Kalma os jealousy another version

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guyz I am back again so this is my new version of jealousy here some one suggest me to make it so I am here hope you enjoy plus it is not connected to my previous kalma os jealousy which has 3 parts if will be different totally


Kalyani was in her college with her best friend priyanka who suggest to go to some restaurant for some fun both girls leaves from college and reach the restaurant near the college they both were enjoying and gossiping when Kalyani gets the biggest shock of her life she was burning with jealousy and anger she just want to kill that girl yes it was malhar with a hot and beautiful girl she was hugging him and they both were continuously talking and laughing with each other she was shocked that he is always reserve type person he never even gets so close with her and here he is doing this to investigate the matter further she decided to call him she dials his number

Malhar: hello kalyani kya hoa ??

Kalyani: ap kaha hai malhar ji is waqt ap kahan hai ???

Malhar: yaadshat chali gayi hai kya tumhra ma to police station ma ho dekho kalyani AGR koi kaam nhi hai to ma phone rkh RHA ho bye

With this malhar cuts her call she was hurt more than hurt she feels anger and jealousy that how dare any gril to come so close to him she was getting worried when priyanka call her

Priyanka : kya kalyani kya hoa hai tujhe?? Abhi tak to tum bikul theek thi ab achnk aisa face kyun banaya hai yar

Kalyani: wo dekh samne wali table pa tujhe khud samjh a jaye ga

Priyanka: what?? Mujhe to meri eyes pa believed nhi ho RHA humare singham sahab kse larki ka sath WO bhi itni hot aur beautiful

Kalyani: ma na phone kiya tha malhar ji pta hai jhoot bol ka kat diya malhar ji isliye pareshan hon malhar ji mujhe sa kabhi jhoot nhi bolte kuch samjh nhi a RHA

Priyanka: wese kalyani tu bura mat mana likin aj kal ki larkiyan bohat chalak hoti hai kse ka bhi peche par jati hai aur phir tere malhar ji hai hi itne handsome ka koi bhi larki mar mite tujhe nhi lagta tujhe careful hona chaiye

Kalyani: par ab ma kya Karon?? Tumna dekha na ka kase Hans Hans ka os churail sq baatein kar rhe hain dekh kar lagta hai purani jaan pehchaan hai

Priyanka: pagal mun kya dekh rhi hai??chalo kareeb ja kar baaten sunte hain tab pta chale ga yeh madam kaun hai aur malhar ji sa kya rishta hai oska chal

Priyanka and Kalyani hides behind the pillar and try to listen the talk between malhar and girl

Girl: malhar wese ma na suna tumhri shadi ho gayi hai dobara wese how mean you are hum bachpan ka dost hai best friend phir bhi tum na mujhe consider nhi kiya

Malhar: tum hi to London chali gayi thi riya phir ma kya karta itne saalon baad mili ho tum aj sab kuch itna jaldi hoa ka tume invite nhi kar pta so sorry

Riya: theek hai baba likin ab mera kya ??? Ma to abhi bhi single hi hon tumhre liye ??bachpan sa tumhi mere crush ho yaad hai tume humna college ma kitne maze kiye aik sath

Malhar: mujhe aik aik pal yaad hai college ka WO bhi kya din the khair tum ab mil hi gayi ho to ati jati rehna police station mujhe sa Milne

Riya:why not ?? Aurangabad ka singham sa Milne kyun nhi aon gi mq khair chalo mujhe der ho rhi hai kahi Jana hai baad ma milte hon

Malhar: ma drop kar don riya jate hoe

Riya: I know ka tume kaam hoga police station ma tum jaon ma chali jaon GI

Diya gets up and gives a tight hug to malhar malhar also holds her she wishper bye and leaves here kalyani was watching the whole drama with priyanka while hiding she was burning with anger her whole face was red she just want to break the teeth of riya and kill her malhar also leaves from there both priyanka and kalyani leaves Kalyani comes back to home she was thinking about the restaurant scene whole day the images of them both together was not leaving her mind she was thinking how to tackle the matter after all diya was malhar' best friend they both have same age and malhar was her crush from college time and while talking with each other in restaurant they both were so comfortable she spent whole day thinking about them when malhar comes back from police station he saw her lost and quiet she was serving him dinner without saying a single word her silence was bothering him he was confused with her change behavior its like she was ignoring him for some reason after dinner he was continuously waiting for her in room and she was bz in talking with mayi as there was no sign of her coming back to room after 2 hours of waiting finally she comes back he decided to talk to her he calls her

Malhar: Kalyani kab sa wait kar RHA hon ?? Tume kya hoa?? Ma dekh RHA hon jab sa ma aya hon tum na mujhe sa koi baat nhi ki ?? Tum mujhe ignore kar rhe ho kya ??

Kalyani: apko kya hai ?? Malhar ji mujhe bohat kaam hai mujhe sone den ma thak gayi hon bohat kal baat Karen gen

Malhar angrily pinns her to wall and holds her from shoulders he tightly holds her and make her look in his eyes

Malhar: tum kahi nhi jaogi pehle mere baat ka jawab do phir so Jana likin AGR nhi dogi to ma sone nhi donga

Kalyani: yeh kya batamezi hai malhar ji ap hote kon mujhe order dene wale mujhe choren warna ma shor macha don gi sab a jayen gen yahan

Malhar: ma kon hota hon Kalyani seriously ??? Ma tumhra pati hon aur tum patni ho meri aur Jo shot machine ki baat kar rhe ho tum to machao jee bhar ka likin koi nhi ayega pati patni ka mamle ma

Kalyani: to phir khare rahe yahi pori raat ?? Kyun ka mujhe apsa koi bhi baat nhi karne na ma koi jawab don gi apko

Malhar: Kalyani mere gusse ko barhao mat mere sabar ka imtihaan mat lo is sa pehle ma kuch ghalat kar behton gon

Malhar comes again so close to her they both were breathing heavily there were thousands of emotions in their eyes for each other she pushes him away but he was too storng for her he she again pushes him with full force and try to run he catches her hand they both fall on bed she try to gets up and he pulls her on him

Malhar: meri baat ka jawab do kya hoa hai ??

