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Posted: 5 years ago
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My very first attempt on KalMa,or on any fictional couple. Forgive me for the blotched writing and lack of continuity or creativity ..

‘Yum ‘- Kalyani said slurping on ice gola .The more Swara was watching them ,her slurping and oohs grew closer and higher .

Little did she know that ,Sitting across was Malharji who was losing a battle with himself .He loved her with all his heart .Her presence in his life was everything for him.It made him complete and at peace .

But today ,at this moment ,her being this close to his face stirred a lot of feelings and ignited a fuel in him .He had felt desire for her ,but he felt the absolute need to act on it for the first time .

Her small bindi,gorgeous eyes ..Her lips ..Damn her lips ..he sighed

He gently touched her on her face ..

Kalyani startled for a second but “yes Malharji ..Lets act more it “ and giggled. She did not know that Malhar heard nothing of what she said and that Swara had long left .

He moved his fingers to the back of her ears ,tucking her loose hair in.

His hand travelled back to her neck then traced through her collar bone all the way down her arms and back up and then to her lips .He traced her lips ,leaving her slightly open her mouth in anticipation .

The gola had long melted .Kalyani could her heart nonstop stop, but she couldn’t move nor open her eyes .She waited in anticipation of what was coming next . A few moment passed .It felt like ages.She wanted what ever he was doing to continue .

Malhar moved closer to her .The entire path he covered with his fingers were replaced was by his lips .By the time his lips came back near to her collar bone ,Kalyani opened her eyes .All she could see was those orbs filled with everything that she wanted it to be.

She couldn’t wait any longer for her first kiss ,and her Malharji did not make her wait another second :)

Thanks

Fawn

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aww! beautiful OS

Thanks for writing

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Sonakshi bose ki vasha mein bolun toh -Malhar is Ovodro ( Indecent ). He didnt miss the golden opoortunity . This perhaps only the option by whom he can tackle his Patar Patar karnewali Pagli ! And fans ki vasha mein bolun toh its beautiful. Keep writing more .

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Aww this is really sweet

U shd write more, long ones pls.

We really wanna read more.❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ya it's very good. Truly, I feel it. Yaar. I have that rats in stomach feeling if I saw them in reality.

You should write more 😊

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Beautiful os dear

Loved it

Do write more

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Originally posted by: lavender_mist

Aww this is really sweet

U shd write more, long ones pls.

We really wanna read more.❤️

You are very very kind..I will try..

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Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Aww! beautiful OS

Thanks for writing


Thanks a bunch 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Sonakshi bose ki vasha mein bolun toh -Malhar is Ovodro ( Indecent ). He didnt miss the golden opoortunity . This perhaps only the option by whom he can tackle his Patar Patar karnewali Pagli ! And fans ki vasha mein bolun toh its beautiful. Keep writing more .


Kinda inspired by Sehban's inteview on Kalyani having no understanding of marriage 😊.My version of Kalyani is as protective as well as responsive.. Thanks a bunch for the comment .

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Originally posted by: Vermilion

Ya it's very good. Truly, I feel it. Yaar. I have that rats in stomach feeling if I saw them in reality.

You should write more 😊

nice to know that Aww thanks ..It feels nice to know that writing was imaginable.

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