Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 24

Fantastic update.....I've just about finished reading your FF and the next update came thru....

The vision of RB you have painted with your story is very compelling....I would have liked to see this in the show but alas...no worries we have your story to fall back on to fulfill our dream RB...

I absolutely loved this story from the moment I started reading it....and till this recent update i'm not disappointed...I can honestly say this is THE BEST story till now....the characterization of Rishabh Bajaj is wonderful....there's always a reason behind his every move....big or small....I especially liked that small bit where Prerna blurts out she's on her period and he arranges a hot water bag and tea for her the next instant....and now this ice-cream scene....

The only thing I didn't like in this entire story is the way he said he's not intending to be faithful to the marriage but I guess I have to expect something like this with someone like RB....Just a small request....please keep any description of his infidelity to a minimum if you are planning to write such things...I know the world is not an ideal place and such things happen with increasing regularity but still...Just keep them to a minimum if possible...

Hoping to see the first glimmers of romance between them in the near future....He is not unaffected by her....but Prerna....she has a long way to go yet....

thanks for this master-piece....If ever your laziness threatens to overcome you...just remember you have a horde of dedicated readers eagerly awaiting your updates here....always...❤️

I was waiting desperately for your update - Yay! Thank you this was beautiful.This story is a slow burn and I love your writing. RB is trying his best to be nonchalant and not care for Prerna but he is so adorably sweet - from giving her the option to stop the wedding to deferring to her about the tooth fairy, to protecting her from the vindictive Basus and cheering her up with ice cream...he is already half in love with her...Please do continue to update.

Ummm

I forgot how to breathe😳 let me breathe in and remember tobreathe out. Phew!

What a stunning fantabulously fantastically overwhelmingly terrific update!🤡

Your bajaj is so sophisticated, graceful and comanding that I ccould feel a shiver of excitement vibrating within depths of my core.

That clause regarding discreet infidelity was icy hot. His aloofness and penchant for reality bestows to his personality a charm so seducing that is beyond my comprehension.

The way he brushes off basu gang is just as sharp as his wit. To the point and prickly.

Imagine my surprise when his night abruptly expires owing to a certain someone's pain!

Finally, i've run out of every fancy word and adjective decent enough to praise your writing. Kindly take me your pupil!😵

Pretty please~

Omg omg happy tears thanks so much for this long update.. I thought u abandoned this story and won't be providing update..

Glad to see this long update.. Such elegantly crafted so amazing... Thoroughly enjoyed it.. There's a dreamy feel to your writing..

This line was my favourite

Be Mrs. Prerna Bajaj.” He said, winking at her, that impertinent dimple popping up in his cheek

Rishabh is so cute but trying to be tough.. He took her to ice cream parlor awieee.. Such a naughty..

Thanks so much looking forward to next update take ur time am sure wait would be worth it.. 😇

WHAT A UPDATE!!! So glad to have read Sabyasachi's name in those lines🤣 these characters are Kolkata based hence it's only fair she's a Sabya bride (also with all the blatant plagiarism Ekta mata's costume designer has done you've given credit haha) Now I can visualise the aesthetic in my head makes my toes curl with excitement I love vibe he creates! The organza, the plunging necklines, the deeeeeeply kohled eyes, the absolutely chapta hair not a single one out of place and those chokers.... Such a dream! ANYHOW since that fangirling is out of the way GOSH THIS UPDATE WAS SO LONG ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! There's only one bully love me some big bad RB someone bring him back to the show. AAAAHHH I read some hints of the early banter so excited can't wait! Also the fidelity clause of their marriage cant wait to read what you come up with, Prerna's still much younger I wonder how she's going to deal with her jealousy.

I absolutely loved how sharp Nivi is with her insults,I hate how they turn her into a screeching banshee on telly, it's such an insult what they're doing to her. Please update soon sooner soonest I cant wait to read the developing understanding between these two. So excited for when she'll become her own shield and won't even need him for her battles.

Breathtaking!

I read the whole update as soon as you uploaded it and even hours later the trance refuses to abandon me.

I liked how you covered the some details in a swift yet convincing manner and provided a larger room to the rest. The conversation regarding the clause dealing with sexual relations was damn intriguing. Prerna's reaction was pretty much expected and in deep consistency with her character. Mr Bajaj's take, however, was unexpected and almost looked like the revelation of an unseen layer. It would be interesting to see for how long Prerna remains indifferent to his night-life and bears his physical infidelity while also dealing with her own physical needs.

RB taking on the inhabitants of the Basu Zoo is always a delight to read.

The last part made my eagerness gush like crazy. He's finally getting affected.

Please update soon!

Shruti

Sohaa... You're the best!

Longer comment to follow. I have to wake up at 5:00 tomorrow. And damn, I couldn't put it down. I have no willpower when it comes to your updates..😭

Reserved. Will get back to this soon

Read it finally. IT Refund 🤣 Shit crazy. It makes me happy that you actually write some technical stuff. On the whole I liked it. Though, the last haunting bit I still can't understand. Maybe coz I don't see that Chemistry in the show and Prerna sort of falls short and seems cold like some ice queen 😆 But great update. There was a time when you updated 2-3 chapters a day and here we are one chapter in more than a week. I'd say, it's a great improvement t.

So I just spent the entire morning reading this from beginning to update and when I realized in my hurry to read I hadn't liked all your updates, I went back and liked every single one. What can I say that hasn't already been said or shared by others on this thread? You have a magical way with words, your imagery is vivid and your characterizations are beautiful. A Prerna who works and emphasizes her education? Mind boggling - Ekta clearly doesn't know her! A Bajaj that is equal parts frustrating and sexy, PHEW we bow down! I love the way you wrote the falling apart of AnuPre's relationship, as their relationship has always had a very shaky foundation. The way it came undone with Bajaj's presence only proved how little of value AnuPre share in their relationship. The eventual PreRish marriage and Rishabh's now slow reluctance at being attached to Prerna, so well done! Thank you for this story, I am eagerly awaiting your updates. You've got me hooked!