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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lets see😛

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Amazing updateđŸ‘đŸŒ

Memory loss

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Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Nice part

Aj's pain was too misrebal

May be guddan has a memory loss and may be

That girl is similar face too guddan

Update soon

Thanks for liking it😳

May be or may be not

Will try to update soon

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Thanks for liking it😳

will continue soon⭐

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Amazing chapter!!

Guddans memory lostđŸ˜Č..

Aj was love here❀

Loved it...plz cont soon😃

Thanks for liking it Shaina😳

Aj is always❀

will update today itself

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Part-3

He went back to hotel and was remembering their meet. He tookguddan’s photo

Aj- tum itna naraz ho mjhse ki mjhse milne ke baad v gairojaisa bartav kiya kam se kam mjhpr chilla hi leti mjhe pta hai ki doobaratumhara viswas jor pana bahut mushkil hai pr main haar nhi manunga he wipe histears and slept.

Next day Akshat packed his stuff and is ready to shift insinghania’s house on the way he saw a park he remembers how guddan liked tospend her time in park he entered there and sit on a bench it was raining sothe park was lonely aftersometime he saw a girl she was dancing in the rainlike a kid the girl turn her face akshat is able to watch her face he was happyas this girl is none other than his guddan he ran towards her and patted hershoulder.

Aj-gu
guddan..

G- Guddan kaun guddan excuse me Mr. whoever u r keep ur handsaway from me I m well aware of this cheap tricks to get close with a girl.

Aj was flabbergasted- look guddan I know u r angry with mehona v chahiye I deserved that afterall I broke ur trust. Bt plz don’t behavelike a stranger to me.

G- oh hello I m no Guddan now I got it u r the same one nawith whom my car got crashed r u taking revenge out of me.

AJ- what r u saying Guddan ho kya gya hai tumhe.

G- kitni baar bolu main I m no guddan r u out of ur mind I m Tanyau get that.

Aj- what the hell u r talking u r Guddan AKshat Jindal myGuddan my love my wife world.

G- oh gosh! Look at our age difference how could be I m urwife..see one more time u call me Guddan I will file a case against u leavewhom I m arguing with I think u needsome help now excuse me with that she left in her car with the uncatchablespeed.

While Aj sit with a thud he was confused, happy he himself isunable to figure out his mind and heart are having conflict.

Aj- ye kaise ho skta hai vo Guddan nhi hai esa q bol rhi haina mra dil keh rha hai she is my Guddan shayad bahut hi jyada naraz hai mjhsehona v chahiye dubara dil aur bharosa toda hai maine uska lekin mjhe hamarepyaar pr poora bharosa hai main fir se jeet loonga use with this he sit intohis car and went to Singhania’s house. He already informed the detectives hiredby him regarding this and strictly ordered them to find her.

He entered in the singhania’s house he was welcomed in agrand way. They treated him like a part of family they showed his room and chitchat with him for sometime and ask him to freshen up and he left the room.

After sometime Abhay and his wife Meeta came to him both are his close frndsthey talk for sometimen Akshat notices some tension on their faces and askedabout the same.

M- actually akshat yha pr tumhe koi problem nhi hai bt ekshayad tumhe hamari beti ke wajah se problem hogi actually she is shorttempered and blunt hai bt she is very nice girl. Bs ho ske to uske pranks seback kr rehna aur uske wajah se tumhe jo v problem hoga plz don’t mind it.

Akshat- lekin mujhe jha tk yaad hai tum dono ka sirf do bĂȘte thenhi fir ye beti


Abhay- Ham jante hai tum qa soch rhe ho actually ye baat usepta nhi and plz tum bhi use mat batana hamne use do saal pehle hi mile hai 2saal pehle vo hame road pr mili thi uska shayad accident ho gya tha bahut jyadainjured thi vo ham use hospital le gye vo 2 hafte tak coma mein thi fir jb usehosh aya to use apni peechli jindagi ke bare mein kuch bhi yaad nhi tha aur vobahut apni si lagi hame aur is tarah ham eek beti mil gyi u know what hamsejyada to vo apne bhaio ki jaan hai koi v galti krti hai vo donon use bacchalete hai .

Aj- wah congrats I assure u main use is bare mein kuch nhibolunga waise uska Name qa hai.

Mehek- Tanya ..Tanya singhania

AJ remembers his encounter with guddan some hrs before andhow she claimed herself to be Tanya. – Vo tumhe kha mili thi.

Abhay- Indore mein.

AJ turns towards them and took the photo and showed to them-qa yehi vo ladki hai

Abhay and mehek was shocked and took the photo- Ye to Tanyahai pr tumhare pass iska photo tum mil chuke ho is se pehle.

Aj – Ye Tanya nhi meri patni Guddan Akshat Jindal hai jo 2saalo se missing hai . Aj now realize why Guddan was behaving like that she didn’tremember anything about her past about him.

Meeta and Abhayconsoles him Tears made its way on Akshat’s eyes to his cheeks .

M- don’t get sad Akshat what happened if she don’t remembersu bt somewhere in her subconscious mind she she loves u and remembers uactually when we admitted her in the hospital she was murmering some”Jindal sahab”we didn’t understood that bt now I got it .

Aj chuckled and says yes she use to call me Jindal sahab. I mlonging to hear that from her mouth. Bt I will not accept deafeat I m here toget her back and I will do the same bt I need help from u guys as when I mether she was very different from guddan though they r same.

Abhay- don’t worry Akshat we will help u not as a frnd btalso as a father we accepted her as our daughter so we will do everything forher happiness.

“and we too” two guys entered in the room . sorry we evesdropur convo bt we couldn’t help it lets me introduce us first I m Siddharth and heis Abhisekh we r twins.

Abhay – and this two our sons

Abhi- yes and now we all help our doll to get her memoryback.

AJ- Thanks Guys for ursupport.

Meeta- Now we should leave u alone for sometime to think andtake rest excuse us. They all leave.

Akshat was happy even though Guddan doesn’t remembers him asGuddan got a loving family who loved her immensely.

Then suddenly his subconscious mind warned him what if Guddandidn’t remembers him and his past what if she didn’t get her memory back.

He shrugged it of all went near her photo- ''Nhi is baar main use door nhi jane dunga khud se'' is baar mjhe chahe jo krna pare main krunga chahe jo raasta apna na paremain apnaunga pr is baar apne pyaar ko khud se door nhi jane dunga ye 2 saalmaine kaise kaate hai sirf main hi janta hu pal pal marta tha main. He went infront of her photo tumhe mre pyar ka vasta is baar jana na dil se door q ki isdil ki dhadkan hi tum ho '' he caresses and plants a kiss on the photo. And driftedinto the sleep while hugging it close to his heart

While in some otherplace guddan woke up from her sleep with a jerk a lone tear escaped from hereyes ''ye qa ho rha hai aur q ho rha hai mere sath'' she asked herself wipingher tears unknown to her what is going to happen in her life next. She shruggedit all and drifted into deep slumber.

So here is the third part of this Fs ignore all the grammatical errors and typos andplz do share ur views


Part-4 pg-7

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing updateđŸ‘đŸŒ

Memory loss

Thanks sonal for liking it😳

next part updated do check😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

Wow tanya's swag was awosome

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing update.

Loving this new avatar of Guddan😉

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