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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Part 5

Physiotherapist comes in the evening. He is very good doctor. He tells certain exercises for improvement of Kalyani. Malhar records exercises so that he can conduct them further. Doctor gives assurance to Kalyani that you will be able to walk on your feet. Malhar goes to drop doctor.

Outside he asks-" Aap sach sach bataiye mujhe ke Kalyani kab theek hogi. Aapne andar Kalyani ke samne to keh diya lekin aap mujhe sach bata sakte hai. Please bataiye na ki ye kab theek hogi".

Doctor- are Mr. Rane aap chinta mat kijiye. sab kuch theek hoga. Aur main jhooti tasalli nahi de raha hoon..Mrs. Rane ki improvement dekh ke hi bol raha hoon. She has very strong will power. So don't worry

Malhar- Shukriya doctor

At night Malhar comes to room with soup and roti sabji. Kalyani is irritated to eat poli bhaji. She makes disappointing face. Malhar understands her and says I know Kalyani ke tumhein bore feel ho raha hai..Lekin abhi ke liye please ye khao. Baad mein tumhein ice-cream dunga. Maine doctor se permission li hai. Don't worry.

Kalyani blinks her eyes happily. Malhar feeds her with love. He then feeds Moksh khichdi (Kalyani se recipe li hoti hai usne) and eats poli bhaji himself. Then he brings ice-cream and both enjoys (though Malhar catches cold early, he eats for her happiness)

Kalyani is little bit bored so Malhar plays rap songs for her; but she is not happy. She says in broken voice o..old. Malhar understands that she wants to hear old songs. He is surprised little bit that her habits changed..He plays aap ki nazron ne, pyaar deewana hota hai, hum dono do premi etc. songs for her. Both enjoys it. Kalyani is little bit relaxed.

Malhar plays Kalyani's raabta song for Moksh and make him sleep..He then gives medicines to Kalyani and make her sleep. He sleeps besides her to help her.

In the morning Malhar checks Kalyani and says sorry Kalyani aaj Police station jaana hoga. Lekin main jaldi aane ki koshish karunga. He feeds her breakfast.

One lady comes and says I will take care of Kalyani during day time. Don't worry I will handle it.

Mai comes and says" Malhar ye sab kya hai. Main rukti hoon na ghar pe."

Malhar- bilkul nahi. Mai main jaanta hoon aapko Kalyani ki bahut fikar hai lekin aap college jaiye aur Kalyani ke liye notes laiye. Aapki padhai bhi important hai.

Palak comes and says ha aunty. Malhar gives camera to Palak and says sare lectures acche se record kar lena. Palak says don't worry jiju. Hum shaam ko Kalyani se milne aayenge

Sarthak kaka comes and says" attendance ki koi chinta mat karo. Maine principal se baat ki hai."

Anupriya hesitantly agrees just for Kalyani's education.

Sampada says Moksh ki chinta mat karo. Main iska khayal rakhungi aur Kalyani par bhi dhyan dungi. Please trust me.

Malhar nods ok and leaves for police station

Edited by Bacillusbadius - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

arre di socho mat post kardo hume bhi padhna hai!!!!!

posted aboveπŸ‘πŸΌ

bear with my writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Ok so I have tried to write scene

bear with me

and continue next partπŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Bohot accha hai bhagya .simple tha aur sundar tha. Bas ab thora intezar karte hai ki koi aur likhta hai ya nhi....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Bohot accha hai bhagya .simple tha aur sundar tha. Bas ab thora intezar karte hai ki koi aur likhta hai ya nhi....

thanks di

aise hi sujhta gaya aur likhti gayi

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

This idea is beautiful

FF aise hi ban jayega if all the scenes are compiled

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

actually sab team k tarah participate kar rahe hai and kisi ek pe finishing ki pressure nhi hai ...moreover i realized humare thought process kitne milte jhulte hai...zara vi offtrack nhoi gaya story .

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

actually sab team k tarah participate kar rahe hai and kisi ek pe finishing ki pressure nhi hai ...moreover i realized humare thought process kitne milte jhulte hai...zara vi offtrack nhoi gaya story .

ha

accha lag raha hai

positive positive feel ho raha hai

AnuYani study is also important

so I thought to address it through this part

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Loving the updates thus far.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

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