Kalyani: sune ka bohat shauq hai na apko malhar ji ma btati ho kya hoa aj ma aur priyanka college ka baad restaurant gaye the aur pta hai wahan hum na kya dekha wahan ma na apko aik larki ka sath dikha jo apki bahon ma thi apka sath chipak rhe the yaad aya apko kuch

Malhar: WO to riya thi mere best friend college time sa aj kafi daalon baad ose mulaqat hoe aur kya MATLAB hai chipakne sa tumhra ??

Kalyani: sab samjhti hon ma apko aj WO gale mil rhe the kal WO police station aye gi aur phir parson WO ghar himmat kase hoi oski apka hath pa karne ki aur free hone ki apka sath sab dekha ma na apni ankhon sa aur kitne asani sa jhoot bola na apne phone pa ka ap police station ma hai mujhse

Malhar: WO to riya chahti thi ka mere sath thora time spend karna oska kehne pa jhoot kaha tha ma na warna ma tume sach hi btane wala tha aur ma kyoun chipakon gi oska sath bacha nhi hon

Kalyani: han ma hi jhoot bol rhi hon ap to hmesha sahi kahte hai sab samjh ata hai mujhe

Malhar: Kalyani tum abhi bhi bachi ho tum galat samjh rhi ho tume kyun aisa lag RHA hai

Kalyani: sahi kaha ma bachi hon na isliye ap mujhe pasand nhi karte isliye shayd ap kabhi bhi mujhe sa pyaar nhi kar sken gen aur WO riya WO madam to apki same age hai apki best friend Jo apko sab sa behtar tareeke sa samjhti hai ma to apki life ma sirf aik samjhota hon aik aise larki jisma sirf bachpana hai Jo sirf galtiyan karti hai jise kabhi ap apni patni maan hi nahi paye kya kami hai mujhe ma akhir

Malhar: bus bohat sun li ma na tumhri bakwas riya sirf meri dost hai aur kuch nhi aur tum meri patni ho aik keench ka lagaon ga na to dimag jaga pa a jaye ga tumhra aur kya raat lagayi hai ka ma tume pasand nhi karta ya pyaar nhi karta Kalyani meri ankhon ma dekho kya tume apna chehra dekhyi nhi deta jis trh ma tumsa pyaar karta hon Jo tumhre liye feel karta hon WO ma kabhi bhi kse aur larki ka liye feel nhi kar skta

Kalyani: acha to phir ap apni dost sa kah den ka dosti theek hai likin aj ka baad ap ose hug nhi Karen gen na WO apko choe gi ap sirf mere hain kalyani ka malhar ji ap pa sirf mera haq hai kalyani rane ka apki patni ka

Malhar: bol don ga ma ose madam kuch aur kehna hai to WO bhi kah do

Kalyani: nhi kuch nhi likin malhar ji aj ka baad dobra ap mujhe sa jhoot nhi brespon aur aj ka baad ap kse larki ki trf nhi dekhen gen warna ap ko mera to pta hi hai

Malhar: bus kar do Kalyani sab kah dua tum na likin yeh nhi bola saaf saaf ka I love you

Kalyani: malhar ji ap khud samjh jayen mujhe kehne Ki need kya hai

Malhar: han yeh bhi hai

Malhar kiss on her forehead then on lips she blushes he kiss on her neck and back he removes the duppta she was gettng all red like a newly wed bride he removes her clothes and his they make love to each other and lay down in each other arms he pulls her closer they both sleeps in each other arms holding each other close


This is it shower you're love by commenting and liking plzzzz hit the button of like and do comments I will be waiting for youre comments

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank You so much for considering my idea! This is beautiful. Kalyani kaise jal uthi. ACP sahab ko to bahut jalte hua dekha, Kalyani ki bari thi ab. You explored Kalyani's emotions perfectly. Malhar also explained it nicely and no misunderstanding was created between them. Love them. Please keep writing 👍🏼

BTW what is your name? #Just asking

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

It's totally different from os jealousy

Loved it

Do write more

Edited by Dk26 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome dear 👏

Jealous and angry kalyani loved to read

And angry and caring malhar

Feels fresh to read

Write more and more

Ek tu hi hai sahara os ka🥳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much for the comments

And you ask about my name many people knew it already my name is savira

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: bb14

Thank you so much for the comments

And you ask about my name many people knew it already my name is savira

Hello savira Di, I am Neera.....

Your all writing are very good. I love them..

Now about this os

Di I love jealous Kallu ik din Mallu ko bhi jala degi.. Dono pagle hai...

Di it's a request can you plz add your all os to the index on the main forum...

It will be good for all readers

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey thanks for suggestions on you're request i give the link of my all os and ff in thread you guys now easily read it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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wowww its lovely one

do write more

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