Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 48

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: swaasp

part - 17

nice update

why riya was in depression before? because of mohit? or am I forgetting something? 🤔

I'm ready for sequel pls write

beautiful gif 😍

thanks for the pm

There more to Riya's back story and it will be too long if I'd add in the story. I will let it surface sometime if I get a chance to slip some words in btw though. And no, you didn't forget anything 😊

Thank you so much for liking and commenting 😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: KaziRume

Awesome Update.

Thanks Razia🤗

So, it was the Mohit who brought the flowers. Though everything is over, he's behind Riya even now!

Unrequited love🤪

From when Rathore become so open with Riya!! He shared his true feelings just when Riya asked! Strange

Rathod is still a bit complex character as he was bound to do such things. He always adored Riya like Chotu said. There were situation that brought this rift. But he is still the same mentor she always had.

A little bit from the past. Seriously I have so much anger for Arjun & Rathore! How Arjun couldn't say in Riya's favour but make a irony status like this!! Was he so enraged?? And how could Rathore bring Riya's past mental trauma! At first I thought he tried his best to guard Riya but not, he brought the biggest issue which broke Riya beyond repair & made her like this! He should give an explanation for this act.

Again I would say he was bound his duty. His reasons will be more clear in the upcoming chapters. And about Arjun, he will say it himself !

Liked how Riya gave back the answers to Commissioner.

This woman wont listen any nonsense thrown at her onwards 😎

Oh! ACP you're burning with jealousy but I'm enjoying it😆

They say jealously is the first sign of love. Is it?? 🤣

Really, the gif is so beautiful. I wanted to say this before, seeing it in your signature but forgotten. And can you Please make another gif like this on Coffee Scene where we saw the first little smile of Arjun with any teammate ? If not, no problem. Sorry for another request😳

I am on a spree making stuff on Ariya 🤪I am glad to get a good quality vid for the gif. In reality I am not getting more of ariya scene from YT due to this copyright rules or something 😳 If you can help me with some videos I will make a gif.

Please don't end this story in hasty. I want to see more of them in this story.

How the story will end had been decided from the beginning. So there is no haste.

Regarding sequel, I am always ready to read your stories. But please try to complete the other stories too.

And the seq is no new plan. I'd just change the writing style and that's all.

At last, Thank You so much for the PM.

Try to update soon. Eagerly waiting.

Thank you so much for the reply darling 😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

thanks for PM me dear🤗

awesome chapter

finally the past revel

poor riya had to face inquiry for shoting arjun😭

she became culprit in front of everyone it was horrible moment for riya🥺

they even asked abt her treatment😡

all these just shattered riya that's why she left ETF🥺

oops arjun is jealous that riya have boyfriend

awe sameer accepted his feeling for aisha in front of riya😊

continue plz

Thank for the reply dear 😊😊😘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Another amazing update ! ❤️

Thanks Tasnim🤗

I'm now loving this more as the past is unveiling with each update and things are getting clearer.

I worried if its getting too slow, but now i am kinda sure that the pace is fine. All thanks to you 😳

I always thought Rathore as Riya's mentor must have tried help her out six years back. But this update proves me wrong. smiley28 I'm so disappointed with Rathore. smiley21 But I truly admire the thoughts he holds for Aisha. He sees her as a strong woman and treats her as an equal. Both Aisha and Rathore must be lucky to have each other. 😃

He was always the one she looked out for but then duty demands other despicable things and he had to act upon. 🤔

Arjun was blinded by anger I understand. But I was expecting him to keep personal issues aside and think rationally for once. 😒

Emotions sometimes become too heavy to let you think rationally. His perception about it is on the way. 😃

And it was so wrong of the inquiry panel to dig up Riya's past and use it against her. 😡 I loved the way Riya answered the commissioner. 😎 I am in love this no nonsense Ri. 😈

Well yeah. Even me too😎

Oh I love this jealous ACP. 🤣 He is going to have a hard time handling the green eyed monster inside him.

🤣🤣🤣

Waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully we will get to see things with Arjun's eye in the next chapter. I want to know what was going on in his mind when fingers were being pointed at Riya.

There will be. But I am not sure if it will act accordingly or even rationally 😵Arjun being "aag babula" always😡

Continue soon.


If possible , please try not to rush this story. 😭 I love to read this version of Ariya.

No dear I wont rush this story😉

And if you are planning for a sequel then I'm already in.


Thanks for adding me to your pm list. 😳

Thanks again for the lovely reply🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome Update..


Love it..


Oh..I just love the line.. everyone is afraid to loose something or someone..

But isn't that true?😃

Is it possible that Arjun is afraid to loose Riya..?n did this all to her..?n Sam is also involved with him..?

It is possible. You have to wait till Arjun is more open about his reasons.

I mean see someone involved media into this..Arjun n Sam could easily handle them.

as Riya think Sam could support Arjun like he support in Pathan lala case..


But it's look like that they both wanted this..or Arjun want this..

I see a great point in hare👍🏼

I don't know maybe just poor guess..


ACP u r really jelious of the Riya's ex bf..


By the way Jaise Riya apne bf ke bare me Soch rahi he..I really hope he didn't turn into psycho lover..

He's either a devdas or Majnu. I will let you guys decide 🤣

N Riya too have some past here..she was in depression..n all this bring Infront of her senior by Sam. ?

It was only brought out that she had issues with depression. Nobody knows what issues.

Please continue soon


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Thanks for reply 😘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shannusjs

Thanks for pm

Superb update

Continue soon

Thank you so much dear for replying🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Thanks again for the reply 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Past was drastic

They didn't trust her n also made her stand as criminal in court n in front of public

No wonder she turned this cold

She shouldn't forgive them soon at alllll

A very very long way to go for them

Hated arjun's arrogance n rathore in trial n hospital

How can they expect her to be normal now???

I really hate both of them now, com sir, raghu sir also

Can't wait for the moment when she proved herself innocent n came out of this mess n her seniors reaction

Awesome update

Loved it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part -15

Nice update

Riya is badly hurt because of Arjun😭😭😭

I just hope everything will settle down between them. They both are suffering. Riya 's tough outlook is only a facade she is hurt and she is in pain beyond imagination.

Feeling like hitting Arjun 😡😡

How could he do that how he didn't trust Riya.

Flashback was heart breaking how Arjun was not listening to Riya for once.😭

I think Arjun himself bought the flowers for Riya but still he is not being very expressive and verbal about his action.

I was literally crying while reading the story. Its so heart breaking and full of emotions.😭


Looking forward to updates...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm..

Sorry for the late comment.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part16

Loved it.

The flashback😭

So The Flowers were not from Arjun😒

Sakshi😡

lieutenant is really Riya's boyfriend or ex boyfriend.

Ha ha Arjun n his curosity🤣

Continue soon...

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