Kirayedarniji // Hanita OS

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Posted: 4 years ago

Okay, I'll admit it this time, my OS titles aren't creative at all. 😆 This OS is a little scene that's set just before Friday's precap. I've tried a new narrative style this time, this is pure dialogue moving the story ahead. Hope you like it!

KIRAYEDARNIJI

"Woh Bhuli Dastaan me aapka bohot, bohot swagat hai! Kya main aap ka naam jaan sakta hoon?"
"Ji, main Makaanmalik bol raha hu."
"Makaanmalikji, kaise ho aap? Bade dino baad call kiya hai aapne. Waise ek baat bataiye, Kirayedarniji ne aapke liye message bheja tha Chandigarh, woh mil gaya aap ko?"
"Ji mil gaya manne unka message."
"Aap ne jawaab nahi diya unko?"
"Are bhai, yo kaise sawaal pe sawaal puche jaa rahe ho aap manne aise? Radio show chal raha hai ya police investigation?"
"Achha chaliye, thik hai. Kirayedarniji ko hi message dena hai na aapko? Toh bataiye, kya message hai aap ka? Or konse gaane ki farmaish karna chahenge aap?"
"Farmaish toh na hai koi, gaana woh aap tay karke bajaa dijiyega. Bas ek message de dijiye."
"Ji kahiye?"
"Kirayedarniji ko ek baat puchni thi manne. Actually baat aisi hai, mhari ek haveli hai, jaha pe Kirayedarniji kiraye pe rehti hai. Ib manne lagte hai ki mhare iss haveli ko ek Makaanmalkin ki jarurat se. Toh Kirayedarniji ko mera sawaal tha ki..."
"Arre, aap ruk kyu gaye? Please continue, apna message toh pura kijiye!"
"Ji woh Kirayedarniji ko puchna tha ki woh iss Makaanmalik ki Makaanmalkin banengi ke?"
"Makaanmalikji, aap ka ye sawaal Kirayedarniji tak pohochana toh bohot jyada jaroori hai! Koi baat nahi, aap ka message hum abhi ke abhi unko de denge."
"Aur unse yo bhi kehna ki agar yo sawaal karne se mhare se agar koi gustakhi ho gayi ho toh woh maaf ho, please."
"Ji, bilkul. Toh doston, Makaanmalikji  ke iss cute aur innocent sawaal ko Kirayedarniji tak pohochane ke liye yeh gaana pesh hai!"

Aankhon Ki Gustakhiya Maaf Ho.
Ek Tuk Tumhe Dekhati Hain.
Jo Baat Kehna Chahe Juban,
Tumse Ye Woh Kehati Hain.
Aankhon Ki Sharmohaya Maaf Ho.
Tumhe Dekh Ke Jhukati Hain.
Uthi Aankhe Jo Baat Na Keh Saki,
Jhuki Aankhe Wo Kehati Hain.
Aankhon Ki Gustakhiya Maaf Ho.

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"Woh Bhuli Dastaan me aapka bohot, bohot swagat hai! Kya aap hume aap ka naam bataa sakte hai?"
"Main Kirayedarni bol rahi hu."
"Kirayedarniji! Welcome to our show! Kahiye, Makaanmalikji ke sawaal ka jawaab dena chahti hai aap?"
"Bilkul nahi."
"Ji, matlab?"
"Dekhiye, Gauravji, ab aap hi mujhe bataiye, Makaanmalikji ne jo sawaal pucha hai, woh koi aise radio pe puchne wala sawaal hai kya? Aise kaise jawaab de doon main? Unhe agar jawaab chahiye toh yahan mere saamne baat karein. Lekin nahi, saamne aate hi unke muh pe toh taala lag jata hai. Aise thodi chalega!"
"Kirayedarniji, baat toh ekdum barabar hai aapki."
"Haan toh aap unse keh dijiye ki iss baar toh gustakhi maaf hai. Lekin agar unko apne sawaal ka jawaab chahiye, toh khud mere saamne aake khade rahein aur apna sawaal puchein."
"Ji bilkul! Toh doston, Kirayedarniji ki iss shikayat pe yeh gaana pesh hai!"

Chhuteya na chhute mose,
Rang tera dholna.
Ek tere baajon dooja
Mera koi mol na.
Bol na, mahi, bol na.
Bol na, mahi, bol na.
Tere sang hasna main,
Tere sang rona.
Tujh mein hi rehna main,
Tujh mein hi khona.
Dil mein chhupa ke tujhe
Dil nahiyo kholna.
Marke bhi mahi tose, muh na modna.
Bol na, mahi, bol na.
Bol na, mahi, bol na.

...

"Manne mere ghar ke andar ab koi kirayedar virayedar nahi rakhne. Mere iss ghar ko kirayedar ki jarurat na hai, makaanmalkin ki jarurat hai. Aise kya dekh rahi hai, baawli? Puchle teri mummy ko. Byaah karegi kya mhare se?"

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww it's so cute 😊,lovely dear

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Originally posted by: riti4u

Aww it's so cute 😊,lovely dear

Thank you! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful... Hanita style... 

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Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Beautiful... Hanita style... 

Glad you liked it!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely.

How I wish it would pan out like this!

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Awww this is so cute 🤗. Totally imagine this happening 

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Originally posted by: Padmajaan

Lovely.

How I wish it would pan out like this!

Thank you for the kind words! 🤗

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Originally posted by: LoveInAutumn26

Awww this is so cute 🤗. Totally imagine this happening 

Thank you for the appreciation! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Awww Ghana Sundar sa likha hai tane chhori....

Yo to bilkul apne HanIta estyle proposal ho Gaya se......

Mara to Dil aa Gaya yo propose Karne k tarike se....kas koi manne b aise propose karta....

Kahase aise dhai kark ideas ate hai tanne chhori.....

Sun le chhori iska agla bhag to tanne likhna he padega...

Fes to fes proposal chahiye mahre ko sirf aur sirf babes aur uncle ka Minni b na chahiye Bich me ...

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