FF: Darkhaast / Tum Se Hi |PreRish| Updated: Ch 11 on Pg 17 | 17/9 - Page 12

Originally posted by: isha123asya

Awww ..how sweet!!! ❣️❣️

It's awesome how you update frequently!!☺️really appreciate it.

And kookie is too cute and prerna is hilarious 😁😁

Hi!

Thank you! How I wish we had a show with a toddler. But I get that toddlers can hardly act! Toddlers are cute. But the time crunch tv has and other factors make it almost impossible. My heart warms at how accommodating KSG is with the onscreen Kookie. She is an absolute darling!

Wonderful part. The elder bajaj's got the befitting reply for troubling priya maa. Bajju interest reduced in ahaana is good for the new couple

Thankfully you updated and I had a nice bedtime read. I understood the Bajaj family line now. Who is Kuki's biological Mom? And why does Bajaj call his own Mom, as Priya? 😆

Nice update. But shouldn't Prerna be a little more offended for someone who's husband is clearly cheating on her?

I like how you have centred everything around Kuki, but isn't she just two? How does she understand so much? I have heard two year olds can barely walk and talk. 😆

Originally posted by: najma123

Thankfully you updated and I had a nice bedtime read. I understood the Bajaj family line now. Who is Kuki's biological Mom? And why does Bajaj call his own Mom, as Priya? 😆

Nice update. But shouldn't Prerna be a little more offended for someone who's husband is clearly cheating on her?

I like how you have centred everything around Kuki, but isn't she just two? How does she understand so much? I have heard two years can barely walk and talk. 😆

😆 Thankfully I updated too. I was vella travelling all these days so the plot has reached so much in my brains but it's lagging in writing! I'm glad you had a nice bedtime read. Aw! My day didn't even start but this is so sweet!

Bajju calls him Mom as Priya. I think mainly because he has/had two moms and the FF has too many characters so I'm trying to make it as less confusing as I can. I'm trying to get them call Priya as Ma or Priya in general. Mainly from my end to make it less confusing for the reader.

I love how you bring valid points. They make me fix the loopholes.

Nah, I don't think she cares. Not at this point. He is just her husband on paper. Ofc, she feels bad when she's low (eg earlier chapter) but I feel she has made her peace with it. She thinks of herself as Kookie's mom. Not Bajaj's wife. Neither is she interested in being his wife. She married Bajaj for a safe haven of sorts -- to escape her family, calculative mother and Basu's. Bajaj married her because of Kookie and he understands what Kookie feels for Prerna coz he felt the same when he was distanced from Priya. And it's like win-win for him. He doesn't plan to marry in the foreseeable future, his prospective wife needs to be more of a comrade and Kookie needs to bond with her. Prerna is harmless and fits the mould.

Arre, no. Kookie is almost three. My baby cousins babbled day and night. I have three baby cousins in the age range. One in the exact age range and two a year or so older. And omg, baby grandparents. They lecture and talk about everything. And my mom adores it and reiterates every word in sheer joy. Also, Kookie doesn't talk much. She mainly thinks. And I remember thinking quite a lot in my kindergarten years. As if the world revolved around me. Even pondered about life and why I could think/hear my voice in my head and if that made me special? 🤣 Maybe I was a gone case bachpan se.

Originally posted by: mitras

Wonderful part. The elder bajaj's got the befitting reply for troubling priya maa. Bajju interest reduced in ahaana is good for the new couple

Thank you, my love! Your comments keep me going!

Aye. Elder Bajaj are crooks. But Priya is wickeder.

I feel so bad for Priya. When her parents left her alone in this world, she thought she got her love. The love which was just an act the get a heir. She had to be a nanny to her son to stay with him. But after marrying Advay, she recovered from it, claiming her property and winning custody case for her son. But also making sure that Rishabh gets all the fortune of Bajaj's as their heir and not to forget he loves his step father more than his biological father.

Ahaana Kapoor, the lady who wants Rishabh in her life. The same lady who is hated by both Priya and Kookie. Waiting to see what is in store for us with this character.

I love the couple's banter in the film set. She was emotional thinking she has a family now and a name even after going through all this. And Kookie being the best daughter allows her mother and father to talk😆.

Wonderful update. Waiting for the next one.

Originally posted by: MR21

I feel so bad for Priya. When her parents left her alone in this world, she thought she got her love. The love which was just an act the get a heir. She had to be a nanny to her son to stay with him. But after marrying Advay, she recovered from it, claiming her property and winning custody case for her son. But also making sure that Rishabh gets all the fortune of Bajaj's as their heir and not to forget he loves his step father more than his biological father.

Ahaana Kapoor, the lady who wants Rishabh in her life. The same lady who is hated by both Priya and Kookie. Waiting to see what is in store for us with this character.

I love the couple's banter in the film set. She was emotional thinking she has a family now and a name even after going through all this. And Kookie being the best daughter allows her mother and father to talk😆.

Wonderful update. Waiting for the next one.

Thank you so much for your long comments after every chapter. They truly mean alot. And the cute Bajju in your dabba. Haaaaayyyeeee!!!!!! 🤗

I believe that's why Rishabh loves his mom and dotes on her even if she 99.9% of the time drives him crazy. She truly loves him like crazy too.

True! What will Aahana do?

Kookie. 😆

Thank you! I'll post it soon!

nice update. Can't wait to watch how Prerna will react to kookie being her daughter. please update soon.

Interesting update👏

Priya Bose suffered a lot, glad she got her rights back😊

Loved PreRish's conversation😊

Priya & kookie don't like Ahana

Kookie is so cute

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: AraBearxo

😆 Thankfully I updated too. I was vella travelling all these days so the plot has reached so much in my brains but it's lagging in writing! I'm glad you had a nice bedtime read. Aw! My day didn't even start but this is so sweet!

Bajju calls him Mom as Priya. I think mainly because he has/had two moms and the FF has too many characters so I'm trying to make it as less confusing as I can. I'm trying to get them call Priya as Ma or Priya in general. Mainly from my end to make it less confusing for the reader.

I love how you bring valid points. They make me fix the loopholes.

Nah, I don't think she cares. Not at this point. He is just her husband on paper. Ofc, she feels bad when she's low (eg earlier chapter) but I feel she has made her peace with it. She thinks of herself as Kookie's mom. Not Bajaj's wife. Neither is she interested in being his wife. She married Bajaj for a safe haven of sorts -- to escape her family, calculative mother and Basu's. Bajaj married her because of Kookie and he understands what Kookie feels for Prerna coz he felt the same when he was distanced from Priya. And it's like win-win for him. He doesn't plan to marry in the foreseeable future, his prospective wife needs to be more of a comrade and Kookie needs to bond with her. Prerna is harmless and fits the mould.

Arre, no. Kookie is almost three. My baby cousins babbled day and night. I have three baby cousins in the age range. One in the exact age range and two a year or so older. And omg, baby grandparents. They lecture and talk about everything. And my mom adores it and reiterates every word in sheer joy. Also, Kookie doesn't talk much. She mainly thinks. And I remember thinking quite a lot in my kindergarten years. As if the world revolved around me. Even pondered about life and why I could think/hear my voice in my head and if that made me special? 🤣 Maybe I was a gone case bachpan se.