Akdha FF- A tale of ice and fire Chap 10: Part I 03/22/2020 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sm1308

Thanks! I dunno, was I too harsh on our princess? I felt I should have kept the combat a bit notch low..she had to take two brute blows, I felt I was too hard.. I know she is unreservedly iconic with weapons, but one to one combat is not her thing and she fails to see that..I wanted to highlight that despite insanely passionate, the girl is quite impulsive, rebellious, with weaker foresight..I just want our princess to be tid bid flawed as our king, bit in different areas..

Well I wouldn't say harsh... Reason being jalal had no idea abt the opponent is a women that too our dear hot headed hell cat named jodha 😂.... Secondly he WAS defending himself n not fighting her when jodha attacked him... When jo didn't stop he resorted to cracking her wrist... Nevertheless she is naive... Let's see how our jalal will heal our jodha's wounded pride ... Waiting waiting for the next chapter

Originally posted by: PBDcrazy

Well I wouldn't say harsh... Reason being jalal had no idea abt the opponent is a women that too our dear hot headed hell cat named jodha 😂.... Secondly he WAS defending himself n not fighting her when jodha attacked him... When jo didn't stop he resorted to cracking her wrist... Nevertheless she is naive... Let's see how our jalal will heal our jodha's wounded pride ... Waiting waiting for the next chapter

:) Great! Then I guess it is fine..yeah, summing up the realization on both jodha n jalal's front should be fun..n believe me, I'm gonna make our king burn in guilt that he couldn't recognize his girl for the second time straight..and moresoever touched the lady like a brute, again..n yeah, poor jodha, I'm still debating whether she should be torn or enraged, knowing who really jalal is...let's see how it all turns up..thanks for the feedback dear..it helps to know how readers feel about the plot.. .thanks for the feedback..

:)

how come jodha could not recognise him in previous chaps ?

Originally posted by: kriya_12

how come jodha could not recognise him in previous chaps ?

Hey, im so sorry if it wasn't clear..

first she saw him was from the gates of fort, where she was stationed. Being that far, she could only figure out who amongst the entire fleet was the 'in charge king'..she could only make out the heavily armour clad physique of his..Next she saw him was in the thick cover of forest, in the dark of no moon night, again what she saw the was the same armour clad figure, as a shadow in darkness..so no face recognition.

I thought it possible..sorry if it ain't convincing :(

Originally posted by: sm1308

Hey, im so sorry if it wasn't clear..

first she saw him was from the gates of fort, where she was stationed. Being that far, she could only figure out who amongst the entire fleet was the 'in charge king'..she could only make out the heavily armour clad physique of his..Next she saw him was in the thick cover of forest, in the dark of no moon night, again what she saw the was the same armour clad figure, as a shadow in darkness..so no face recognition.

I thought it possible..sorry if it ain't convincing :(

okk...😆

this question was there in my mind for some time so just asked , & its fine now . i felt that she might realized thats why this super anger towards him , cannot stop herself from attacking him in a way its her vexation .

Originally posted by: sm1308

:) Great! Then I guess it is fine..yeah, summing up the realization on both jodha n jalal's front should be fun..n believe me, I'm gonna make our king burn in guilt that he couldn't recognize his girl for the second time straight..and moresoever touched the lady like a brute, again..n yeah, poor jodha, I'm still debating whether she should be torn or enraged, knowing who really jalal is...let's see how it all turns up..thanks for the feedback dear..it helps to know how readers feel about the plot.. .thanks for the feedback..

:)

Hahaha.... This sounds interesting... So would be my prayers with our beloved jalal to save him from the fury of this wounded ameri tigress.... Amen 🙈

hey hey , plz update.........😭

Originally posted by: kriya_12

when u will update

Hi dear.. haven't even started writing..update might take couple of weeks..I apologize for the delay, though..

Originally posted by: sm1308

Hi dear.. haven't even started writing..update might take couple of weeks..I apologize for the delay, though..

oh......😭

Hey waiting for the update.... Hope u remember else there r many people here to make u remind abt the update 😆