tha sb kuch" they heard the familier voice and its none other than Akshat himself everyone sighed Akshat sits in the couch and started caressing guddu's photo which he has with him.

Flashback

Everyone is happy and celebrated their victory as they succeeded on getting Antra arresten by makin her confess her crime and it has been 2 days since she was arrested it was like festival to them only task left for the family to heal guddan's wound which they caused by chosing and trusting antra over her they all r trying their best AKshat totally changed he romances with her alone and flirt with her in Honda's style at first she used to scold him bt then she also started enjoying it she was started healing.

One fine day Akshat took her with him to the mistake chit wall and says that he will not remove it bt overwrite it he took another chit and writte something and then he paste on the wall a lone tear escaped from her eyes Akshat asked her to read it.

"Main manta hoon ki mjhse ye sb cheat likhkr galti nhi balki gunah hua hai mjhse shayad is gunah ki koi maafi nhi hai lekin agar jo maine likha hai aur vo galti mana hai na to haa hai vo sb mri galti pr mri jindagi ki sbse haseen galti hai ye aur is galti ko main kv v sudharna nhi chahunga aur main ye galti ke liye maafi v nhi mangunga ye galti hi mri jindagi hai"

That's when guddan breaks down infront of him.

G- qa lagta hai aapko jb jo chahe aap vo kr skte hai pta hai hame apni galtiyan likh kr diwal pr paste krne ki adat ho chuki thi dard hota tha pr use maine apni kismet maan li thi fir jb apne use hataya tha na to aisa laga ki mre upar se bahut bara bojh hat gya bahut khush the ham q ki hame laga tha ki hamare sath koi hai jo hamari galtiya ginane ke bajaye use sudharne mein hamra sath dega lekin jb aapne ye sb diwal pr paste kiya na to mjhe pehle se v jyada dard hua aapne mre jakhmo pr malham laga kr wapis se use gehra diya tut chuke the ham pr bahut mushkil se sambhala khud ko aur jo apne ye chit likha hai qa guarantee hai is baat ki aap fir se aisa nhi krenge nhi todenge fir se hamara dil kaise kre ham aap pr bharosa fir se bataiye?...

Tears made its way through AKshat's eyes he sit upto her level and hugs her this tym she didn't resist it just crying on his shoulder Akshat wanted this only he wanted to burst her feeling infront of him which she is bottling within herself he wanted her to share her pain with him and she did now he knows how to heal her this time he wont repeat his mistake he will make her realize her worth in his life. He wanted to make her understand how much precious she is to him. After that infront of everyone he ask for forgiveness from her and hand over her a ring.

Guddan looked at him surprised.

Aj- ye ring main tumhe de rha hu taki jab tum mjhe wapis se accept krlo aur mjhe apne pure dil se maaf krdo us din tum mjhe ye ring wapis pehnana is ring ka asli haqdar usi din hounga main aur tbhi mjhe ye haq hoga ki tumhare hatho mein main apne name ka ring fir se pehna saku.

Guddan was overwhelmed by his guestures a lone tear escaped from her eyes Akshat wiped it and says ab is ansu ki jagah tumhare ankho mein bilkul nhi hai agar is ankho mein ansu hogi to sirf aur sirf khushi ki. Guddan and everyone smiled on this.

Flashback ends

Aj- Sab kuch kitna accha jaa rha tha mjhe mri guddan wapis mil rhi thi pr jindagi aur kismet ko ye manjoor nhi tha aur us din..... Tears started flowing from everyone's eyes

So here it is the very first part of this story I hope I didn't bored u all plz bear with it, share ur precious views and plz ignore the grammatical errors and typos ...

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