Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 30

Originally posted by: 123g

Yee! Update...

Your characters are so real, that anyone can fall in love with them, and especially Shiv (my fav. one)

Prerna's condition is same as RB... Both are dying to be at each others side...

And And And.....

Finally,he is coming to claim her as his... 😃

Please don't make us wait this long again, update it soon....

Thank you so much. The PreRish angst gave me so much trouble that I literally cried and cursed myself for even starting this story. But reviews like this tells me why I did. So thank you.

There is regrettably no possibility of me updating before next Sunday. But after this week, I hope to get more time to write. And finish this story by this month.. 🤭

Originally posted by: Sohali19

Okay, first up.

I loved how you write Shiv. Such a cutiepatootie. I absolutely loved the part where he threatens Anurag : the part where he says "I've not in love with Prerna and will have no trouble destroying you."

SEXY VIBES. Come to mama!

Urgh, the Prerna and Rishabh anticipation is killing me. I love how she makes comparisons to thing RB missed out on. Loving family, laughter etc. And she tries to call him! Such a small detail but so telling.

I didn't expect RB to share his dil ki haalat with anyone. That's new. But everyone needs a confidante.

Can we please just agree that you're an incredible writer? Kthnxbye.

Update super soon because miyaanji ghar wapsi kar rahein hai. And I cannot wait.

Ah ha.. Sohaa, thank you so much. It means more when it comes from a great writer like yourself. I'll try to update soon. Till then, we're looking at you for our quota of PreRish love!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Now with the update we got some details of Shiv's past and it goes without saying after reading about Shiv's past in a glimpse, my heart went out to him..And the lines you wrote about death and the hole in the heart never being filled, touched a raw nerve with me and frankly speaking it brought tears to my eyes, as I could relate to it.. Anyway coming back to the update, I simply loved how Shiv was protective of Prerna and he did not let Anurag force his decision on her..And his warning to him said it all, he is not Rishabh Bajaj who is in love with Prerna and will ignore Anurag's behavior just for Prerna's sake like Rishabh does..And I clapped when Shiv gave his advice to Prerna about not buckling under the name of love and justify any kind of physical/ emotional abuse..I am glad Prerna is listening too, this will help her break free from the shackles that is being forced on her in the name of love..Next Prerna is with her family and Anurag, but yet the heart wants what it wants and she wants Rishabh...Her hearts seeks Rishabh and I was happy she made a dramatic exit walking away from the fake pretenses while her reason to smile and heart to thud with excitement was continents away..While Rishabh's love sets her free, Anurag love confines her to a cage and Prerna has started seeing it..Lovely..The way you have written Prerna's turmoil it is sheer brilliance...On the other hand we have Rishabh who is drowning in a mire of misery and it is his own created misery..All hell breaks loose and finally Rishabh Bajaj has accepted he loves Prerna..His confusion, desperate need for Prerna echoes in the air...He was running away from love but what he failed to realize that wherever you go, love is never far away, it is in the heart, it is in the heart beat, just like how Prerna is etched in Rishabh's heart and its heart beat..And now with Rishabh's firm decision to win his lady love and do whatever it takes, ready to move heaven and earth to make sure his Prerna never leaves his side, I was cheering at this and I said out loud, 'Go Rishabh, Go Get Your Girl'...The way you have described Rishabh's feeltings, his acceptance, his desperation and determination was all too perfect..The update was fabulous and amazing..Job well done!!!

That my words touched you is the biggest compliment I could have received. About Shiv giving Pre that bit of advice, I had that in my mind ever since Anurag slapped Prerna. Nothing can justify a man raising his hand on a woman. Nothing. Except homicide I guess. I can't imagine how anyone can continue to love someone when they have no dignity, no self control.

But thank you for your words. I am glad that you liked it. I'm too happy for words. Thank you.

Originally posted by: lovefk

I JUST WANT TO CRYYYYYYYYYY!!!! UGH WHAT AN UPDATE! Like what do I even start with???? That urgency with which she wanted to call him, that desperation she's started feeling for him like I can't even....its driving me MAD AS WELLLLLL!!!! You're so good with words, all this anticipation that has been created and now when they'll finally get together I can only imagine the fireworks your narrative will light. Shiv ugh my dear Shiv I loved that little tidbit about him, frankly however irrelevant it may be to prerish per se it gave perspective which is obviously so important to understand what drives a certain person.

And finallllyyyyyyyyyy RB I loved how he announced out loud that he's going to be selfish in love, he may think he's going in for some battle but it's not that she wants him just as much. At this juncture though I have to say Im more excited for Prerna's actions, she's the one whose surrounded by all these norms that she's very willingly made a part of herself so to see her getting rid of these is going to give me so much satisfaction. I caaaannnttttt wait for itttt!

UPDATE QUICKLY PLEASE

Thank you so much.. I have struggled with this update so much that I have cried. But this review is worth it. I'm happy you liked it..

Thank you so much once again.

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

To find a cure. To challenge the Gods. To realign the bloody stars if that's what it takes to make her never leave my side."

Yes yes yes yes yes yes

P.s She remembers his head bent over his laptop or i-pad, while he distractedly shoved food into his mouth. No one had slipped him food when he wasn't looking. No one fussed over him

This made me sad very sad.

This part broke a part of me too. I was struggling to write this because I was becoming so emotional.

Thank you so much for reading this.

I loved, loved the update. I liked the portion where Shiv comes, his character has more depth now. But what moved me the most was the part with Prerna and then of course the one with Bajaj. I loved how she remembers that no one ever pampered Bajaj, and that entire scene and how you depicted it, how the laughter around her reminds her of the solemnity that Bajaj lived through, it's amazing.

And I love how Rishabh expresses his feelings, though a little poetic but I loved it. Update soon!

Very nice update!

I love you. And I bloody love your story.

This update was a bliss specially last line. Shiv as usual my sweetheart, boyfriend can go to hell and prerish they required this distance to clear out things😊

Awesome 👏

Please update soon