PreRish One-Shot : ~|Forever|~ (26/8/19) - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Grey-licious

When you said that line 🙄

Btw waiting for your comment

I’m not with u dear 😆😆

I’m with nekiiiiiiiii 😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

First of all get well soon.

Next the update was wonderful. Tie selection line was lovely

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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Why did you label this a kachra? 😆

It's so good. I loved how RB sorted the whole mess in no time and even went to apologize. Veena's thankless conduct irked me. I guess that's what's going to happen in the show. 🤔

Glad to read Prerna finally intervening and taking her husband away from her mother as well as those two schemers. The dialogues in the Prerna-Mehra part were funny. Poor guy got scolded for obeying his stubborn boss who wouldn't budge. 😆

Lastly, Prerna suggesting a yellow tie was so cute.

because I really don't know what I've written....I've wrote this while sneezing so much 🤧

Yeah they're faltu Mai dragging it when there's nothing and police didn't even came to check him and take his statement ...heights!!!! 🤦

Veena is not going to accept him so easily

Thank you for your comment

M glad you liked it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: rmahi25

Bimari mein humein treat de rahi ho tum aur isse kachra bol rahi...Burbak bacchiIss jurm Mei Veena ke saath band krdenge tumhe hum sabhii...🤣

Jokes aside...The dialogues were Bang on dear and they had some real deep meanings hidden inside it❤️...It was lovely treat to read!!!

Main aapko kabhi nhi chodhungi dialogue & that whole scene is something I would like to watch☺️☺️It would be so deep & intense.

The sindoor sceneI hope he was watching her in the exact same way he did in the lift scene in Swiss..

And Mehta baby😆& her banter was amazing....

In short I loved it!!!!

I really don't know what I wrote , even a thought came in my mind to post or not to post then I thought chod dekha jayega post karde

I think I should write only when I'm beemar dialogues ache nikalte hai

Thank you so much

M glad you loved it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Amazing....Too good .....LOVED IT....❤️

Bajaj ki dhamakedaar entry 😎,Maasi & tanvi ka popat .....🤣

Prerna toh bilkul wife mode me thi ,Bajaj & Kuki scene....❤️,And at last color cordination,yellow-yellow matching....

Pls do write more...🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: shahijazz

Amazing....Too good .....LOVED IT....❤️

Bajaj ki dhamakedaar entry 😎,Maasi & tanvi ka popat .....🤣

Prerna toh bilkul wife mode me thi ,Bajaj & Kuki scene....❤️,And at last color cordination,yellow-yellow matching....

Pls do write more...🤗

Thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Grey-licious

I really don't know what I wrote , even a thought came in my mind to post or not to post then I thought chod dekha jayega post karde

I think I should write only when I'm beemar dialogues ache nikalte hai

Thank you so much

M glad you loved it

LoL. Take care jaldi thik hoo!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Just mindblowing story and how can you say this garbage matlab khuch bhi I totally enjoyed reading your stories on prerish I must say you are very talented yaar 👏👏 I wish cvs visits our forums and learn something our great and talented writers to how to write beautiful stories on prerish

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

It was soo good..❤️

I love how Bajaj went and explained the situation at court ❤️ The way the police were reprimanded for arresting Veena without his testimony 👍🏼

The Prerna Rishab Bajaj and her authoritative stand was the best part of this OS. I love this Prerna who is concerned abt her husband’s health and well being ❤️❤️

Veena MaTa and other gang less said better..😔

Awe the kuki and daddy reunion was so sweet❤️👎🏼

Finally the yellow Tie AAP pe achhi lagegi .. haayee 😳😳😳

Too good ..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Surbhi123

Just mindblowing story and how can you say this garbage matlab khuch bhi I totally enjoyed reading your stories on prerish I must say you are very talented yaar 👏👏 I wish cvs visits our forums and learn something our great and talented writers to how to write beautiful stories on prerish

And take care of your health dear and get well soon also

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