Hey Sur, that was definitely one long update and you indeed more than compensated for the extra week.
To me, the title was apt for Nupoorโs situation. Uski sari important things on the day - going to temple to pray for him, alone time with him in the car, and main aspect of the fast - him opening her fast, God disposed all of plans
Naina ka toh she did the Pooja for Sameer and he got to know about it and cherry on the cake - her fast was opened by the water he bought!!!
Appreciate your creativity for not making the โvoh โ a cliched vamp and sticking to it despite almost every one following the story not being her fan ๐ It makes me think how opinionated I am, kitni bhi ladkhi achchi ho, koi faida nahi, mujhe bus Samaina chahiye.
The minute Sameer wondered if it was someoneโs mannath that he got saved, I was hoping it should be Naina and thanks a bunch for making it happen.
Just a short glimpse into Nainaโs past is scary enough. Poor girl, she deserves some happiness in life. Bahut relax hogaya , kush rehliya Sameer ne, uski kushi Naina ke alava kisi aur ke saath , kushi hein nahi lagrahi hai yaar.
More than the romance, the slips and non-joks in the car was cute. Blue toh reel-real sabka universal favourite hai ๐
Next update kab hai - this weekend right ??
Sona
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